Champion Creation - Ren

Spar10·6/13/2016, 9:01:31 PM·1 votes·545 views

Me and Hellman108 have thought of a champion concept He is a assassin based on Japanese culture that assassinated Master Yi's village. He has a sword with 2 edges (v shape) He has dark magic

Passive - Every 4 Auto's his sword spins and does 15% ad dmg and penetrates 40% armour in a cone AOE

Q - He creates a dark wind/mage wind that does dmg in a line and knocks the enemy back (45 energy) W - He summons dark energy and gives himself a shield and he dashes backwards and if an enemy hits him with the shield, he gains some energy (30 energy)

E - He throws out 1 of the edges of his sword in a cone skill shot (only effects edges) that stuns all enemies hit and he gets a small dmg boost if the stun lans (40 energy)

R - He summons 1 black hole and 1-3 smaller ones (based on near enemies) that when Ren walks through the main one, he can select one of the black holes near his enemies and take them through it to Ren's original black hole (100 energy). This can be countered by a stun which will stop his teleport.

Lore - He was once an Ionian lord, then his family got attacked during noxus invasion, then he searched for revenge and assassinated master yi's village. Then he meets Zed and Zed grants him his Dark magic and he gives him his V shaped sword. Now Ren is planning to overthrow the Ionian goverment and assassinate Karma.

We are looking for feedback and we will sketch this soon. Thank you.

4 Comments

pasta zugotini6/13/2016, 10:48:32 PM2 votes

he is more a fighter than an assassin. assassins are supposed to have a lot of burst and mobility but lack in CC and sustain. that's what makes them assassins, in-and-out plays. your champion on the other hand has a knock back and stun, a lot of AOE damage as well as a shield. this means the only way to balance him is to lower is damage out put, making him a fighter or a tank. you might want to reconsider the direction you are taking with your concept

Chaos6896/13/2016, 9:06:06 PM1 votes

Gar

XCΔLIBUR6/13/2016, 9:23:51 PM1 votes

Yeah, me and DemMoneyz planned this all out for plenty of weeks and we really had great ideas for new champs and lore. we will be uploading our sketch around the after noon in UK so we hope you leave a comment if you like our champion concept or give more suggestion about Ren. Thank you for looking at our creation.

From Hellman108 and DemMoneyz*[slayer-pantheon-thumbs]*