[Champion Suggestion] Tenebris Sidus, the Destroyer of Worlds.

AFkTree··2 votes·675 views

Hey guys, this is MCG Gamer from a Philippine server. I cannot login to this website using my account in the Philippines so I borrowed an account from this owner. The project is still in progress so I will post updates in the Concepts and Creations. Hope that you would like it. Peace.

When I was thinking about a new champion to be created, I collected a lot of information just to come up with this champion, and I hope that it could be a good one in the Rift. If you like my idea or you have questions and suggestion, kindly post a comment below. I would appreciate the feedback to this.

Name: Tenebris Sidus Epithet: The Destroyer of Worlds

Health: 525 (+80 per level) Attack Damage: 55 (+3.2 per level) Attack Speed: 0.625 (+1.36% per level) Movement Speed: 325 Health Regen: 6.5 (+0.6 per level) Armor: 19 (+3.6 per level) Magic Resist: 30 (+0 per level) Mana: 350 (+ 50) Mana regen.: 6 (+ 0.8) Ranged: 550

Primary Role: Mage Secondary Role: N/A

Appearance: He is a dragon like Aurelion Sol, but he has Void Crystals in his back. He is like void violet in color, with one dark star each in his hands. The dark stars resembles to the ones that Dark Star Tresh had. His jaws are more bigger than Aurelion Sol.

About: Tenebris Sidus is a mage, who is best suited in the back line. His skills have a wide range, dealing damage and crowd control in an area.

Lore (Riot can improve it): Every star has its own beauty and brightness in the skies. But there is only one star out there that brings darkness all over the world.

When I was still in my star-forging ways, I created a star that its brightness would shine across the galaxies. Then after, I saw the star, forming into a creature, that looks like me. I watched the creature wandering around. But then he saw a planet in front of him. Out of his curiosity, he went near the planet to observe it. But then I was shocked on the next scenario. The creature created a hole out of darkness. Then in a blink of an eye, the planet vanished. The creature was happy on what he did. Then, he traveled across the galaxies, and destroyed more.

Then it's the time I need to stop him. I followed him across the galaxies. I saw darkness along the path, with a few stars remaining at the space, still shining it's light. And at last, he was trying to destroy a world that is called Runeterra. Then I forged a new-born star, that traveled towards the creature. I saw the star explode and created a hole of darkness. The creature was about to get sucked by the hole and then he said to me.

"I am Tenebris Sidus, and I shall be back to bring darkness all over the world!"

Then, he vanished. That is the last time I saw him destroying worlds.

Years passed by, everything is at peace. I, then, restored the stars at the skies and carefully not to forge another star like him. But that day came. While I was traveling across the galaxy, I saw a dark hole forming, not far enough from my sight. And then something is coming out from it. And its him. But strange, he had something behind his back. It's like a crystal with a violet color, that I'm afraid, brings dark energy. He saw me and he said this words.

"I'm back brother. I will now continue what's my purpose in this world!"

And then the crystals at his back glowed dark, creating an energy that is not from this world. He, then, created a black hole. But he is not getting sucked inside. How is he able to control such a strong force without getting sucked inside?. Then he entered it without fear, then the hole vanished. And I know he is going to destroy more. It was a big mistake.

"One day, I'll see the stars from the skies vanish one by one before my eyes" - Aurelion Sol

Skills (Riot can improve the damage, cost, cooldown, etc.):

Passive: Dark Energy Whenever Tenebris Sidus casts an ability, He stores an immense dark power in his back, gaining a stack of Dark Energy, stacking up to 5 times. At 5 stacks, his next ability cast has a bonus effect and consumes all the stacks. After consuming all the stacks, Tenebris Sidus cannot generate Dark Energy for 15 seconds.

Q: Dark Star Tenebris Sidus spawns a dark star at a location, dealing 70 / 110 / 150 / 190 / 230 (+ 65% AP) damage to all enemies hit, and remains for 6 seconds. When he casts Dark Star on an existing Dark Star, the star will explode, dealing 80 / 120 / 160 / 200 / 240 (+ 65% AP) damage in an area around it. Empowered by Darkness: Dark Star deals 95 / 135 / 175 / 215 / 255 (+ 65% AP) damage. If casted on an existing Dark Star, it will deal 120 / 160 / 200 / 240 / 280 (+ 65% AP) damage and stuns enemies for 1.1 / 1.2 / 1.3 / 1.4 / 1.5 second/s. RANGE: 800 AoE RANGE: 450 COST: 40/50/60/70/80 Mana COOLDOWN: 4

W: Pulse of Darkness Tenebris Sidus sends dark pulses around him, dealing 70 / 115 / 160 / 205 / 250 (+70% Ability Power) damage enemies in an area. He can then cast Pulse of Darkness within 3 seconds to increase the damage before going on cooldown. The second cast deals 75 / 120 / 165 / 210 / 255 (+70% Ability Power) damage and the third cast deals 80/125/170/215/260 (+70% Ability Power) damage. Additionally, each cast increases the manacost. Empowered by Darkness: Pulse of Darkness deals 80/125/170/215/260 (+70% Ability Power) damage. RANGE: 400 AoE RANGE: 250 COST: 70/80/90/100/110 Mana (+20 mana/cost) COOLDOWN: 10

