Character Concept: Brian, Son of Demacia

Kinzard·5/19/2016, 1:36:59 AM·2 votes·813 views

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Lore: As we all know Demacia is filled with Heroes and Brian lived among those heroes aspiring to be one of them. He was a lone orphan raised in Demacia, sustained himself through hard work and his slight obsession with Fiora. He developed his own fighting style watching Fiora's duels. After spending a brief time out of Demacia chasing thrills, encountering noxian slavers and having his whole world turned upside down he came back to Demacia stronger than ever.

Since then he rose through ranks significantly faster than anyone ever could. He is a exceptional commander and a Excellent duelist. One of the most strategically adept and charming of them all. He sits at lower spot in Ranks of Demacia in accord of his own will. He can chose to rise in ranks any day he wishes but he'd rather gawk at Fiora all day than spend his time listening to Jarvan's orders.

Now finally his kit.

Passive: 1-5% flat damage reduction from all sources except turrets and true damage

Q: Foward strike/Position change: in a small line ahead of him(much like Taric's stun) he would dash and hit enemy with x amount of damage but he hits a ally he would shift positions with them instantly

W: Stand Clear! AOE Riposte sheltering allies in a small circle around him from any source of damage for 1 sec. All CC is Negated during this period.

E: Raise Morale(Aura): Him and Allies around him gains attack speed(5-20%) and lifesteal(5-20%) for 1-5 secs

R: Thrill of the Fight: Gains 5-15% of AD Ratio as True Damage for 5 secs and 10-30% movespeed.

Last time I made the lore too big, most people probably gave up halfway through, this time I just Briefed his lore so people can finally take a look at his kit.

He's supposed to be a Fighter/support. one of the rare cases which can work due to his q, which can function as a dash or even better a position change with ally. His W is basically a AOE zhonya's, His E is like GP's old E except it also gives Lifesteal. His R makes him a massive threat for few seconds.

Any thoughts on his kit? what needs to be fixed? I tried my very best but there's alot of changes in numbering that has to happen here.

8 Comments

Sad Tyrant5/19/2016, 9:21:20 AM1 votes

I like the concept, but.....

P: IMO, kinda boring, very simple, but to be fair so is Taliyah's (Idea) You could put his Ult on his passive and put a delay on it. during combat with a champion he gains Thrill of the fight for each second once he reaches 6/5/4 stacks he enters Thrill of the fight gaining bonus true damage for example

Q: while it looks like a Fiora Q, it has has a unique point to it. however it can be use a major troll skill,, e.g, forcing a carry to eat a Cait Ult, putting in the way of CC, (Morgana, Nautilus). maybe allow him to just pass through so its less of a forced move for the champ he hits and give a small MS buff to the allies he passes through

W: WAY TOO STRONG. basically a shen W and Fiora W. and if it is like Zhonya's don't you think you are encroaching a little on Bard and trollish. I recommend thinking of a new ability.

E: This is way too weak and one-sided, what about mages. I recommend something more universal like tenacity, (Idea) perhaps doubling his passive (or just his passive + tenacity) and applying to his allies for X seconds on a massive cd like 25 seconds before CDR.

R: I Don't know, perhaps something more thematic.

I would make him a Manaless champ. of course, this is constructive as I try to be feel free to take anything from this comment for inspiration.

+1*[slayer-jinx-wink]*

Edit: Q maybe have it place him inbetween the nearest enemy champ and the ally

Weiner the Pooh5/19/2016, 5:53:49 PM1 votes

I too would like to ogle flora as opposed to listening toJarvan orGaren

runrunTJ5/20/2016, 2:03:02 AM1 votes

Honestly, he's just way too... dull.

Passive is eh Q is eh W is way too OP E is way too UP R is eh

None of his abilities work together