Li Ruin, Modern Ionian and Mistress of the Whip.

Sn0wChas3r··4 votes·2,071 views

“You wanna dance? Good, cause neither do I, but I’d love to wring your neck!” Meet Li Ruan (Artwork Credit goes to Epic Games and the Paragon team) a dancer of the Ionian Dance, an evacuee of the Noxian Invasion and a dweller of Piltover. In-game, a Top-lane/Jungle Bruiser that exploits the range of her whip to kite melee enemies and execute squishy ranged enemies from a safer distance and her passive to zip around the battlefield, though once in a fight, she can struggle to find her way out.

Preface Hi, I'm Snow, I'm new here, being playing league for a good few years now, though that considered probably have clocked more hours that in healthy, and as an avid creator of miscellaneous stuffs woke up this morning surprised that I hadn't delved into this sort of a thing before. This is my first champion design. I have done my best to make everything fair, fun, and fit-in-able, in that it's designed to be something that could just slot into League and not stand out, or at least that's my goal. This being said, there very well may be some contradictions in the story that I missed or some problems in gameplay that I hadn't foreseen. All comments and criticism welcome and appreciated. Enjoy Reading!

**Biography **

Li Ruan (Lie Roo-Arn) was born into a wealthy family of Navori, the birthplace of Irelias unnamed dance, and as were all young girls of the area, forced into dance lessons. Being the tom-boy of the group, there is nothing she could possibly have imagined to be worse, yet always was top of the class, beating out even Irelia. However when the Noxian Invasion reached her province, she was for the first time thankful for the time she was made to waste as a child. Though it wasn’t enough. Her nearest and dearest were slaughtered before her eyes. She escaped Noxious’ grasp weaving through the ranks and stowed away on a ship headed for Piltover. The things here were like nothing she’d ever seen before. The streets, the technology, the people, all memorizing. After having spent some days getting by performing on the streets, she was taken under the wing of a Mr. Medara, who personally crafted Li Ruan’s Plasma-Whip and whom she now serves as a bodyguard, entertainer, and friend. Now dances in her own style; Half Ionian, half her own modern technique that’s designed to make the most out of her favoured weapon and she has never loved her dance as so much.

Abilities

Passive - Extensive Flair

Li Ruan's long whip gives her incredible melee basic attack range (325). Additionally, Li Ruan's first basic attack against an enemy champion or large monster pulls her towards them (10 second cooldown per target).

Q - Whip Crack Target Range 475 | Cooldown 11/10/9/8/7s | Cost 60/65/70/75/80 Mana Li Ruan extends her whip violently in a straight line, dealing 30/50/70/90/110 (+80% Bonus AD) (+10% Targets Current health) damage, slowing the first enemy hit by 20/25/30/35/40% and triggering Extensive Flair.

W - Promenade Target Range Self | Cooldown 14s | Cost 80 Mana Li Ruan gains 25/30/35/40/45% (+15% Bonus AP) Movement speed, immunity to slows and immunity to basic attacks for 2/2.25/2.5/2.75/3 seconds.

E - It Takes Two Target Range 300 | Cooldown 16/15/14/13/12 | Cost 70/75/80/85/90 Mana Li Ruan hones in on an enemy champion or monster for 4 seconds. The third attack Li Ruan makes against target roots them for 1.5 seconds, deals 4/6.5/9/11.5/14% of target's missing health (+100% AD) (+110% AP) Max 200-580 (based on level) against monsters and resets the cooldown of Extensive Flair on the target.

Ultimate - Navorian Waltz Target Range Self/325 | Cooldown 90/75/60 | Cost 100 Mana Li Ruin enters a trance-like dance state for 3/4/5 seconds, rapidly striking the closest enemy champion in range, gaining 30/40/50% movement speed while moving towards an enemy champion, gaining 40/50/60% total attack speed and removing the attack speed cap for the duration. Triggers Extensive Flair and [Insert E-Name Here]. Cannot attack or cast abilities while channelling, but can move.

