New Champion Idea
Dear League of Riot, I am Ironbound but you can call me Logan, I am 22 years young an been playing since 2009. I have seen a lot of your progression over the years an all the wonderful things you have done, an not so wonderful (taking out the journal of justice) D=. Now there's nothing better then getting my fix of league in the morning but I just can't help but notice something. There are no Dwarven themed champions in the league, unless that's what yordles are buy they seem more like a mix of gnome, elves an furry creatures not stout dwarves.
I am not good with numbers but I have come up with a base character, so love him hate him just tell me what yall think! =D
Introducing : Ruick FoeHammer, or (Ruick, the Grand Dwarf Smith)
Story : When Ruick was young he had adventured deep into the mountains of Khalder'Dul, against his clans wishes where it was unsafe due to the, unknow terrain and monsters deeper within in. He was walking the ledge when he slipped an fell, he fell for what seem for hours until he finally reached an end, To his surprise his fall was broken by a wondering cave troll. Ruick walked away unscathed the troll however was left embedded in the ground. Ruick undeterred from his adventure kept moving, when he found a strange door way, it seemed to be dwarven but much older. Ruick cautiously entered the room unsure of what might still be around, he came to a door one that he had never seen before, even by dwarven standards this door was great with a strange anvil that seem to lock the door together. Ruick pushed and shoved for a good while, but the door wouldn't budge so in a fit of dwarven rage he pulled out his smith hammer an hit the anvil. To his surprise the sound of the two metals made a very loud echo, and Ruick new he had made a mistake, the sound of cave trolls in the distance made sure of that. As the trolls were starting to get closer, and closer the anvil began to glow with strange runes. Ruick could no longer hear the trolls coming he was so mezmerized by the runes. In his amazement the trolls had already caught up to him, right before they could grab him, Ruick grabbed onto the anvil in a hope of escape, the anvil still glowing seemed to be light as a feather in Ruicks hand, and plucked right out of the door. Ruick with no time to think struck the first troll with the anvil leaving him bloody, next he threw it as hard as he could at the one blocking the door. The anvil took the trolls head clean off, and Ruick had his opening, so without hesitation he pushed an smashed his way past the rest of the trolls with his smithing hammer. To his clans surprise he had found an ruined smithing anvil, used by there ancestors to create weapons and armors of legend they bond with there smith. Ruick seeing this as a blessing began furiously working on his smiting skills, and over the years would even take on a young apprentice, a young yordle none the less by the name of Blomgrun, who Ruick loved like a son. Ruicks name spreads far an wide threw Voloran from the high mountains of Khalder'Dul where he was born, to the Shining city of Demcia, Mighty city's of Noxus, and even the city of tomorrow Piltover. For no smith was equal to that of the FoeHammer clan, especially a very stout red haired dwarf by the name of Ruick whose smithing skills were that of legends of old. The foe hammer clan has always been revered for there abilities to make the greatest weapons, but after years of war much of there ancient techniques had been lost or destroyed, some of what remains are still in the mountian but the beast an trolls that now dwell there make it all but impossible to delve to deep. Later as Ruick became more mature an wiser, he had made a great living building weapons and armors for most the leaders of the land. Ruick could not have been happier, that was until the day he heard of Bolmgruns death, buy weapons he had forged and sold to Noxus. Ruick in his guilt vowed never to forge weapons or armor for the kingdoms of Voloran again, he wondered for many years with his anvil an smithing hammer tracking down any weapon he created and destroying it, until reaching Bilgewater where he descovered that the daughter of Bolmgrun was still alive, and in the leauge no less bringing justice to those who would cause pain and suffereing! Ruick seeing this as his way to receive forgiveness found the first boat he could and raced to the league.
"A smith's creation is a part of um Lad ...and right now part of me be covered in the blood of the innocent " -Ruick Foehammer
Q- Anvil throw, Ruick throws his anvil in a direction pinning his target to the ground (stun)
W- Dwarven Rage, Ruick gains a burst of movement speed and gives his enemy a good smack with his smiting hammer
E- Sound of Smithing- Ruick, Hits his anvil with his hammer causing vibrations to deal damage to enemys withing a certain distance
R- Orchestra of Smithing, Rucik places his anvil on the ground and begins creating a hailstorm of enchanted weapons damaging any in there path and attacking enemy's inside their attack range for a few seconds.
(Passive) - Grand Smiths Ingenuity, Being well versed in the ways of creating weapons, Any time Ruick is hit by an enemy champion he gains a little tenacity.
_SIDE NOTE _: I will have a picture in a week or, so be patient please if you like it! =D
) but here's my suggestions. Add w short cast time to his Q just to make it balanced. Without a cast time it would be like Nidalee's spear with a stun shudder. Does his W work like Gardens Q or alistars W (a movespeed buff or instant dash) his E is kinda eh, nothing special. Maybe add a defensive buff passive to his E for better jungling? His R works like Anivia or Gangplanks? A response would be lovely, take my ideas or don't, up to you.
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