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Nhecator, The Void Reaper (Scythe-User)

Jhíη··8 votes·2,062 views
Nhecator, The Void Reaper

Okay, here's my Idea for a new Champ. Well It's nopt perfect, but I think it will fit to all the new champs! Hope that you will enjoy my idea!

Nhecator is an AD Melee Fighter. Primary Role: Fighter Secondary Role: Assassin

(I know, the pic 'n Stuff... Don't pay attention to it. It was just for me, to keep her roles in mind.)

ABILITIES

Q - (Feel the Void)

She will bring her enemies closer to the Void.

Nhecator rams her weapon into the ground/enemy and can dash forward to get closer to the enemy or to escape from them. If the target was marked, the enemy will be slowed for a short duration (Only if She's hitting them with the scythe). It's a short instant dash. - She can escpae with it, or engage into a fight.

W - (Slice)

Known for her addiction to cut through flesh of her enemies, Nhecator will show them, what they should fear. It's like an addiction for the Reaper...

Nhecator swings her scythe around to deal area of effect damage. Only creating a shield that absorbs incoming damage if the target is marked. The shield is based on her Health. ( I don't know how much %, but yeah.)

E - (Mark of the Reaper)

Nhecator wants to see the fear in their eyes. The voices in her head begin to scream, until She hunts her enemies to death.

Nhecator marks her target with the void- energy of her scythe, revealing it and she gains movementspeed while she hunts her target down. The mark will add bonus effects to other spells, if one enemy is marked. /Skillshot

R - (Reaper's Embrace)

_ If the Reaper is smiling, it's already too late._

Nhecator pierces her target with her sycthe dealing massive dmg. If the target is marked, Nhecator is able to teleport a short distance towards her enemy.

Passive: /Working on a new passive!

LORE

(Just a Short thing how she became the Void Reaper, I'LL UPDATE HER LORE ASAP!)

She found the scythe, which was filled with the Power of the void. The Void became one with her, after the girl touched it... That was the time, when the Voices she heard began to call her "Nhecator". She really appreciates the void.

FRIENDS

Malzahar Velkoz

RIVALS

Kassadin

MORE THINGS COMING SOON! Taunts 'n stuff.

17 Comments

SirHeavyScrotum2 votes

My advice would be that she probably needs a lower CD dash if she's going to use that W, so either change the W to fit the mage playstyle the rest of her kit shows or give her ult a reset. But if you do that, you basically have Akali.

Jhíη1 votes

But She's not a mage at all. Her Spells scale on AD, she just has some range with her Abilities to poke a little bit.

I don't like reset ultimate Stuff. Nhecator should be a sinple champ.

Well hm, The Idea with a dash is nice. MAybe we'll add it to her w.

Thanks for your comment!

Arakadia1 votes

The thing is this isn't a really unique design and just a: "Bad Void Reaper guy". Its a cool kit with synergy. But what role she plays doesn't seem to be very clear although she seems like a short range mage. Its cool abilities tho. The passive is literally Vel' Koz's passive basiclly with minor differences. Shes a female kassadin that likes the void basiclly.

EDIT: I see shes a fighter assassin. Her Q's range doesn't make sense if shes a fighter character. The rest of her kit is good but doesn't fit her role. Her W gives her a sheild which is usually put on supports and tanks. Her Q is ranged. Her E gives MS and empowers her abilites. Most other assasin's and fighters like Renekton, Talon, Zed, Kat, Kass, Riven, Yas, Xin Zhao have gapclosers that are non-ultimate abilites. Her ult is her only gap closer. The MS isn't very useful for an assassin. The E should become a gap closer and she needs a new passive that isn'r like velkoz's. Ult ideas would be: AoE ults like Kat, Talon, Ekko, or Kass's ult, High single target ult's that do more damage based on missing health like: Darius, Garen, etc. Or a stat-buffing ult like: Riven's, Aatrox's, Renek, Nasus, or Jax.

