Subject 3579, The Enslaved Weapon

MultiBuildMaster·2/23/2016, 5:44:54 AM·1 votes·616 views

Ok so this is a rough idea for a champion i have and i wanted to get an opinion on the kit before i stat working on Numbers so with out further ado

**Lore **

  • Basically person that gets hit by a Noxina chemical attack that dissolves every one else but leaves them as almost a skeleton that can absorb flesh from others, taken to singed/Viktor(not sure who yet) and gets transformed into a living controlled weapon who begins to regain control the more flesh he has so they bind him in armor that burns away his flesh so they can control him

Description

  • starts out looking like a skeletal with armor on chest legs arms and fingers that restrict his movements and a muzzle holding mouth shut, eventually grows massive gaining muscle with armor stretching bearably staying on him

Ability's * Passive 3597 uses a resource called flesh for his ability's up to 500 (place holder), he gains X amount of flesh for every minion he kills, also 3597 increases in size and strength for every 100 stacks of flesh he has gaining increased stats and ability's he also losses X amount of flesh while in combat and a reduced amount while out of combat 3597 also losses flesh faster the more stacks he has.

200+ stacks % increase in health 300+ increase in armor mr 400+ % damage reduction and autos deal a % of your max health

Q

  • Devour Cost: 0 Cooldown: low Damage: base low, increased for minions scales off health 3597 strikes a target ripping at them and gaining stacks of flesh the amount of flesh gained is increased if it kills the target also at 200+ stacks of flesh the scaling on it is increased

W

  • Pile driver Cost:high Cooldown: High Damage:Scales off targets current health 3597 flings the target over him and at 300+ stacks stuns the target based on there maximum health

E

  • Blood frenzy Cost: med, Damage: low, Cooldown: med 3597 passively marks a target with auto attacks gaining healing for each stack up to 5 stacks?(possible AS too) on that target only can only have one target marked at a time Active: 3597 lacerates the target consuming the marks and and applying a slow based on the number of stacks

R

  • ravage Cost: all flesh stacks, Damage: high CD: high 3957 guts the target dealing % of health damage(not sure if it should be max or current) , applies grievous wounds, gains max flesh stacks, autos slow the gutted target and begins rapidly losing flesh stack but all stack bonuses persist until you reach 0 or the gutted target dies

And there it is so let me know what you think all comments are welcome but pleas try to be constructive also i suck at art so if any one wants to draw 3957 be my guest

1 Comments

LeifTheExplorer2/23/2016, 7:05:04 PM1 votes

Your presentation of the character is very hard to read, I'd recommend cleaning it up before presenting I have little to no idea of what his kit does.

Also, change the name. 3579 doesn't roll off the tounge. Give him some code name, like Zac has.

If you want an idea of how you are supposed to present champion concepts, you can look at my champion concept here. Nefalz, The Herald of Silence