New Champ Idea - Marie Annette

Just thought of a champ that would be a pretty cool idea (imo), though I've never made a camp before, and would love some constructive criticism on her! The link is for a picture I drew of her, and it will be updated once ive finished it digitally.

Name: Marie Annette

Lore: Once a real girl, Marie was in love. Every day she put on her best clothes, and sat in front of her mirror, putting on makeup to try to impress her love, but to no avail. One day, Marie was confronted by an old man called the Puppetmaster that told her he could help her in her time of need. Of course, she accepted his offer. He told her that the only way to keep them together forever was to make their bodies and souls last forever, so he needed Marie to bring the love of her life into his workshop. After several weeks, the old man was ready, and Marie had convinced the boy to see what the old man had been working on. They walked into the shop, and were escorted into the back. The old man that Marie had struck the deal with offered them crackers and tea while they waited. When the Puppetmaster emerged from behind the curtain and was holding two life-size dolls, both identical to Marie and the boy. The boy darted for the door, but the Puppetmaster wanted him as a puppet for his collection, so he dropped his doll, and threw a large book at his head to stop him. Marie feared for the worst, and the worst it was. Her love lay in a bloody pool on the floor. Marie was so stricken with grief, that she asked the Puppetmaster to kill her. However, the old man did not plan to loose two of the puppets he had been counting on, so he lied and said he would. Marie felt immense pain on the back of her head, and everything went black. When she awoke, she was a wooden shell, still filled with the grief that she had hoped to lose when she died. When she looked in the mirror, there was a smile painted on her face, and that was the expression that would stay on her face forever.

Passive: When auto attacking, or casting a spell on an opponent, Marie's grief is felt by the enemy, and 5% of health is stolen from enemy champions, +3 damage is done to minions, and monsters.

Q: Marie whips her strings around herself, dealing +20 physical damage to all nearby enemies. Marie steals 20/25/35/45/55% of the damage dealt.

W: The Puppetmaster takes over, and Marie gains +15/17/19/23/26 movement and attack speed for 3 seconds

E: Marie snares an opponent in her strings for 1/2/3/5/7 seconds and then slows their movement speed by 15/20/23/26/29 for 5 seconds

R: Marie jumps in front of target champion, channels for 1.6 seconds, suppressing them for 2.5 seconds dealing 3.5x damage in .4 second intervals