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[Champion Concept][New casting system] Mr. X, The Rich

Devin0220··2 votes·634 views

This is a champion I created, and he will be casting on gold!!! yea GOLD!!!

Story: Mr. X lived in a rich family when he is a child, enjoying the life of being a wealth. However when he was in teenage, one day a bunch of soldiers broke through the main gate, robbed all the valuable, burnt down the rest, and his parent died under soldier's violence and sword. He was lucky enough to become the only survivor by hiding under the bed. He had nothing starting from that moment.

With effort and luck, tears and blood, he spent 10 years and built a great Business ,earned the reputation all over the land, and of course, money.

But he will never forget, the lesson he learnt with the tragedy he had once experienced. Not just looking for more money, he turned to seek power, the power he can control so that no one will ever dare to destroy his "Business Empire" again . Eventually, he found league. He believe that if he can have all those people serving in league turned to serve him, his business will last forever. But he failed, no one was tempted by the money he offered, no matter the amount.

Thus he changed the strategy, he decided to join league. He will tell the people the power of money, teach them a lesson, and one day people will beg to serve him for money.

"First, I will teach you a lesson. Then, I will become your boss." by Mr. X

Teaser 1 "Money is a good thing. Not understand? oh come on then what are those in your pocket?" Teaser to merchant when buy item "Invest for future" Teaser to merchant when sell item "That money! oh come on I earned ten thousand time more than this every day!" Teaser when "paid for death" hit an alliance "Feel the joy of money?" Teaser when he killed an enemy champion "Never hide your money from me, or keep you money and serve me."

Passive: 1.Rich from the poor: when an enemy Champion is killed by Mr. X, 30% of the existing gold owned by the enemy will be robbed and transfer to Mr. X, the effect will be halved when assist. 2. Working Capital Whenever Mr. X leave his base, he will be granted 50/100/150/200 gold (in 1/6/13/18 level), 100 second cold down.

Q, Paid for death: Cost: 0/10/15/20/25 gold cold down: 10/8/6/4/2 second range: 1000 missile speed: 700 Description: Mr. X shoot his gold toward the mouse direction, will be stop by the first target hit.

If it hit an enemy minion , the minion will die immediately.(deal 50% effect to cannon and baron buffed minion, 30% effect to super minion)

If it hit an alliance champion, 5/5/10/15/20 gold will be granted to the alliance and movement speed of the alliance will be increase by 15% for 1 second, no stack effect.

If it hit an enemy champion or Neutral monster, it will deal 25/35/45/55/65(+0.2 Total AD)(+0.05 gold owned) and slow their movement speed by 15% for 1 second, and applied a stack of gold.(Maximum 5 stacks)(Slow effect will be cap at 40%)(Stack lasts for 5 sec without hit)

W, I paid, my place cost: 50 gold in all rank Knock back range: 500/550/600/650/700 Cold down: 15 second in all rank Description: Mr. X paid to rent the place, and conduct the following effect:

If the mouse points to floor, all enemy champion and minion will be knock away from Mr. X

If the mouse points to alliance, all enemy champion and minion will be knock away from the alliance, effective range :700

If the mouse points to enemy champion, all champions(included alliance) except the the target will be knock away from Mr. X

E: Time to pay back No cost cold down: 14/13/12/11/10 passive: Mr. X's basic attack on enemy champion and neutral monster will applied a stack of Gold. Active: Mr. X drained 5 gold for each enemy minion around him (range 1000), and 5 golds from each stack he put on enemy champion. Enemy champion with 3/4/5 stacks will be stunned for 0.5/1/1.5 second. Mr. X will also cause 2.5 % Attack damage on enemy champion's Maximum health per stack. Stack will not applied on the same enemy champion for 14/13/12/11/10 second after casting. (but can stack on other champion while cold down)

R: Money Rules!! Passive: Mr. X get 15/30/45% more gold from killing minion, double the effect if the minion is killed by "Paid for death" Active: Cost 120/240/360 gold cold down 100/80/60 effect range: 1500 Mr. X shows his enthusiasm on Gold and will like to share the feeling desperately to all. Description: Mr. X will automatically cancelled all the recall (All! and all transport too !!) within the range. X will be granted a money buff for 15 second with 3 effect: a) Cold down of "Time to payback" of Mr. X will be shorten to 1 second b) Mr. X can immediately applied stack of gold after the casting of "Time to pay back" However, stunning effect will be removed during the money buff period. c) Stack of gold will be doubled by each basic attack and "pay for death".

