(Champion Concept) Hael - The Arcane Sword

During my breaks and vacations I really got this inspiration of creating a champion. Currently, I'm working on two champions. One of them is still quite rough and sandy (hint hint) and the other is still kinda... dark... in my head (hint hint). There are more but those are just some of them. I wanted to post my first concept, Hael which I kind of trashed. It is not as extensive and highly elaborated as I hope the others will be but I thought it would be nice to show you guys her still.

Front Sketch: [img]http://i.imgur.com/wJ2i5iG.png[/img]

Side Sketch: [img]http://i.imgur.com/og6efpX.png[/img]

Also, I posted a poll for you guys to pick which champion I should focus now.

Abilities:

P: Eternal Spirits (Passive) - For every unit in a 500 radius that dies around Hael, he gains 1 stack. Every stack she gains, her auto attacks deal a bonus 4 physical damage to all enemy champions. Whenever Hael auto-attacks an enemy champion all stacks are consumed.

Q: Punishing Dash / Bullet of Death (Active) {Punishing Dash} Hael dashes in a target direction with arcane energy passing through terrain, allied and enemy champions, and minions. This dash deals 75/90/130/165/210 physical damage + 80% AD to all enemy champions and units it passes. This dash can be stacked twice before going on cooldown (ie: Akali Ult., Heimerdinger Q, etc.)

Empowered Q:{Bullet of Death} Once activated Hael is rooted in place for 1 second. After this time she dashes in the target direction with unimaginable speed dealing 175/200/235/265/300 physical damage + 100% AD to all enemy champions and units in the dash.

W: Flesh Wound / Vital Injury (Active) {Flesh Wound} Hael powers her sword with arcane energy causing her next basic attack to deal true damage based on enemy max health.

Empowered W:{Vital Injury}  Hael powers her sword with divine energy causing her next basic attack to deal increased true damage based on enemy max health and stun the target. If the target is below 50% health and is hit by Vital injury they become stunned for a longer period of time and get inflicted grievous wounds

E: Cut Em' Up / Merciless Cut (Active) {Cut Em' Up} Hael swiftly slashes all enemies in a cone area dealing 80/95/110/175/195 physical damage + 70% AD

Empowered E:{Merciless Cut}  Hael slashes all enemies in a cone area with outrageous speed causing all enemies caught in the slash to be dealt 95/120/175/200/215 physical damage

• 85% AD and knocked back.

R: Focused Energy (Active) - Hael changes her energy into focus that depletes over a time, but empowers all of her abilities until her focus runs out. However, if Hael hits and empowered ability she gains 10 focus back and 50 for killing an enemy champion.

Lore:

Hael was only a little girl when the Noxian forces invaded her small village in the eastern borders of Ionia. Her parents and friends died, and many innocent civilians were terribly injured by the hand of Noxus, but Hael and her older and injured sister Rin escaped, out into the giant mountains of Zanku with only small rations of food and water, but most importantly the sword Hael's father had given her, "Xenos". Days passed and Rin was slowly but surely losing the fight against death, her injuries were becoming infected and her muscles became weak and sore until one day, while venturing a vast mountainous land, she collapsed to her knees. She couldn’t go no longer. Her breath was drained out of her lungs and she croaked her last words, "Xenos... It's not.... Fight along side it...." Rin's lifeless body lay in the rocky ground and Hael broken to pieces, having the last person she loved, ripped away from her, was crying, confused, devastated... Three days passed and Hael hadn't seen signs of life other than one or two bugs. Tired and fatigued Hael gnawed away at her last portion of bread while limping over a hill with thick green grass. Humidity filled the air and a cry of pain could be heard in the distance. Hael, overcome with hope that she wasn't the only person alive, sprinted over the hill, tripping over a tree root and falling stomach first in the grass. A dojo. Tons of dark figures surrounded the, but one in specific caught Hael's attention. He emerged out of a small hallway holding the severed head of an old man and wearing blood stained armor. Hael, frightened, crept down the hill and towards the dojo, when Xenos slipped out of her clumsy hands and tumbled all the way down, right under the feet of a young boy, at best 19, wearing torn leather armor and glistening black boots. Almost, as if not noticing Hael at all, he sat, terrified and uncontrollably trembling, whispering, "He's lost it...mad...we're dead...dead!" Screaming, running and swords clashing could be heard all over. Boom! Two ninjas, one wearing sliver blue armor and wielding two short, dagger like swords, and the other, the one Hael saw before, with blades coming out of his sleek black gauntlets were fighting with enough speed and power that the naked eye could barely keep up. Hael picked up Xenos and screamed at the top of her lungs. She'd been through too much, and was tired of seeing blood being split. Xenos glowed blue and Hael dashed with the speed of a bullet, piercing the armor of the shadowed figure knocking him out cold. She was crying, streams of tears ran down her cheeks. Hael's world was spinning and she fell to the ground. Her world went black.

I have created my own sketches for Hael, but I would really appreciate some fan-art or skin concepts for her. Thank you!