[Champion Concept] - Eclair, the Seeker.

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Primary Role: Fighter Secondary Role: Mage Secondary Bar: Mana

Gender: Female Race: Human Birthplace: Noxus Faction: Independant

Appearance:

Long dark red hair. Grey eyes. Long side bangs reaching her chest, and forehead bangs ending at her eyebrows. White\reddish complexion.

She wears a marine green hoodie decorated with armor pieces about the sleeves\elbow. With a grey tank top revealing minimal cleavage, average bust. A Locket sits in the middle of her chest located next to her collarbone's faded wound. The insides of the hoodie is made of wolf fur that has a faded light blue tint + linings along the hood to zipper.

She wears blue-green jeans lightly armored down to her tall silver\grey\black boots. Black painted fingernails. Two small cuts on her right cheek. Her sword tilts upward hugging her backside, holding the blunt part of her hilt forward. (Opposite of traditional one handed sword weilding.)

Eclair's locket contains pictures of Emilia and her father. It is openly visible and has a dangling animation that shifts between Emilia and her father's photos.

• HEALTH 586 – 2099

• HEALTH REGEN. 7.4 – 21.9

• MANA 297 – 977

• MANA REGEN. 6.0 – 19.6

• MELEE 150

• MOV. SPEED 343

• ATTACK DAMAGE 53 – 104

• ATTACK SPEED [*] 0.625 (+0% – 38.3%)

• ARMOR 26.0 – 87.2

• MAGIC RES. 32.1 – 53.4

• Attack Power: 7

• Defense Power: 5

• Ability Power: 7

• Difficulty: 5

Passive: Endurance of Noxus

If Eclair does %10 of the enemy unit's health she activates a debuff that slows and cripples the enemy which deals magic damage to them over 4 seconds, any further damage dealt by Eclair during this period is to be increased by a percentage. If further damage was applied, then at the end of the duration Eclair warps the surrounding atmosphere to deal bonus magic damage to the affected units.

Damage increases by level. to a maximum of 5.

SLOW: 40% for 2 seconds

REFRESH: 18 seconds

MAGIC DAMAGE: 40 / 50 / 75 / 130 / 200 (+ 80% AP) EXTRA DAMAGE: 7 / 11 / 14 / 17 / 20%

Q: Regret

Skillshot

Eclair hurls herself towards an enemy champion grabbing them momentarily and slashing their throat quickly then repositions.

1. If succesfully hit, Regret gives a small window to escape to a selected area within a 430-radius.
2. If Eclair lands Regret sucessfully at max range she will deal %4 more damage.
3. bleeds target for 4 seconds

RANGE: 500 COST: 55 / 60 / 65 / 70 / 75 MANA COOLDOWN: 11 / 10 / 9 / 8 / 7

MAGIC DAMAGE: 80 / 130 / 180 / 230 / 260

bleed: 12 / 15 / 17 / 20 / 23 / 26 / 29 / 33 / 36 (+ 30% bonus AD) magic damage over 4 seconds

W: Crescent Chaser

Skillshot

Eclair positions herself to sweep a lengthy curved gust of wind from her left hand. Does bonus damage as it travels. Expands\lengthens as it travels. Applies a debuff to target lowering their base ap & ad resistance and slows.

RANGE: 875 COST: 60 MANA COOLDOWN: 10 / 9 / 8 / 7 / 6

RESIST DEBUFF: %6 for 5 seconds

SLOW DEBUFF: 75% for 1.5 seconds

MAGIC DAMAGE: 60 / 95 / 130 / 165 / 200 (+ 70% AP)

E: Visible Tears

Passive: Increased attack speed each level

Active: Eclair stacks up to 5 attacks. Her strikes emit to a distance dealing bonus AD & AP The second and fifth attack slows the enemy unit for 3.5 seconds (Able to move while casting)

COST: 45 MANA COOLDOWN: 10 / 9 / 8 / 7 / 6

RANGE: 350

ATTACK DAMAGE: 15 / 20 / 25 / 30 / 35

MAGIC DAMAGE: 60 / 110 / 160 / 210 / 260 (+ 100% AP)

SLOW: 30 / 35 / 40 / 45 / 50%

ATTACK SPEED: 15 / 20 / 25 / 30 / 35%

Ult: Agony's Embrace

Single-target

Eclair marks an enemy champion dealing damage, if it is followed up with Regret or Auto Attack Eclair will stun the enemy champion and enter into a full series of slashes applying grevious wounds. If the champion dies to the ult she regains 15% of her maximum mana.

