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Ateno, the Pinacle of Intelligence

Urbanizzed·5/24/2016, 1:13:11 AM·2 votes·698 views

Hello everyone! I had a thought for an interesting champion design, let me know what you think. I will update everything, depending on opinions and such. On with the design:

Image: Slim and tall man, young adult. Wears a suit that fits his body almost perfectly, covering most of his face, leaving space for just the eyes. Has dark hair, not too long, not too short, styled very... smugly. His suit is also laced with whip-like bionic arms that follow his commands. (Think of Hoka Inumuta from Kill la Kill)

Personality: Very full of himself, but not too talkative. He tends to keep it to himself, as he feels like he is above everyone else. Tends to belittle and patronize everything around him, while greatening himself and his actions. Some line ideas: "Is that the best you can do?" "I assume you think you're ahead due to your lack of intelligence." "I guess you're just as delusional as everyone else who has faced me. Spoiler: They died."

Stats HP: 520 (+82) HP regen: 7 (+1.1) Mana: 320 (+40) Mana regen: 5.5 (+0.8) Range: 550 AD: 57 (+4) Attack speed: 0.66 (+2%) Armor: 19 (+4) Magic Resist: 30 (+0) Movement Speed: 335

Abilities

  • Passive: Keen Eyes

Ateno is always observing his foes from a distance, readying for battle. Every 70/55/40 seconds, 3 key areas will be highlighted on your teams minimap. Walking into the zone and staying in it for 1 second will place a ward that grants vision of that area to your team for 60/90/120 seconds, as well as regenerating 8/12/16% of the capturers missing HP over the next 5 seconds, or until they take champion damage. Only one area can be captured per cooldown.

  • Q: Preparation 60 mana 13/12/11/10/9 seconds

Ateno prepares for battle, gaining 15/20/25/30/35% movement speed for 2/2.5/3/3.5/4 seconds. His next auto attack will deal 20/45/70/95/110 (+0.35 AP) bonus magic damage, and has 150 extra range.

  • W: Unparalleled Intelligence 80 mana 11/10/9/8/7 seconds

Passive: Atenos bionic arms hit the target of his auto attacks, dealing (0.2 AP) bonus magic damage.

Active: Atenos arms lash out in a target direction, dealing 60/100/140/180/220 (+0.8 AP) magic damage and slowing any enemies hit by 35% for 0.5/0.75/1/1.25/2 seconds.

Range: 900 Width: Same as Nocturne's Q (can't find the units anywhere) Speed: 1500

  • E: Analyze 60 mana 16 seconds

Ateno takes interest in an enemy champion for 2/3/4/5/6 seconds. If they use any ability during this time, Ateno will pinpoint its weakness and deal 50/80/110/140/170 (+ 0.5 AP) to the caster. This ability is invisible to the enemies and triggers automatically.

Range: 1200

  • R: Abuse their Weaknesses 100 mana 100/80/60 seconds

Ateno channels for 3 seconds, scanning every enemy champion in the area. Enemy champions that stay in this area for 1.5/1/0.5 seconds will be marked. Marked champion will take 250/400/550 (+0.85 AP) Magic damage instantly (perhaps in the form of a mine he plants during the channel?), as soon as the channel ends, regardless of where they are. If Ateno dies during the channel, marked champions take 50/65/80% of the damage instead. Area size: 1800/2400/3000 units from Atenos position (units = radius of the circle around him).

Reccomended Items:

First Buy: item 1056 item 2003 item 3340

Essencial Items:item 3020 item 3165 item 3100

Offensive Items: item 3285 item 3089 item 3135

Defensive Items: item 3116 item 3157 item 3001

Consumables: item 2043 item 2139 item 3462

Thats about it! He's obviously a mid lane mage, and i personally think his kit seems interesting. Let me know what you think!!

[slayer-pantheon-thumbs] Urbanizzed out!

2 Comments

Icewhisp5/24/2016, 4:57:38 AM1 votes

That's a lot of damage on his kit. Analyze seems to be very unhealthy as there are no visual q's to warn you for the damage I get that i may be the point but I personally don't think it's healthy game play. His passive seems pretty fun. Though I could see it giving a jungler a little more sustain. (Perhaps change it to champion, large or epic monster damage Make them at least wait) Though I could see it not being as important. Also I think level 5 e should be 120 not 110 damage. He should trade some damage for some hard cc. Perhaps make his arms do max damage to the first target and bind them for a second and do half damage and apply the slow to everyone else hit.

jr deputy meow5/24/2016, 7:56:10 AM1 votes

i had an ability just like his e on a kit i made a few years ago

the one you've got is unhealthy however first off - they need to be able to see that they're marked second - 6 seconds is too long. it should be much, much lower, closer to sivir's spell shield duration

to compensate you could have it silence afterwards, canceling channels and preventing followup but still allowing the initial ability cast

As for his other abilities, excluding his passive i feel as if they are all rather uninventive and i feel strongly that his ult clashes with the playstyle the rest of his kit seems to be going for - an aggressive, auto attack heavy mage not unlike kayle

his ult, i think, should compliment that playstyle if that's what you're going for

the passive has promise, however

if you don't mind, i would provide my own opinion of how the champion's kit could facilitate the idea i feel you're going for without being bland or unhealthy

his Q, Preparation, could provide a movespeed boost, as it currently does. However, instead of modifying his next auto attack, it could provide a shield that is initially quite small and brief (say, 2 or 2.5 second base duration, scaling up with rank), but after a one second lockout, dealing damage while the shield is up increases its size based on a portion of the damage dealt (against champions and monsters) and prolongs the shield duration. Hard CCs such as stuns would disable the shield after a short delay. This would force Atenos to use the ability premeditatively to get the most value out of it, or otherwise to endeavor to stay out of harm's reach for a second after using it before going in; and his opponent would have an opportunity to pop the shield early or counterplay it if it got too big. It would also give Atenos an idea of when to use his E, since he could be relatively sure that they would try to punish him within one second of casting his Q.

his W could be something that would compliment this aggressive and occasionally kitey playstyle: Upon activation, his bionic arms could lash out at the nearest enemy within a small (let's say 300-450) radius every .5/.45/.4/.35/.3 seconds - prioritizing champions - for the next three seconds, dealing minor damage on each hit and applying a stacking debuff that slows and increases the damage of his next auto attack on them. At a certain number of stacks - say, five - the auto attack's damage would max out and they would be stunned for 1 second when it hit (.5 instead if this happens twice on the same enemy). the damage and slow would seem initially small, but it would probably decimate a single target if he managed to lock them down for an extended time.

I would have to think about how his ult might be changed. passive seems to hit on a cool idea

oh, and just to point this out: for a pinnacle of intelligence he sure can't spell