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pravum dux a.k.a corruption leader(champion consept)

pixelclerk·6/30/2016, 5:50:06 PM·1 votes·598 views

i thought of an idea for a cool noxus champion that works on terrain

(passive) pravum has an aura (range??) where terrain becomes corrupted ginda like and hes abilityes would gain power from corruption and his stats (the corruption fades if not under pravums aura for 1 minute)

(Q) shoots a skill shot if it doesnt hit an enemy it corrupt the trerrain if hits an enemy the enemy becomes rooted if on corruption or slow if not on corruption (corruption scale 2.0) (W) target area becomes corrupted and if cast on corruption lock all enemys on the area for 1 to 2(base on w lv)

(corruption scale 1.5) (E) next strike corrupts opponent (if the corrupted dies that area becomes corrupted) slow the opponent (for???) and if it walks on corruption it takes damage

(corruption scale 3.0) (ULT)

pravum becomes powered by hes corruption growing it and gaining extreme stats for like eatch corruption gain 50 healt 10 damage and movement speed by 5 and attack speed by 5% all so increases all scales to 5.0

pls tell me any ideas u have ty for reading :D

9 Comments

CobaltTheMadMage6/30/2016, 6:02:50 PM2 votes

At no point did you explain what exactly "corruption" is or what it does. I understand it's a terrain effect like Zyra's plants or Illaoi's tentacles, but we're going to need more detail than that.

pixelclerk6/30/2016, 6:39:08 PM1 votes

in the begining i typed (pravum has an aura (range??) where terrain becomes corrupted) i meant like a surcle on the ground or on wall like illaoi and zyra spand except with the surcles a.k.a (corruption)

Arakadia7/2/2016, 6:25:40 AM1 votes

Please explain this champions theme and story. Is it political corruption? Is it magical corruption?

His ultimate just gives stats, which is kinda boring. I suggest you give more interesting stats like he gains movement speed on corrupted ground and all arond him becomes corrupted.

His E is strange. So does it slow them and doesn't deal damage unless they walk on corrupted ground? Enemies will never walk on corrupted ground unless you use a displacement.

Also what type of character is this? Is it a mage? A marksmen? A tank? Is he melee or ranged? AD or AP?

This champion doesn't really have anything super interesting. Jhin has a whole playstyle from his passive and Bard has portals. Kindred has two seperate entities along with a hunting passive. Illaoi brings a friggen god to the rift. This champion sounds like a less interesting Illaoi.

Next time I highly suggest you put more work and try to make a more complete champion concept. Explain your abilities further. Make some lore and backround. Get artwork and images. Think about your abilities:

What type of champion is this? Is he a mage, ADC, or support? Is he AD, burst, AP, consistant damage, etc.?
Whats the counterplay to this champion.
Is this champion fun and unique?

Also your grammar was poor. Your abilities weren't explained well. It was hard to understand your post. Don't use words such as "like" and put periods along with capital letters. You should use formatting. Name your ability, give it a complete explanation and purpose, and then assign a key. For example you can use underscores to make words italics or two asterisks will make it bold and using ">" at the beginning of each line.

Putting this arrow ">" will put a box around that line.

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