The Claw of Order

Rio Sanguino·6/16/2015, 7:00:45 PM·3 votes·783 views

Hello all. This is my first time posting a champion concept and my first time posting on the boards in general. So please, feel free to give me feedback on anything that I could have done better.

http://imgur.com/mAIvfGU,lI4sMYE

This is Hue'Ras, the Claw of Order. She is a Voidborn obsessed with everything being in it's proper place. Sometimes, however there are things that have no place and need to be destroyed. Mainly the enemy team.

http://i.imgur.com/lI4sMYE.png

Along with her are her children, the Sons of Order. They are all male because bees. That's my only reasoning behind it.


ABILITIES

Passive -- Claws of Order Hue'Ras calls upon her children in battle. She has a maximum of 3/4/5/6 stacks of Order. By utilizing her stacks of Order, she can empower her abilities.

She gains bonus movement speed based on the amount of stacks she is missing.


Q -- Paralyze/Sons of Order Paralyze: Hue'Ras shoots a stinger filled with a venom that damages and slows the first enemy hit.

Sons of Order: Hue'Ras uses a stack of Order to send one of her children to damage, slow, and bleed the first enemy hit.


W -- Where I Want You Hue'Ras sends out one of her children to scout an area. It will latch on to an enemy champion that passes nearby, giving vision of the unit. She may then activate the ability again to knock the enemy a certain direction and stunning them briefly. If the enemy hits a wall, the stun last longer.


E -- Void Swarm Allies: Hue'Ras children form a protective barrier around an allied champion granting them a shield for a short time. The shield can be strengthened by continuously recasting the spell for more mana and at the cost of stacks of Order.

Enemies: Hue'Ras children swarms an enemy, slowing them and reducing their armor. The spell can be strengthened by continuously recasting the spell for more mana and at the cost of stacks of Order.


R -- Law of Order Hue'Ras children burrow underground until they reach a target area. If there is an enemy in the area, they are knocked up, slowed, and thrown in a random direction. The skill will also chain to other enemies that are in range of the first enemy that was knocked up. The number of enemies affected cannot exceed the number of stacks of Order that Hue'Ras has while casting this spell.


Notes:

Her passive needs to be activated for her Q. So the Q would either have to be toggled between the two forms, or the passive would need to be activated with another button.

The idea for her gaining movement speed upon losing stacks is that she would become lighter, as her children originate from her.

I was told she looks too much like Kha'Zix because of the wings. I'm not completely convinced that that constitutes a complete visual rework though.

She would mainly be a support character, but could probably work well in another lane.

2 Comments

Cthullu Cori6/17/2015, 6:24:41 PM2 votes

Yes. We need more bug champions and I absolutely love bringing bee's into it. All of her ability's make her seem supper fun to play. I want it