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Character Concept: Brian, Son of Demacia

Kinzard··2 votes·813 views

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Lore: As we all know Demacia is filled with Heroes and Brian lived among those heroes aspiring to be one of them. He was a lone orphan raised in Demacia, sustained himself through hard work and his slight obsession with Fiora. He developed his own fighting style watching Fiora's duels. After spending a brief time out of Demacia chasing thrills, encountering noxian slavers and having his whole world turned upside down he came back to Demacia stronger than ever.

Since then he rose through ranks significantly faster than anyone ever could. He is a exceptional commander and a Excellent duelist. One of the most strategically adept and charming of them all. He sits at lower spot in Ranks of Demacia in accord of his own will. He can chose to rise in ranks any day he wishes but he'd rather gawk at Fiora all day than spend his time listening to Jarvan's orders.

Now finally his kit.

Passive: 1-5% flat damage reduction from all sources except turrets and true damage

Q: Foward strike/Position change: in a small line ahead of him(much like Taric's stun) he would dash and hit enemy with x amount of damage but he hits a ally he would shift positions with them instantly

W: Stand Clear! AOE Riposte sheltering allies in a small circle around him from any source of damage for 1 sec. All CC is Negated during this period.

E: Raise Morale(Aura): Him and Allies around him gains attack speed(5-20%) and lifesteal(5-20%) for 1-5 secs

R: Thrill of the Fight: Gains 5-15% of AD Ratio as True Damage for 5 secs and 10-30% movespeed.

Last time I made the lore too big, most people probably gave up halfway through, this time I just Briefed his lore so people can finally take a look at his kit.

He's supposed to be a Fighter/support. one of the rare cases which can work due to his q, which can function as a dash or even better a position change with ally. His W is basically a AOE zhonya's, His E is like GP's old E except it also gives Lifesteal. His R makes him a massive threat for few seconds.

Any thoughts on his kit? what needs to be fixed? I tried my very best but there's alot of changes in numbering that has to happen here.

8 Comments

Sad Tyrant1 votes

I like the concept, but.....

P: IMO, kinda boring, very simple, but to be fair so is Taliyah's (Idea) You could put his Ult on his passive and put a delay on it. during combat with a champion he gains Thrill of the fight for each second once he reaches 6/5/4 stacks he enters Thrill of the fight gaining bonus true damage for example

Q: while it looks like a Fiora Q, it has has a unique point to it. however it can be use a major troll skill,, e.g, forcing a carry to eat a Cait Ult, putting in the way of CC, (Morgana, Nautilus). maybe allow him to just pass through so its less of a forced move for the champ he hits and give a small MS buff to the allies he passes through

W: WAY TOO STRONG. basically a shen W and Fiora W. and if it is like Zhonya's don't you think you are encroaching a little on Bard and trollish. I recommend thinking of a new ability.

E: This is way too weak and one-sided, what about mages. I recommend something more universal like tenacity, (Idea) perhaps doubling his passive (or just his passive + tenacity) and applying to his allies for X seconds on a massive cd like 25 seconds before CDR.

R: I Don't know, perhaps something more thematic.

I would make him a Manaless champ. of course, this is constructive as I try to be feel free to take anything from this comment for inspiration.

+1*[slayer-jinx-wink]*

Edit: Q maybe have it place him inbetween the nearest enemy champ and the ally

Kinzard1 votes

I like your Idea of His Passive actually its more Fiora-ish and more duelist like. I am in favour of making "Thrill of the battle" his passive with 5 stacks

for his Q, I think its fine despite how it can used to troll, since its still much better than how Tahm Devour is used or even Trundle's pillar, it takes effort and timing and you adc can just move aside if he thinks you are trolling him.

His W is quite simple, its more like Shen's circle but better. More reactive than passive. It's actually more like Fiora's Riposte except it doesnt hit back nor cc's the enemy. It just eats away all damage. You can still die in it if you are ticking with lethal dot, like ignite. also long cd will keep it from being abused.

His E might look less overwhelming but it can give lane sustain, win trades and even gives him better duel potential. I always loved the idea of Lifesteal Aura which like never ever done in league for some reason.

I like the idea of having Aura tenacity in this slot too though. Dunno if its too OP.

about his R, how about "Marked!" as his new R?

With this ult it debuffs a target making them Damage 20% less for 5 seconds. Marked targets takes additional 10-20-30% additional bonus damage from him and his allies.

With this he's more of a Team-fighter Support-ish duelist. How about that?

Sad Tyrant1 votes

I like the replacement R, as it can be used on assassins to knock them down a peg. (idea) make the damage Reduction scaling with ult 20/25/30%

Maybe make in a Aura of Lifesteal passive 2/3/4/5/6% and when you activate you give tenacity

The W still seems a bit strong, and would be hard to code. (suggestion) so instead It gives damage reduction like 14/23/32/41/50% any closer and we would be entering Ult territory

Kinzard1 votes

The Aura does need to effective even at lower level for him to even be considered as anything of a support so atleast 4/5% at rank one and scales all way to 10% its almost like having a zeke's herald item around you. He doesnt have heal so its his only way of sustain and providing sustain. Also gives him more of a in-combat oriented support that derives sustain from fighting. Also makes him more of a aggressive melee laner.

I like the idea of making passive that is actually pretty sweet I forgot we can do that. 5-10% tenacity aura for people around you at activable. 15-20 sec cd on it and passive aura is lost meanwhile.

and I still believe W is actually quite fine. It has synergy with Q where you switch places with ally in trouble and block incoming damage like Braum's unbreakable. Also its a reactive skill, activable only in small circle around "him" so he needs to be in position, secondly needs to time it with .5 sec delay and he's stationary when he activates it just how fiora's riposte works.

He's good with making exchanges but he has pretty much no reach all his damage comes from melee auto's except q maybe.

so unlike darius you have to work harder to get 5 stacks since no ability applies that.

I should probably update the concept with this much amendments. You good sir, are a genius thanks for you input.

Sad Tyrant1 votes

Just had a major Idea storm swirl through my head!

W Passive Aura Damage reduction 3-5%. Active 10x passive and CC immunity for 1-1.5

E (patch up) You heal an ally based on missing health(within melee range though including you self)/(Vile Scourge!) you strike an opponent and cripple (grounded + 10% reduction on their damage and move speed)(full AA damage plus on-hits) them for 2 secs

R you gain an empowered thrill of fight and give your allies 9/15/21%(maybe a flat amount?) bonus true damage on basic attacks and on spells (33% AOE damage) (for added synergy with his passive)

here ya go inspiration thanks for the compliment

[slayer-jinx-wink]

Edit: you gotta take other stats into consideration like health regen in terms of sustain

Also look up Riposte's definition if you don't know

Weiner the Pooh1 votes

I too would like to ogle flora as opposed to listening toJarvan orGaren

Kinzard1 votes

only few good people realize the true joys of life.

runrunTJ1 votes

Honestly, he's just way too... dull.

Passive is eh Q is eh W is way too OP E is way too UP R is eh

None of his abilities work together

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