[Champion Concept] Bob, the Promoted Minion

MisterPazel··1 votes·455 views

Hi all, this is my second champion concept. I named him Bob, because it's the most ordinary name i could think of. :D I appologise in forward for any grammar mistakes, english is not my native language. Anyway, I hope you will like it.

Appearence: From many battles he was in, Bob gathered and used gear from a fallen enemy champions as his gear, so he will have various pieces of armor on him, apart from that, he is regular minion.

Background: Bob served in the minion army since the league itself was founded and he managed to live till today somehow. Maybe luck, maybe caution, even he can't tell how he managed to pull trough situations like Singed's chemical bombardment. Maybe because he found out that gear from fallen champions is much better than his, so he scrapped championchampion gear during battle. He became a legend among minions, and becouse of his good hearth, he often gave life saving advises to newbies. After the most recent review of battle reports, some officer noticed his name beign listed on many reports and after a deeper investigation, ministry foud out he was in more battles than some of the champions. Surprised and impressed by that fact, they offered him retirement from league, which he gladly accepted. But several months later, he was brought back in chains. It seemed that the powerful magic used in a league affecting him in every battle he was at, combined with a flashbackshe got from time to time resulted in his flashbacks affecting reality and after the most recent one the whole village was destroyed by magical cannonballs. Ministry decided that he will serve better in league, but they did not put him in his old place as a minion, instead he became a new champion.

Abilities:

Passive - One of many: First time he is summoned, and after every death, he can choose his gear (melee, ranged, super(if enemy inhibitor is down)), which has effect on all his basic stats. Also, instead of mana, he gains one stack of "feels" for every minion death he witnesses (two if he kills a minion). When he reaches 10 stacks, he becomes blind for 3 secconds and after that cooldowns on his q,w and e are reset and all feels are consumed.

Q - Resign: Bob degrades himself back into minion rank, gaining all benefits and weaknesses of a ordinary minion for (feels×0.25) seconds rounded up(4 feels=1 second, 19 feels= 5 seconds). Cooldown about10 seconds.

W - Passive - Old comrades: Nearby minions with same gear will attempt to attack Bob's target(they will attack if they dont have to move for that attack). Active - Second Wind: Bob raises the movement and attack speed of nearby allies(about 500 units) by (feels×3 rounded up)% decaying over 2 seconds. This ability consumes all feels used. Cooldown about 12 seconds.

E - A moment of Silence: Bob roots himself for 2 seconds in an attempt to honnor his fallen comrades. During this time, every ability used in large area around him by enemy makes that enemy to take magic damage based on Bob's ability power and feels, and silence him for the rest of the ability time. Used feels are consumed. Cooldown about 20 seconds.

R - Flashback: Bob uses the last ultimate he saw beign used by the enemy with a same strength, as if it was cast by the enemy. A cooldown of Flashback is reduced by feels% and feels used are consumed. Cooldown about 180 seconds.

9 Comments

regonas1 votes

Passive: first part is op and strange, second part is just plain wrong. You can't make a champion who is punished for farming.

Q is just stupid.

W is not bad. Could be better, though.

E also could work.

R could be nice, but is too op as it is. It should be toned down somehow and should copy only certain ultimates.

MisterPazel1 votes

can you tell me why is q stupid?

regonas1 votes

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can you tell me why is q stupid?

You transform into normal weak minion for X sec. How is that not stupid?

MisterPazel1 votes

you dont transform into minion, you are just marked as minion. You know, something works only on champions, something works only on minions, something works differently on either...

regonas1 votes

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you dont transform into minion, you retain all your stats, you are just marked as minion. You know, something works only on champions, something works on minions, something works differently on either...

nope "degrades himself back into minion rank, gaining all benefits and weaknesses of a ordinary minion for (feels×0.25) seconds rounded up(4 feels=1 second, 19 feels= 5 seconds)." as it is, it says that you transform into normal minions for X sec.

MisterPazel1 votes

well, sorry for misunderstatement then... it was meant just for beign marked as minion...

StealthWarden1 votes

R - not that op, but really cool. Should in no way scale of the enemy stats, and should still scale of yours. however..wtf do you do if its a zed ult and you dont have any of the shadow button stuff...its basically useless without his kit, sooo....might need to think this one out. PLUS, its not minioneee at all. It really should have something to do with minions.

MisterPazel1 votes

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R - not that op, but really cool. Should in no way scale of the enemy stats, and should still scale of yours. however..wtf do you do if its a zed ult and you dont have any of the shadow button stuff...its basically useless without his kit, sooo....might need to think this one out. PLUS, its not minioneee at all. It really should have something to do with minions.

thats the tricky part about his ult, not every ult is usefull. Also its not that "minioneee" because he minions dont have ults, but are affected by ults aswell...

if it was a zed ult, you will just wait for another... :D

MisterPazel1 votes

Update: added cooldowns for abilities...

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