Notes

DOES NOT work with Rapid Fire Cannon or Runaans Hurricane. DOES work with item 3748 Titanic and item 3074 Ravenous Hydra Ult DOES apply on hit affects, they're basic attacks. Also stacks Braum Braum's and Sejuani Sejuani's Passive. Ult CAN be cancelled

Epilogue

Thanks for getting down to the bottom of this, I know it's a lot of words. As I stated earlier, comments and criticism is more than welcome, as well as any questions you may have about the champion that I haven't answered in Notes. Side note, if anyone has any better idea for the names of abilities I am more than open, not a fan of most of those. THANKS!

10 Comments

HellionX21 votes

All of the ratios are way too high. That much percentage health damage on two seperate abilites would make her the most broken champion in the game, along with mobility and cc? The ability ideas are interesting along with the concepts, but all of the damage numbers and ratios are way too high.

Sn0wChas3r1 votes

Why the Damage Numbers are what they are:

Q: Compares quiet directly to Lee Sin's Q, in that it's a skill shot that deals percent health damage and dashes you to your target. Lee Sin's Q does does a total of 100/150/200/250/300+200% AD Plus Half % health scalings. Li Ruan's Q isn't even clost to that, infact it's less than just the second cast alone, which arguably is a fairer comparison when you account for resource costs. Though it again is less than just the second cast, so I don't see how this can be considered that insane while Lee Sin exists.

E: It's supposed to deal a lot of damage, it's actually a really hard thing to pull off on the basis that more attacks don't refresh the duration, which is why I worded it the way I did, if the enemy has any movement ability at all your probably not getting it off, and even then the %Health damage is identical to Vayne plus 100% Ad for it being very difficult to pull off. Admittedly, having current health and missing health damage on the same kit has the potential to be very scary, but I'm not sure how broken this incarnation of the idea is.

I apologise If I've across as dismissive or defensive, that wasn't my intention, I'm just intrigued as to what makes this inherently overpowered.

MrHaZeYo1 votes

Li Ruan gains 25/30/35/40/45% (+15% Bonus AP) Movement speed, immunity to slows and immunity to basic attacks for 2.5/2.75/3/3.25/3.5 seconds.

That's not busted at all [sg-ezreal]

David 7771 votes

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Li Ruan gains 25/30/35/40/45% (+15% Bonus AP) Movement speed, immunity to slows and immunity to basic attacks for 2.5/2.75/3/3.25/3.5 seconds.

That's not busted at all [sg-ezreal]

It's the combination of Jax's E toned up and Yi's R toned down. I'd probably change the MS/unslowable duration to 2/2.5/3/3.5/4 and Evasion to half of that.

Sn0wChas3r1 votes

I have a couple of problems with this, on the basis that at least half the attraction of jax's E is the damage and stun that come at the end of it, which this does not have. This design replaces that finale with a stronger buff, I''d guess the evading is worth about 40-50% of jax's ability, which means this skill should be about twice as good without the finale, which I personaly think it is, so maybe the level scaling should come down a bit, which Infact I'm going to do now.

David 7771 votes

Could use clearer explainations for the skills, but very fine concept.

Sn0wChas3r1 votes

How do you suggest I clarify it, for future reference?

David 7771 votes

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How do you suggest I clarify it, for future reference?

Short sentences. Separated by. Periods. So that each effect can be easily read and understood.

Your E should read

Li Ruan marks an enemy champion, large or epic monster for 4 seconds.

Also, your R would be clearer like this

Li Ruin enters a trance-like dance state for 3/4/5 seconds, gaining 30/40/50% movement speed while moving towards an enemy champion. She also gains 40/50/60% total attack speed, removing the attack speed cap for the duration. Her autoattack cannot be manually controlled and she'll attack the nearest enemy, priorizing champions, epic and large monsters.

Sn0wChas3r1 votes

Okay, cool thanks a lot.

VelvetCrotch1 votes

We definitely need a whip champ beside Thresh. I hoped reworked Eve would get one, but now I hope the new champ after the mage will be one. (Hopefully a toplaner)

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