Kindred and the Boy

Hey everyone, Just thought I would post what I was working on for the last few hours. It is a short story inspired by the story "A Good Death." I'd like to know what you guys think so far. I'm not close to done yet and I may end up changing or adding some things to the beginning depending on how the story turns out.

I love Kindred and I think the champion and her lore is just astounding. This is what League was missing. For me, it finally feels like we're playing a big boy game full of deep and complex thoughts and ideas. Her dialogue with wolf is just gorgeous. It doesn't even feel like she's fiction, more like just ripped from the pages of an old legend.

Anyways, just reply here to tell me what you think of it. Also, if it is good enough, I want to think about publishing it somehow or sending it to Riot for use in their lore.

Thanks guys!