DJ Sona Youtube Intros - Feedback Requested

Greetings Summors, My name is FBIFATGUY, know on youtube as Bigpony Network, I am a Video Editor, always trying to create new things, Intros are fun to make, and many people request them from me on my various social media platforms, I suspended the project for some time, do improve my MLG Montage editing skills, which mind you, is a very fun style of video to make. This Intro is an Adaption of my fire intro, and DJ Sona's Music from Youtube. I have 2 Versions of the Intro i'd like to Show off, They are in the testing phase so they are not as clean as some of my past projects

Here's Intro #2 The Chibi Sona Version :D https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=80QBZPvDHZo

About me, and League the short version - I am a platinum 2 support main just got demoted to plat 2 from 1 I cri, But i intend on getting back into 1 and pushing for diamond! I am a US Army veteran, Hooah to all my Army Brothers out there, and mad respect for First responders/Other Branches

FBIFATGUY - Lead editor/Owner of Bigpony Network Network Admin - Marble Pie Partnered Artist: Explodacola, Dorothy. Welp im ed, Time for Sleep, Please Leave Feedback, your thoughts help!