Jhíη1 votes

Thanks for your comment.

EDIT: Sorry. But It feel's like you just want to change everything - That means it wouldn't be my stuff at all. We'll change a little bit, but that's it. Not all Assassins/Fighters need to be the same.
I just wrote something down, cuz Mage was wrong, and she isn't a support.
I wrote Fighter, because her Autoattacks aren't ranged, and she has AD scaling. Assassin ist her Secondary ROle, cuz you could play her like one - or you don't and you just go full AD and maye a little bit tanky. Idk idc.

It's just an idea ... and In my opinion, it's good.

Arakadia1 votes

Np, your opinion. I suggest trying to make her lore somewhat different and unique. She seems very ult reliant. Being able to chase someone with her E isn't very useful also in Mid. She needs a gapcloser or make her ult like Diana or Akali's where it can be used often.

Jhíη1 votes

I always update her stuff. And idk what the hell you're talking about. MS isn't useless. Or what's with WW? Chasing Enemies is always fun. And her Q is a dash now, so that should work.

And not anything needs to be unique or different. I mean, I've never seen a champ looking like her, so that's unique. If you don't like her, well that's not rly my problem, I mean I don't like Diana or Akali. :D

And a Unique Lore... What the hell means unique for you, haha. :D I can't make her a God or something, she was a normal girl once, Things happend, and then she became the reaper. We'll se if it's unique, but I don't think so.

Arakadia1 votes

MS is useless in a short lane like mid. For an assasin its not so usefull as they should be using a gapcloser instead.

Her abilites aren't different like Azir or Zyra. She's not different and shes pretty cleche. Notice bearly any champions are similar in lore, kit, or style. She's like a evil kassadin that for some reason is known as the reaper. Illaoi, Kindred, Tahm Kench, Ekko, Azir are all very unique.

Its good shes now not so ult relient and has a gapcloser besides her ult.

Unique lore: Your lore was basiclly shes a normal person who found a magic item. Not very creative. Doesn't sound like you put alot of thought or time into it unlike say.... Lucian's backstory. What does she do? Why is she known as the reaper? Why did she join the League? What is her weapon?? Her story sounds like ezreal: Normal human finds magic item. Or Brand who found a crystal which turned him into Brand. Or lucian who has his relic weapons. What makes her different from other champions? Illaoi has her tentacles, Scarner his spires, Shyvana her dragon form, Kalista her oathborn, or Reksai's tunnels.

Jhíη1 votes

Woah, Wait a sec. You should wait until you know her Lore, havn't updated it yet, cuz I don't have time at the moment.

All that background stuff isn't here yet. Okay? Okay.

Arakadia1 votes

Im just saying based on the short lore you gave us, her kit, her model, and her subtitle, she doesn't appear to be anything different or special. Riot wants to sell, so their gonna give us special, unqiue, and different. We like skins and new champions because their different from what we normally see. We find magic and science fiction cool because its different frrom our world.

Jhíη1 votes

Well, I'll delete this anyways.

ShatteredSkys1 votes

Hey^_^! Here are my thoguhts on Nhectator, The Void Reaper!

Numbers: I don't like to judge concepts based on these or the lack of them but they are INCREDIBLY important for a concept to have. Without numbers I can't tell whether Nhectator is AD or AP, whether she's better off building as a brusier or an assassin or how much she can burst. There are also a lot of an important factors like how long does her silence last? How long does her E last? How much damage does her ult do? What are her scalings or bases? There are just too many factors that are unknown for me to give you a proper review, I know numbers are scary but they are really important. If worst comes to worst copy numbers from pre-existing similar champions.

Passive: One thing that bothered me was the fact she can't actually proc her full passive in one rotation, it works on the next ability so she can only get three off at max. Just thought it was a little weird.

