(Champion concept) Freya, The Hive Queen

I have been working on this design idea for a while and I was looking for feedback. I have not calculated any numbers for abilities yet cause I would be either too low or too high. Please provide constructive criticism.

Freya, the Hive Queen

Roles: Mage

Appearance:

• Female

• Age: ~18

• Greenish hue to her skin

• Has a punk rock look

• Shaved head

• Facial piercings

• Clothing: Long Trench coat with a hood, Punk rock cloths with spikes and studs

• Auto Attack: I can't decide if she should shoot an energy from her hand or use a weapon like a whip for a ranged AA

Passive - Acid Touch

• Freya's spells apply stacks of Acid Touch

• Each stack lowers Magic Resist

• Max stacks that can be applied are 4

• Stacks last 4 seconds

Q - Locus Wave

• Line Skill Shot

• Animation - A wave of bugs gets shot forward

• Costs Mana and Health

• Refunds a portion of the health costs for champions hit and/or units killed

W - Hungry Swarm

• Trap set, when enemy champion gets to close the swap attacks that champion and applies only one stack of passive

• Does Damage over time for 4 seconds

• Trap lasts 40 seconds then dissipates

E - Acid Rain

• Animation - A swarm appears above and spits acid down

• Short delay after cast

• AOE spell

• Deals most damage after initial cast

• Marks all in side the AOE, Marked targets have a small DoT applied

• Slows inside AOE

• The Marked DOT only applies one stack of passive

R - Death Swarm

• Animation - Creates a tornado of bug

• This will root the caster but can still cast spells

• Cast then controls the AOE tornado

• First time Enemy is hit knocks up

• Applies a DOT

• Each tick of damage will apply passive

Her Story:

She was a young girl from Zaun and grew up hear exploits of heroes and reading comic books and always wanting to be a hero too. She was poor and lonely and had a hard time growing up. Bugs seem to follow her every where she went. She never minded as they were her only friends. As she grew up she realized she had the power to summon more bugs and control them. She saw this magic like a super power and decided to fight crime and stand up for those who cannot for themselves. One day when she stop two people from mugging an innocent boy and then a group of people came to see the spectacle she made with her magic. The crow feared her and ran away and called her a monster. She sank deep into depression and decided fine if they no one wants to be her friend and will always fear and shun her. Then she will give them a real reason to. She was walking the streets unabashed like she never has before; with confidence. Then a couple young men were calling names at her and throwing rocks. She turned to them and asked if they like her and when they laughed at her she unleashed her swarm and left nothing but bones on the street.

Please be gentle this was a rough idea not a full story.

I look forward to feedback.

C1ock