Updated(10/11/2016, 8:17 PM) E: The Dimensional Warp Tenebris Sidus channels for 2 seconds to create a dimensional warp gate from his location to the chosen location. The warp gate lasts for 10 seconds and he, his allies or enemies can enter either of the two gates, instantly warping to the location. Enemies that enter the gate are revealed for 3 seconds. Empowered by Darkness: Increases the duration by 15 seconds. RANGE: 3000/3500/4000/4500/5000 COST: 80 Mana COOLDOWN: 60/55/50/45/40

R: Black Hole Tenebris Sidus channels for 3 seconds to create a giant, massive, black hole that slowly pulls all enemies towards the center. Fleeing enemies are slowed for 50% / 55% / 60% during the duration. After channeling for 6 seconds, the black hole becomes unstable and explodes, dealing 200 / 300 / 400 (+70% Ability Power) damage to all enemies in the area. After the channel is completed, Tenebris Sidus grants 5 stacks of Dark Energy. If the channel is cancelled (by the use of stuns, airbourne, etc.), Tenebris Sidus cannot get 5 stacks of Dark Energy. RANGE: 1300 AoE RANGE: 650 COST: 100 Mana COOLDOWN: 120/100/80

Hope that Riot will choose the champion and someday, I'll see my own champion in the rift. Its MCG Gamer's idea from the LoL Philippine Server. Thanks for reading. Peace.

21 Comments

AgeOfTheMage1 votes

i skipped the abilities, ill go back up and read them, but pretty much another void creature? sounds cool!

AgeOfTheMage1 votes

okay, i read through the abilities, considering most of the abilities are aoe i recommend lowering the scaling, or the base damage. seems nice though, your q is like syndras, the ult reminds me of either nunu or galio ult. as for the e, it's cd might be around the one of ashe's E cause most teleport abiltiies with a long range are ults, if not the cd, the range, so it'd be a blink, and maybe have the amount of people go through it increase per lvl(ability lvl) and maybe instead of slowing, maybe it reveals them. I was gonna sya something else bu i forgot XD. is the w like a rammus ult? i like the passive idea, but what about having 5 stacks and ulting? otherwise, seems nice, but maybe you could intergrate some.. combo-ability? i'm not sure how to explain it, i jsut love champs with combos and options.

AFkTree2 votes

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AgeOfTheMage1 votes

mmh, i love helping people with champ suggestions, let me know once you've edited it and i'd love to read it over again. :D

AFkTree1 votes

I've updated the E skill effect and I did just like what you had said earlier. Kindly just check it if there are still changes that I need to make. Thanks.

AgeOfTheMage1 votes

thinks are looking better( i dislike critiquing people cause i don't want to sound wrong, or offend them) It's a great idea and i hope he gets added.

AFkTree1 votes

It's ok. This is my first champion suggestion and I really want it to be created by Riot. So I really appreciate your help and thanks a lot.

AgeOfTheMage1 votes

yeah, and no need to keep thanking me, I love helping people create champs, i might try making one myself(might, if i can think of something)

AFkTree1 votes

Just create a champ and I got your back.

AgeOfTheMage1 votes

:D ty.

AFkTree1 votes

By the way, the champion I suggested is like Aurelion Sol. I searched the word Aurelion Sol which means "Golden Sun" and this champion is the counterpart of him. The name Tenebris Sidus means "Dark Star". So he's just like Aurelion Sol, a Dragon but with the power of the dark star.

AgeOfTheMage1 votes

there ARE dark star skins but i don't think that will be too much of a problem.

AFkTree1 votes

It just get into my mind the dark star things in their hands and the thing that I watched Aurelion Sol and then that's the time that I think of it.

AgeOfTheMage1 votes

so far not many other people have commented or voted yet, but it will grow!

AFkTree1 votes

Thanks. You just give me hope.

AFkTree2 votes

Thanks for the suggestion! don't worry, I'll fix the scaling and to make it more better. The W effect is like the active effect of the Randuin's Omen but a wider area. Thanks again for reading! Peace.

AFkTree1 votes

Hello guys! feel free to comment below and I will just view it because I have my classes. Don't worry, I can still view it after i got from school and on weekends. Peace.

AgeOfTheMage1 votes

yeah, im in class rn, its about to end so i might be able to chat later

KrakenDatBooty1 votes

From what it looks like, his niche is too much like Aurelion Sol. He'd basically be an edgier version of him. His q I think would look an act to much like syndra and seems to serve the same purpose as Aurelion Sol's q, some burst damage but with a clunky, conditional stun. His W(which i'm assuming you would spam) would be his close to mid range persistent damage like Sol's w, and his e is a roaming ability that is just more broken version of Sol's e. The only big difference is r which i admit is a pretty cool ability for play making, Like an awesome follow up to an alistar combo or ori ult.

But he's just too similar to sol. The way I see it, in order to abuse the brokenness of his w, he'd have to consistently keep close proximity with his enemies, and in order to do that, he'd have to build tanky with rylais. We now have a tanky, mid-range DPS dragon mage. Aurelion Sol.

And this isnt even addressing the broken short cd cross map multi ally blink, or the broken scalings and bases for spammable aoe abilities. I'm sorry but this would need to be seriously revised for it to work.

Edit: Sorry reread this and felt i was too harsh. If Aurelion Sol didnt exist, with some revisions this would be an awesome champ with a great niche. Its just that Sol already fills this niche and character type so there isn't much point in doing it again.

AgeOfTheMage1 votes

nah, criticism is good for people.

GerAvos1 votes

Destroyer of worlds? A dragon? Uh, are you from purezc?

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