Requires follow up for maximum damage.

Mark RANGE: 720 COST: 100 MANA COOLDOWN: 80 / 55 / 35

(Mark)MAGIC DAMAGE: 150 / 200 / 250

(Follow up)MAGIC DAMAGE: 200 / 330 / 400 (+ 100% AP)

Lore.

Orphaned, on the outskirts of noxus she wandered. Where others saw a helpless shy girl in Eclair, a noxian man saw a pair of studious, wandering eyes. He saw her again for the second time envolved in a scuffle, there he observed her quickess to adapt, and suddenly something else about her intruiged him. Her movemets were abnormal. She seemed to fit lightly into the pocket of surrounding air, weaving around with ease. In a few short steps she outsmarted her male opponent making him fall face first, ending the confrontation.

In that moment, he felt fated. At first she ignored the grey haired man's intent. But later, as the sun fell, she gave into his pestering questions. He offered to adopt her, and to take care of her in the city. He would do all of this, only if she allowed him to teach her his deceased family's incomplete fighting techniques. And so, the anxious Eclair, whom never experienced the city, took the deal.

She grew up to witness "The Fleshing" It was a gruesome and cruel gladiatorial event Eclair secretly regarded in disgust. It was this event that shook her, causing hesitace. She decided to withhold herself from the very thought of killing blows. She became very observant. Eclair didn't develope the desire for facial expressions. Rarely, she'd smile to her adopted father.

During a first of many visits to the outskirts of noxus, an altercation broke out between a much younger girl and a older guy. He explains how the girl dishonered him, angrily reaching out to strike the frail girl, Eclair stepped in to save the girl from the force of the man, then promptly asked for his forgiveness, posing as the girl's sister. But he didn't back off, demanding Eclair to step up for the girl's wrongs. She took the hits he threw to appease the stranger rather than fight. And so satisfied, he gave in. The girl thanked Eclair, vowing forever to call her sister.

Emilia always managed to find Eclair during her visits. Following her everywhere she went outside the city. They later developed a sibling relatioship. Eclair would always talk to her now younger sister about things she kept hidden away from her father.

Eclair's sister was obsessed with the stories of "The League of Legends" and thought her sister would be the best champion. But before Eclair could muster up the courage to ask her father to adopt the poor girl, she passed due to an illness that she alone kept secret.

To treasure her sister's memory, she seeked to join "The League of Legends" to mourn her loss, leaving behind her hesitance till the time she'd felt satisfied.

"If I could talk to the dead, Emilia..."

• Eclair

Summoners:

Core:

Offensive Items:

Defensive Items:

Lines:

Upon Selection: "So... it's come to this."

Movement:

"Emilia.." "Hesitance..?" "Your stories... they're all true." "I see the way." "Father, I'll show them our way." "Forever sisters." "Fields of justice..." "It's come clear to me." "I'm here sister." "My steps are yours."(refering to emilia) "I cannot look back."

Joke:

Interaction with "Oh, how my sister would kill to have that bear." "A cat, and a mouse play house... think it over, I can wait."

Taunt:

"How many fingers am I holding up...? You'd know, If you were still alive."

Attack:

"Don't start what I'll finish." "For your memory." "This is necessary." "Make the first move." "For what once was." "Letting go." "To use what was taught." "Strength begets strength." "No longer holding back."

When Visible Tears is used.

"Het,Het!,He,Het,Ha!" "Hra,Hra!,Hwo,Hra,Ha!" (The second and fifth attack slows the enemy unit for 3.5 seconds)

When Agony's Embrace is Marked.

While Agony's Embrace is marked you can hear Eclair going in and out of sobs and the slight sound of what would be emilia's voice.

When Agony's Embrace is followed up.

"Farewell.." Scream(Emilia - Eclair in unison) "Know my pain!" "Suffering!" "What do you know!?"(Sobing\Amidst tears)

Eclair could be a kite duelest \ late game threat \ squishie deleter. while getting off great aoe in clumped \ jungle teamfights.

Lane: Top \ Mid.

I'll be honest I'm not sure how to address the numbers for skills and stats for the character. Help with balancing would be appreciated. I just really wanted to try making a champion concept with my limited knowledge.

If there are things that need fixing, please post.

If there are balancing concers please help me find alteratives.

EDIT: Passive change.