Tyreal, Heaven's Wrath

AustintheAtrain·10/11/2014, 1:15:50 AM·1 votes·825 views

I forgot to move this over to the new Boards. So here it is. **Tyreal, Heaven's Wrath. ** A holy melee tank who has decent defense and damage, but is slow and lumbering

Primary Role:Tank Secondary Role:Fighter

Abilities Passive-Heaven's Burn. Basic attacks and abilities afflict the target with a holy flame that deals 50/55/60 (+5% Health) that burns for 4 seconds for 10% of targets current health. (Only does base damage to minions and monsters)

Health:600 +100 per lvl (2400 at lvl 18) AD: 60 +5 per lvl (150 at lvl 18) Attack Speed: 0.7 +2% per lvl (0.952 at lvl 18) Movement Speed: 315 Armor: 24 +4 per lvl (96 at lvl 18) MR: 24 +3 per lvl (78 at lvl 18)

Q-Holy Smite. Basic attacks deal 50/60/80/100/150 (+100% AD) for 10 seconds (CD:25/20/15/10/10 seconds)

W-Defensive Stance. Passive-Increases bonus Armor and MR by 35% Active-Increases Armor, MR, Health by 50% and incoming crowd control for 5 seconds. (30/25/20/15/10 seconds)

E-Holy Light. Fires a ball of light that locks on and stuns target enemy (1/1.3/1.5/2 seconds) and deals 30/40/50/60/80 (+0.2 AP). (10 seconds at all ranks)

R-Fury of the Heavens. Passive-Increases damage against Champions affected by Heaven's Burn by 25%. Active-Increases HP (+15% of Bonus Health), AD (+50% of Total AD), Attack speed and Movement speed by 75% for 7 seconds. (120/100/50 seconds)

Gender:Male Race:Human Faction: Demacia Birthplace:Noxus Place of Residence: Demacia

Lore Born and raised in Noxus, Tyreal's father was a personal guard to the Royal family. Realizing that he didn't want his child raised in that kind of city, they ran. Swain didn't like the idea of potential secrets getting out, Swain sent out and army. The only way out was to steal a boat and hide out in the Shadow Isles. The Noxian army did not follow. While living there, his father taught him the ways of the Knight. He practiced and got better every day. One night, while everyone was asleep, Creatures attacked their small hut and slaughtered his parents and siblings. He only escaped because he hid in a tree. Now orphaned, he left for the only place he knew he could be safe, the city of Demacia. Once he arrived, he joined the Demacian army.

He spent the next 10 years in the army, rising through the ranks and finally becoming a captain in the Royal Guard. He met a beautiful Demacian shop owner and married and started a family; his life was finally looking up. This life would not last long though. Swain is now head of Noxus and has learned of his arrival and family death. He knows he can't let Tyreal live, so he sends the assassin Talon to kill him. Talon arrives and kills Tyreal's wife and kids. Tyreal was, unfortunately, arrived as Talon finished. He fought Talon blade-to-blade but Talon was able to escape.

Now with everything lost, he seeks revenge. He prays to the Heavens for power to seek revenge. He is met by Kayle who grants him the power he seeks and tells him of the Institute of War. She tells him that he can find Talon and Swain there, as well as the monsters responsible for his parents death. He picks up his father's sword and his armor and heads out.

"These Noxians and ungodly abominations will burn for what they have done!" -Tyreal

Quotes Queue: "Feel the Wrath of the Heavens"

Movement: "Lead me to victory, summoner" "Noxus will fall!" "The undead will know death" "I will avenge my family" "I will make my father proud"

Basic Attacking: "Feel the burn!" "Heaven's wrath!" "For my father!"

Q: "Holy smite!" "Power of the Heavens!"

W: (adding the first point) "You won't harm me now" (activating W) "Try and leave a dent"

E: "Stop right there!" "Holy Light!"

R: (adding first point) "Now you will REALLY hurt" (activting R) "YOU WILL FEEL MY PAIN"

Attacking Swain: "I'm going to have crow for dinner"

Attacking Darius: "How about I cut off the Hand of Noxus?"

Attacking Kat: "You're not Talon, but my blade doesn't care"

Attacking Talon: "This time it's your blood on my blade"

Attacking Draven: "Doesn't feel good being on the other side, eh Draven?"

Attacking Cassiopeia: "I'm going to make a pair of boots out of you, Cass"

Attacking Hecarim: "You're going to become glue"

Using E on Hecarim: "Woah nelley"

Attacking Morde: "Your suit can't stop me, Mordeakaiser"

Attacking Yorick: "I'll bury you gravedigger!"

Attacking Elise: "I squash you like the bug you are!"

Attacking Karthus: "I'll show you death, Karthus!"

Killing any from S.I.(except Hecarim and Elise): "The Undead have been smited"

Killing Noxian(except for Talon and Swain): "You have payed for your evil ways"

Killing Hecarim: "That's for my parents!"

Killing Elise: "You'll never feast on my family's bodies now!"

Killing Swain: "Get Plucked, bird"

Killing Talon: "My family has been avenged!"

Jokes: "Hmm? Oh. Yeah. DEMACIA!" "No. I don't know anyone named 'Arthur' or his 'round table'" "I'll show you MY +5 Holy Avenger"

Taunts: "With my fathers sword, I'll bring Noxus to it's knees" "The undead will know true death"

Special taunts: Towards Hecarim: "Easy there, Seabiscuit" Towards Elise: "Why is it always giant spiders?" Towards Swain: "I thought you were a crow and not a chicken" Towards Talon: "You are no assassin, Talon, just a coward"

Dance: The Robot

I would love some constructive criticisms. Artwork to come at a later date.

2 Comments

Dragon Skylight10/11/2014, 4:01:10 AM1 votes

Greetings, I tried to like the concept but I just couldn't. I quickly point out where I think it lack so you can improve over it.^^

First big flaw NUMBERS: Hmm careful about the number like the passive dealing 50 damage base at lvl 1. It is a lot. Think of champions start around 400-500 hp generally. Your passive deal much more damage than JarvanIV since he does 10% of the current health and is capped by a timer while yours has none. Don't forget it is a passive that add over your 65 AD... PS: if you 4 or 3 shot a champ at lvl 1 something if definitively wrong. Your Champ base life is way over the top chart if you compare to Nautilus or DrMundo who start at 433 and get only 89 per lvl. Your W passive is also way to high for a Garen's looking W. His skill Courage scale with only 20%. 35% is nearly the double of it and yes Garen is considered as a tanky champion already. Anyway just review your number.

2nd drawback lack of identity: With the skill set given all he does is running into the fight, stun someone for 2 sec(which is better than taric E max rank but anyway...) and burst down enemy without doing much else. To be honest it remind me of what season 2 Taric was able to do when he was OP. The champ just doesn't have aura. He doesn't create play and doesn't offer outplay. No movement steroid or gap closer.

Afterthought: Please review your numbers for coherence (I just used lol wiki for stat) and try to bring a new concept in order to base your champion identity. Good luck mate.

ZenithEevee10/11/2014, 6:38:26 AM1 votes

Why do I feel this is a heavy copy-write that has something to do with Diablo III?

In all seriousness, though, the game was fun..

This champ, however, is way OP. like, Crusader OP. I mean, thing might as well be Garen and Singed's clones fused together and f#$ked Darius' daughter, who was then dipped in the blood of Nasus.