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Elenor the Desert Dancer

Captain Astora·2/21/2016, 10:13:36 PM·1 votes·514 views

Elenor is a roaming dancer and entertainer from ther Shurima desert. He people the Ha'Lia are known for Dance, Music, and being unnaturally hardy due to the condition they live in.

(WIP) HP: HP/5: Attack Damage: Attack Range: Attack Speed: Movement Speed: Armor: Magic Resistance:

Passive: Dancers Flow. Elenor never stop moving and is highly agile. Every 3 Attacks or Spells that would hit her miss. (Alternate Elenor has a 25% Dodge Chance on all Attack and Spells)

Q: Flash Step: Elenor uses her dancing to proper her forward 500 units. If she hits a unit she deals 20/25/30/35/40 + AD Physical Damage. 20 Second CD

W: Battlefield Waltz (Passive) Elenor never hits the same target twice. She will teleport to a random target within 500 units between attacks. She also gains 10/15/20/25/30 Magic Resist for 3 seconds between attacks. (Active) Focuses her attack on a single target. Gaining 5/10/15/20/25% Attack Speed against that target but loses her Magic resist instantly. Active has a 35/30/25/20/15 Second CD

E: Two step: Elenor Speeds up, Giving her Max Attack speed for .5/1/1.5/2/2.5 Seconds and is untaretable for the duration if teleporting between attacks. 30 Second CD

R: Bloody Dance: Elenor starts to use her Daggers in battle. Gaining Special abilities each rank,. 1: Elenor Gains +25 AD Per Rank. 2: Elenor Attacks Rend. Every 4 attacks Cause Enemies to Have Grevious wounds. for 2 second. 3: Elenor masters he Dagger dance. Ganing 50% Attack Speed.

Feel free to Offer ideas, criticism. This is my third attempt at designing this character. i have art work but it seems the attachment option was removed. Will upload links later.

3 Comments

CannonLordFreed2/21/2016, 11:07:21 PM1 votes

It's an interesting idea, but it's OP and kind of crazy, the kind of champion that people would hate seeing. She combines some of the most annoying things Riven, Kalista, Teemo, and pre-rework Fiora have graced us with. Her passive is ridiculous, and should be changed, or at least nerfed. We all hate getting Q'd by Teemo. Let's not make it so that you Teemo Q every third attack or spell. Your Q isn't very specific, but a good, balanced ability actually. Does it stop mid dash if you hit something, or certain somethings? Your W seems very... Bouncy. I don't really know what to say about it. Just something to make you inconsistent and tick off anyone with skillshots. Your E is absolutely overpowered though. It's just Fiora's ult pre-rework. And that got reworked out for a reason. Everyone hated it. Your ult is interesting, and I like the concept, though making every basic attack inflict grievous wounds seems like a bit much. Soraka and Sona are crying in the distance.

Caelcanth8/6/2016, 12:08:29 AM1 votes

Could you tell her stats first? Since her kit is very much DPS focused I think having her HP and DEF below average is a must with high AD and since she doesn't seem to have any use for AP have it the lowest I guess.

I see her as a melee ADC champ which would work at Jungle, even though she doesn't seem very tanky, with her high mobility and damage I assume she can peel the HP bars very fast and gank rapidly. I wouldn't recommend her for bot but it is the next thing she should lane for since the majority of any champ in bot are ranged, having a support that has good CC like slows and stuns will rapidly counter you with their ranged ADC companion.

You could say she's an AD Katarina that relies more on her basic attacks than damaging spells. Her in the Jungle is the best idea, having any other is not a good idea. Jungle because she is invulnerable each third attack with her passive, her W's passive and E works well on clearing group of monsters and her Q is good for ganks.

Top players are mostly tanky, so unless you unleash good amount of damage in matter of seconds and using your Q to escape the hits fast, you will have a bad time.

Mid could be reliable but with the CC mages out there and also high mobility mages you might want to think about it first, Annie ,Ahri ,TwistedFate ,Lux ,Ryze can counter you easily if they land those stuns, although since most of them are pretty slow like Lux , Q and basic attacks will kill her in seconds.

You can also use her in bot, have a Blitzcrank ,Thresh, Nautilus as support and you're good to go, although as stated before, be aware that being a melee champ in bot isn't the best idea, always go for the supports first for kills and focuse later on the ADC.

In teamfights, although not an Assasin you should get rid of the squishies first then aiding your team later on more tanky champions. Her abilities all focus on her to be a high DPS killing machine. Your Q can engage the fight although you should always wait for someone else to start it, being you the one who finishes and cleans the teamfight.

She's pretty much like a MasterYi in terms of what she can do.

Now a review on her skills, Passive is overpowered, being invulnerable for every 3 attack they do to you is not a good idea, her E makes her passive look less overpowered since you basicly use E with the combination of W's passive and they can't hit you.

Now that the kit is away, let's go with lore and champion uniqueness.

Once you call a champion a dancer, knowing the lore of Orianna will come up in your head, Elenor would be stuck in people's mind as a second dancer introduced in the game, although robot Orianna has almost nothing to do with dancing.

Her lore isn't very much in depth here at the moment, but the only thing we know is that she is a roaming dancer from a tribe in Shurima. What are her reasons on joining league? Revenge? Fun? since there's no lore to her I could imagine that since Shurima is pretty much gone thanks to Azir and her being a roaming dancer she survives the destruction of her tribe while she was in another place. Knowing the tragedy she wants to confront Azir so she joins the league. What I said is pretty boring though, it's a basic character revenge plot and sounds much like Taliyah.

I'd love to see her concept art also, to see if there's something in her physical form that makes her aside from other female champion, you know maybe some cool hair color or something. I'd also like to know what would she feel like in terms of personality.

Now that's out of the way, generally she is an interesting idea kit-wise, a new Shuriman champion shouldn't hurt, but for now I'll wait for the lore and more information.

Hope I didn't go hard on you (I tend to sound like it.)

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