Half of the cost will be refund if not kill or assist earned by X during the buff. If Transport (No matter enemy or alliance champion) is cancelled by "Money Rules", its cool down will by shorten to 60 seconds.

4 Comments

LuckyCharmzKid1 votes

I think this is an interesting champion, nice work

Devin02201 votes

Thank you.

regonas1 votes

My friend would like to ask some questions about your concept:

http://i57.tinypic.com/2a6jz0i.png

Ya ya. Don't you think that passive is too strang? Stealing that much gold from enemies would really be game breaking and he will be 100% banned in every game. Oiso, bonus gold when leaving fountain can be abused by jungler with no end. Ya think it's too strang.

Isn't Q just an ultimate farming tiul? You can farm all day with it and be at safe distance or slow enemy champion to no end.

W is just too strange. And knock back distance is crazyyy.

R just look like a pile of ideas. It does 100 things at same time. You should just stick with one thing and keep it going.

Don't be mad, ya just curious. Smell you later.

Devin02201 votes

Wow thanks for your thought.

Mr. X to me is an champion that summoner will always need to consider rather to save gold for fight or to buy more item, and since keep an amount gold is the only way he can keep on in fight, he must found a way to earn more than any champion we currently have.

Let me answer you questions one by one:

  1. Passive: First the amount of gold he can drain can be further adjust, but be honest when you play a champion, normally you won't keep too much gold with you. (I will buy whatever I can when I leave my base :) ) So Mr. X actually gain nothing if he can kill you when you leave your base. How about after a period in lane? How much you normally have when you recall? 1000? so Mr. X can kill you and get 300 golds from you, but don't forget how much he spend to kill you, I guess at least a hundred? Do consider the factor that when you have more, you will then have less incentive to fight Mr.X , so it sounds reasonable to me.

Also, for "Working capital", it was the idea that to keep him at least a chance to fight in early game, other wise after buying the starting item, he can barely fight and get bullied. You also mention about if the Jungler will abuse this passive....the cold down of this ability is 100 second, also unless he can kill the monster with all basic attack, otherwise he also need to cost gold in killing monster. That is also why this passive will scale up per level, not just giving out same amount in all time.

  1. Q: Do consider his cold down, 10 second in level 1, that he cant simply abuse it in early lane I guess (can be adjust too? maybe), it is also a mechanism for him to farm slowly. After this ability level up, the cold down is drop, but more cash is needed, to stack 5 stack without hitting others (don't forget it will also stop by enemy minion). You will need 125 gold at least.

  2. W: the knock back distance is just a range like what Caitlyn cant barely shot you, but it can be adjust further. The reason why you mention it is strange is because it can provided various effect. You can knock back enemy to escape, you can choose to use it to knock back enemy from your AD (So he/she won't get killed immediately. Just like last time that Rengar just jump on me as Vayne brainlessly) , or to clear out a path so you can shoot you ability to the only one you want to.

  3. R: for its passive, in late game I think most of the champion can clear the wave quick and easy, but since Mr.X don't have AOE, I want him to clear wave easier. But considered that he won't use his Q (That cost you 25 gold, and a minion only reward you 25, not to mention the range minion only worth 17 gold) to clear the wave and leads him earning nothing, I think there should have some compensation. won't be much, he still can clear a wave with his Q, but only earn 90% of gold back.

Cancel recall and Teleport (oh not transport!!) can be a fun thing (also a great strategy) in game, especially to stop those hero for abusing TP( Nowadays every top lane just carry one with them) to carry his team mate ( or to save his base from backdoor !?) But consider that it cost a few minutes for teleport to refresh, I therefore shorten the cold down as compensation.

Also it cannot be a ultimate solely (otherwise it is then be too weak comparing with champion with proper ultimate) , so I come up with the effects in R. Don't forget it still cost you gold (more stacks mean more gold is used in fight) to fight when the money buff is on, so if he earn nothing after casting 360 gold, that total loss seems too much for him.

End. See if these can explain and make you satisfied. It is always good that people ask ( coz that mean he read through my stuff , haha!)

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