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pravum dux a.k.a corruption leader(champion consept)

pixelclerk··1 votes·598 views

i thought of an idea for a cool noxus champion that works on terrain

(passive) pravum has an aura (range??) where terrain becomes corrupted ginda likeZyra Illaoi and hes abilityes would gain power from corruption and his stats (the corruption fades if not under pravums aura for 1 minute)

(Q) shoots a skill shot if it doesnt hit an enemy it corrupt the trerrain if hits an enemy the enemy becomes rooted if on corruption or slow if not on corruption (corruption scale 2.0) (W) target area becomes corrupted and if cast on corruption lock all enemys on the area for 1 to 2(base on w lv)

(corruption scale 1.5) (E) next strike corrupts opponent (if the corrupted dies that area becomes corrupted) slow the opponent (for???) and if it walks on corruption it takes damage

(corruption scale 3.0) (ULT)

pravum becomes powered by hes corruption growing it and gaining extreme stats for like eatch corruption gain 50 healt 10 damage and movement speed by 5 and attack speed by 5% all so increases all scales to 5.0

pls tell me any ideas u have ty for reading :D

9 Comments

CobaltTheMadMage2 votes

At no point did you explain what exactly "corruption" is or what it does. I understand it's a terrain effect like Zyra's plants or Illaoi's tentacles, but we're going to need more detail than that.

pixelclerk1 votes

in the begining i typed (pravum has an aura (range??) where terrain becomes corrupted) i meant like a surcle on the ground or on wall like illaoi and zyra spand except with the surcles a.k.a (corruption)

CobaltTheMadMage1 votes

I understand that it leaves circles of corruption, but you still never explained what exactly the circles were for or what they did besides be consumed by his Ultimate. Do they deal damage to enemies standing in them, or something?

pixelclerk1 votes

u interact with corruption and gain stats in a nutshell like zyra and illaoi p.s he doeasnt consume the corruption he makes them grow bigger so more interaction and stats

so basiclly when your near terrain u spread corruption then your abilitys gain damage and extra buff on corruption

pixelclerk1 votes

in the begining i typed (pravum has an aura (range??) where terrain becomes corrupted) i meant like a surcle on the ground or on wall like illaoi and zyra spand except with the surcles a.k.a (corruption)

Arakadia1 votes

What do you mean surcle? Do you mean circle?

Arakadia1 votes

Please explain this champions theme and story. Is it political corruption? Is it magical corruption?

His ultimate just gives stats, which is kinda boring. I suggest you give more interesting stats like he gains movement speed on corrupted ground and all arond him becomes corrupted.

His E is strange. So does it slow them and doesn't deal damage unless they walk on corrupted ground? Enemies will never walk on corrupted ground unless you use a displacement.

Also what type of character is this? Is it a mage? A marksmen? A tank? Is he melee or ranged? AD or AP?

This champion doesn't really have anything super interesting. Jhin has a whole playstyle from his passive and Bard has portals. Kindred has two seperate entities along with a hunting passive. Illaoi brings a friggen god to the rift. This champion sounds like a less interesting Illaoi.

Next time I highly suggest you put more work and try to make a more complete champion concept. Explain your abilities further. Make some lore and backround. Get artwork and images. Think about your abilities:

  • What type of champion is this? Is he a mage, ADC, or support? Is he AD, burst, AP, consistant damage, etc.?

  • Whats the counterplay to this champion.

  • Is this champion fun and unique?

Also your grammar was poor. Your abilities weren't explained well. It was hard to understand your post. Don't use words such as "like" and put periods along with capital letters. You should use formatting. Name your ability, give it a complete explanation and purpose, and then assign a key. For example you can use underscores to make words italics or two asterisks will make it bold and using ">" at the beginning of each line.

Putting this arrow ">" will put a box around that line.

Likes this.

pixelclerk1 votes

sorry if my english is not that good and pls tell me what u think he should do

hes just a corruption spreadding noxian leader p.s hes corruption could remuve magic and armor if enemy is standing on it and 1 second when left friends withYorick Leblanc Vladimir and all other noxian leader and worriers

hes ult grows all corruption on the ground making that your e always roots w all ways locks and e always deals damage while they gain increseased damage from the scale increase

hes q slows the opponent if the opponent is not on corruption and roots it if on corruption

hes a melee tank using spells to keep his enemies still while dealing weak damage can be played top and supp

and to play him u use E to clear minion wawes spreading corruption if the opponent tryes to get near you use w on him locking him in place then q to root e to slow while punching him and thats why if they want to avoid damage from your e they have to go around or wait to your e to go off

hes full counter isOlaf but to counter this champ u only need a lot of cc weakeners item 3111 item 3102

but ok i try better next time :_l

Arakadia1 votes

Ok cool!

I understand if English isnt your second language, thats nothing to feel bad about.

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