New champion / lore idea

Αskeladd·5/17/2019, 11:47:14 AM·1 votes·1,493 views

So I had an idea about the Kumungu jungle's story. So, it's an ancient tribe that used to live in the kumungu jungle , they were great warriors in fact , they were the best warriors. And during the rune wars a Noxian explorer while he was exploring the mysterius kumungu jungle he came across this tribe . Witch he discovered that their village was built on top of a very powerful rune witch was the reason why they were great warriors so he informed Noxus about them, Noxians wanted this power and they planned for an attack. The explorer informed them that they had no chance of 1 on 1 combat and so they attacked using enchanted weapons. After a great battle the tribe fell because they had planned on assassinating their chief witch was the strongest one , a legendary warrior who was able to wield two Sithers (the tribes weapon witch was a blade in a moon-like shape like noob saibot's blade form MK11) and was also known all across surima and ikathia but the tribe didn't have good relations with anyone. When the Noxians won they took the rune and enslaved all the children under the age of 8 older than that they were considered a threat. They captured the children and by using magic they froze them in time so they could examine them clone them and create a very strong army.While they started to clone them they were forced to stop by the end of the rune wars because they no longer had the ability to clone anymore because the rune was destroyed.After many years after the project was scraped and the bodies were frozen in time in the abandoned facility Swain decided to relise the children and blocking their memories of their tribe. Now the main character (or maybe the champion) is Moran, the chief's son who was only 6 years old when the Noxians attacked the village he was there when they murdered his father he saw him fighting until his last breath using his dual Sithers but he eventually was taken down by powerful magic attacks. He had forgotten. The children of the tribe were left leaving in an underground section of Noxus . They were very poor they weren't allowed to associate with others rather than their own people. they were different, Swain had ordered to mark them with a red moon on their forehead. So back to Moran , he was the best on fighting among all his people. So he was the one that had to go above the ground to steal when they were hungry. As a tribesman you could be 2 things a thief , or if you were a female a prostitute. He was the best at stealing , but one day when he got caught he was lucky enough to be caught by one arena manager who curently was on the look for a new gladiator (he was now 16 years old) the manager saw potential on him (he saw the sign on Moran's forehead he new about the tribesmen) , and so he offered a place in the arena or he would turned him in, Moran had no other choice but to accept his offer. After that they went to the arena , he had to prepare Moran for the fights first of all he covered his mark on his forehead because it was illegal for him to participate and then he let him choose a weapon , when he saw he weapons the first weapon he saw was a moon-shaped weapon he was intrigued. "I want that one" he said the manager was not surprised so he gave him the weapon.Three years later he had made a name for him self , the "Dark Carnage" they called him because of his dark skin, he was undefeated. One day his manager told him to go to the blacksmith to repair his armor. While he was walking to the blacksmith he noticed a tall building that he used to admire it as a littile boy when he was looking it from afar , it was the Great Library that contained books from as far as human history goes. he walked in, while he was wandering in the hallways he came across a section that was called ''The Tribesmen" he had heard that a lot of times before so he walked towards that section. He picked up a book , he started reading it ,the book contained everything about his tribe he was sarting to remember,the kumungu jungle , the village , his people ,his father he remembered everything the attack his father assasination everything he started filling with rage , hatred for every noxian he wanted, revenge. While he was standing still filled with rage , his manager came into the room fuming, "WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING HERE?!" he screamed he grabbed Moran's hand and tried to force him out of the library ,Moran wouldn't move , then he turned and looked his manager with a dead eye and he crushed his head with a single punch. He run, he went back underground he had to inform them .When the Tribesmen heard Moran they also remembered even the clones had the memories of the originals. They had to avenge their ancestors ,with blood. So he starts a rebellion against all Noxians. While they fight, the moon , wich the Tribe is blessed by , gives them power and gives Moran a dual Sither like his father. But Noxus by using magic kills half of them so they retreat back to the kumungu jungle waiting to attack Noxus more powerfull
PS I suggest the Tribes name to be "Ith"

2 Comments

Chembaron Yamada5/17/2019, 12:51:05 PM1 votes

Holy, that is a wall of text.

MooooooooreDakka5/17/2019, 2:08:21 PM1 votes

Quick suggestion to make it more readable: please use paragraphs when you're writing something long. Also, Swain's decision in this story seems a bit out of character for him as well as Noxus in general, especially if they're supposed to be considerably more dangerous than normal humans.