The Mischievous Adventures part 261

Silverninj28··1 votes·1,243 views

(Later)

Camille: Groans Orianna: "Hey Mom!" Camille: "What is it you-....What is it Orianna?" Orianna: "I found this cute little guy in a alley, and wanted to see if we can adopt him." Gnar: "Yip!" Camille: "What!? No! Absolutely not!" Orianna: "Why?" Camille: "I refuse to have a stinking stray mut in this house!" Orianna: "But Mom-" Jayce: "What's going on here?" Camille: "Our-.....Orianna, has brought in this disgusting mut in here and she has the audcity to want to adopt it!" Jayce: "Hmmm." Orianna: "Dad?" Jayce: "......When's it your decision to say things to my daughter?" Camille: "Excuse me?" Jayce: "EXCUSE YOU! You better go up there and leave her alone before I do something to you." Camille: "You-Jayce you son of a-....Fine." Walks away Jayce: "Now Orianna, you can little fellow with you as long as your responsible." Orianna: "Um....Ok Dad....." Jayce: "Perfect, I'll get food and other things." Orianna: "......Um also Dad?" Jayce: "Hm?" Orianna: "Are you and Mom ok?" Jayce: "........Yes, but I care for you more." Orianna: ".......Ok Dad." Jayce: "Good, now you two run along." Orianna: "......Come on little guy, I guess I got to name you now." Gnar: "Yip....." Orianna Gnar: Leave Jayce: ".......Why would that women speak so low about her?" Camille: ".....Why does that man love that machine so much?"

3 Comments

Silverninj281 votes

WOW! I just got around here and saw my view go up extremely! I don't know if I did anything bad or anything (I hope not) but....how did this happen? How did this get the most viewed? I just want to no really.

Ifneth1 votes

Because you suddenly started ‘actually writing’. No more cute joke-a-day skits. Now there’s fully-realistic yet engaging psychodrama. The complexity and richness of this post is miles beyond your usual work.

That said, I love the joke-a-day stuff and want to keep seeing it. Please don’t turn this into The Brothers Karamazov.

Ifneth1 votes

O_O This is... serious. I never expected you to go all-in on this. Jayce is a monster. He abuses Camille and manipulates Orianna. Camille is forced to pretend to love a daughter she never wanted. Orianna never asked for this and just wants to love her dog.

If you keep going, then this will be some of the most complex writing you’ve ever done.

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