Gameplay: From what I can tell she's an AP bruiser/assassin along the lines of Diana who dives in and murders the a poor squishy. The problem I have with the kit is that it's so reliant on the E to land. Without it Nhectator loses a lot of power; she can't gapclose and she loses all her utility. However if she hits it the target is finished: they're are going to get silenced and then have to deal with a shield. Do you remember when Kassadin had a silence? If you played a mage for the next two seconds you were screwed. Silences are not fun to play against, they take away any outplay potential, that's why Talon, Leblanc and Kassadin lost their silences because it was frustrating to play against. I'm afraid Nhectator has a similar issue in addition to the silence she has a shield so if she ever hits her E her target has absolutely no choice of fighting back.

Lore: It's....lacking to say the least. it's fairly bland and doesn't say much about the character in general. Like why did Nhectator pick up the scythe? what was the scythe doing there? What kind of person is Nhectataor? Why does she appreciate the Void? Etc.

Here are some questions I like to ask to help people with their concepts.

-Why should I play Nhectator over any other champion?

What does Nhectator do that no other champion does? Why should I play her over someone say Diana? Who I feel is very similar. Diana is a lot more reliable, even if she misses her Q she can still gapclose and instagib someone. If the squshies just stand behind the tanks Nhectator has no way of getting to the backline and if she misses she has to wait an incredibly long time to try again while Diana waits a few seconds. While she's reliant on her Q to land she doesn't need it to still put up a fight. In addition once she kills someone she can still continue to use her ult and her passive to deal with the remaining enemies. why should I play Nhectator over Diana?

-Imagine playing your favorite champion in your favorite role in a game against Nhectator.

What do you do? How do you deal with Nhectator? Do you believe she's fair?

Jhíη1 votes

Thanks for your comment! <3 ( You keep writing Nhectator, But Her Name is Nhecator. Only one t xD)

You're right! I'm still working on it!

First, She's Ad. I've forgot to mention it... haha. :D

Gameplay: Yeees, I thought the same. That's why I'm still working on it. I'll reworked the Q completely today, she doesn't has a silence now. She got a new gapcolser, cuz she really needed one. I'll ad a few things, but aaahhh. It's difficult for me haha. :D In german, noo problem. xD

Lore: I just added the short thing... I don't have much time at the moment, but i don't wanted to be like " Nah, not gonna post a short thing about how she came to the void." I'll update her lore asap! <3

And the Questions are nice.

In fact, that I don't like Diana much, .. haha. :D No no, it's okay.

I'll take a moment to answer them for myself.

Your Starchild1 votes

I like this a real lot. :-] Although there is nothing new here, the kit, to me, seems it could work cohesively.

It just seems like theres nothing really unique here to set her apart. Her passive is like a vel koz sort of thing, and silences, no matter what type, are seriously one of the more cancerous types of things in this game. It eliminates the possiblity for counterplay completely. It's why a lot of the single target ones were just removed. (LB, Talon) Only a few special cases remain, and even them, to me, seem arbitrarily out of place.

But it's nice and simple. Expand on the lore a bit, write a story maybe, excite us. :-]

If you have the time, take a look at mine? I won't post an url here unless youll allow me to.

Jhíη1 votes

Thanks for your comment! I really appreciate nice people! >3<

I'm still working on it, i will change her passivem and her Q will be reworked. The Silence isn't there anymore, cuz I felt like "Nah, i hate silences." xD

And yes, I will wirte the Lore asap. I need to work, so.. Don't have time until Weekend.

Sure Send me your stuff.

Your Starchild1 votes

Here is my concept. :-]

http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/9pTblEZM-champion-concept-asteroth-the-dominant-will

And glad I could be nice. I love being nice. I feel we should help people improve each others concepts, while also giving compliments.

Jhíη1 votes

Well, I'm really bad with that Number stuff. Maybe you could help me with her health 'n stuff?

I'm looking at your concept now. :D

Ohh and I updated her Q. xD

Your Starchild1 votes

I actually really suck at numbers. When I do mine, I add ones I 'think' will work. :P

And the q is more in line with her being melee now. :-]

And oh yeah. Might I say the art is spot on. :-]

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