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champion concept: Isabelline & Pygo, The Iceborn penguins

Shuyva·8/15/2014, 3:06:21 PM·1 votes·1,016 views

I have already done this concept a while ago, on the general discussions, but I want to post it here, hoping anyone likes it.

Isabelline & Pygo, The Iceborn penguins

Lore:

In Freljord , Pygo lived quietly with his parents, his mother Isabelline and his father Celis . They were the most feared penguins in their tribute, The Winter's Claw. Pygo is the only penguin to have the ability to summon ice or water. Isabelline was a different penguin, she was not black and white like all the other penguins , but brown and white . She was weak, but curiously Pygo was stronger, unbeatable, able to handle ice and water.

One day , the father of Pygo left for a long journey, without saying where he was going. He never returned . Pygo, worried about what could have happened to his father Celis, wanted to know it, but noone knew where he went or what could have happen. One day a big white bear, Volibear , a good friend of Celis, reported news on Pygo's father. He told Pygo and Isabelline where Celis was. They went to the fields of Howling abyss. In a corner, there as an penguin, he was freezed in a dark ice. A splitter of ice pierces his body. So Pygo and Isabelline knew, that Celis was killed and freezed by someone.

Pygo has sworn to find the person who killed his father and wanted to revenge him. Isabelline told him, not to go, but noone could change his mind. Therefore, he asked Volibear to train him, so that he can take revenge of his father. During his training, he discovered, that without the presence of his mother, he could not summon ice or water. He explained his mother the situation, that he can't use his powers without Isabelline beeing around. As she was also furious about this tragedy, she was willing to help Pygo in his journey, even if she find it absurd to go through such an adventure, she didn't want to let Pygo alone on his journey.

However Isabelline felt, that Pygo was not strong enough. Isabelline and Pygo, therefore enter League of Legends. Once there, they discovered, that the murderer of their beloved was killed by a person that is in the League. Without hesitation Pygo search for the one who might be the murderer.

Untill now, they still dont know who is the person who killed Celis, but Pygo won't give up.

passive: ''Pygo & the Tobogganging''

You have a companion Pygo, he is the one who uses the abilities. (cannot die) controllable with ''alt'', has a certain range, if going out of the range, Pygo will follow you). Range where Pygo can go; 300

He attack's the enemy's that you're attacking with Isabelline. (he cannot attack turrets or be attacked by turrets) --(he will do 15 (+ 10% of your Ap)-- All your ice abilities frozes the ground you move quickly in it and also Pygo. +35% of your movement speed

All your water abilities gives you and allies armor and magic resist.

  • 25 armor
  • 25 magic resist

1st ability: ''Freezing breath''

Mana cost and cooldown:

a.50/55/60/65/70 b.9/8.5/8/7.5/7sec

Active: Your companion Pygo will freeze the ground, in a line. Every enemy that is touched by the ice can't move and they take damage.

Rooted; 1/1.25/1.5/2.25/2 sec . Damage: 25/30/40/45/50 (+ 50% of your Ap) Cast Range: 750

2nd ability:''Hot spring Bubble''

Mana cost and cooldown:

a.70/75/80/85/90 b.8/7.5/7/6.5/6 sec

Active: An Water shield will surrender you, the shield will regenerate a percentage of your health.( you dont get a shield, but only like potions health restore) At the activation every enemy that is near you will take a certain damage.

Restored health: 40/60/80/100/120health (+ 35% of your AP) each second for 4 sec Damage; 35/40/55/60/75(+ 0.02 of missing health from who is shielded) Damage radius: 155 Cast Range; 900

When beeing in the shield the time of slow's, stuns and fear's are decrease.

  • 25% of stuns, slows and fear for 2.5 sec

3rd ability:''Yell of Pygo''

Mana cost and cooldown:

a.60/65/70/75/80 b.10/10/10/10/10sec

Active: Pygo gaves a sound, and every enemy that is in front of him in a cone of 90 degree will be feared.

Cast range; 355

4th abilty:''Freezing Whirl pool''

Mana cost and cooldown:

a.120/130/140 b. 90/85/80sec

Active:

Pygo goes to the back of Isabelline. Isabelline hits the ground, in front of her an whirl pool appered, in the middle of the cast. Enemy's that are in the middle of the cast are knocked up. After the whirl pool, the water is inverse to pieces of ice. They fall an make the ground frozen and the enemy's will be damage and slowed.

knocked up effect; 1.5 sec Slow : -25% movement speed for 2 sec Damage; 300/500/600 (+ 80% of your AP) Cast range: 600

AUTO-ATTACK:

Isabelline will throw eggs to the enemy's. Pygo will throw ice splits to the enemy. ''15(+ 10% of your Ap) as true damage''

STATS:

Health : 350 (+ 73) Health regen. : 5.4 (+ 0.55) Mana: 320 (+ 65) Mana regen; 5.6 (+ 0.5) Range: 425 (Ranged) Attack Damage : 38 (+ 2) Attack Speed : 0.6250( + 2.22 %) Armor : 8 (+ 4.2) Magic Resist : 30 (+ 0) Mov. Speed : 325

HERE is the link:http://forums.euw.leagueoflegends.com/board/showthread.php?t=1663554&highlight=pygo

Feel free to let me know if you like it, or there should be anything changed, or maybe something that isn't is clear enough.

And HERE are(the last on the list) How they would look like. :http://forums.euw.leagueoflegends.com/board/showthread.php?t=1704019&highlight=pygo

REDIT: I put a picture how they would look like. :P

3 Comments

Elemon8/16/2014, 6:53:49 PM1 votes

Hmmm... I really like the idea of a permanent pet or something, but this seems a bit overpowered. As for the passive, 15 plus .1 AP is a lot of bonus damage, much less TRUE damage. Late game, that's around 80 bonus true damage per attack. The damage shouldn't be true, in my opinion. Also, the part where you essentially have a controllable Pix by itself is powerful enough; you don't really need the rest of it. +70% MS in all ice abilities is a lot. So is up to around +100 armor and MR. The passive would be fine without these... With his E, the fear is cool, but I don't really see why it would bleed enemies. It doesn't really thematically fit, and an AoE instant fear is pretty powerful even without damage. The W, on the other hand, seems weak. These penguins seem to be support mages, but their heal is sorta useless until they start stacking AP... Especially since it's a HoT. It should probably heal for more so it isn't half useless early... Overall, I like the idea, but they have a LOT of utility and damage. 3 of their attacks are AoE CC (an immobilize, a fear, and a knockup/slow), yet they still have lots of damage. You might want to tone that down a bit (though I will admit, I'm not extremely good at balancing damage). On a side not, almost all effects scale smoothly with levels (each level in an ability gives the same boost). The root duration of their Q might want to be standardized (1 plus .25 per level?).

TL;DR: Passive doesn't need TRUE damage or the other effects; E doesn't need bleed (or really damage at all); W should be stronger early; overall an extreme amount of utility and damage.