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Champion Concept: Apok - The Joy of Death

stone the blacks·11/15/2017, 4:54:48 AM·1 votes·276 views

Bio A demon created by a failed experiment from a necromancer messing with Vastayan corpses and dark magic. The beast is a twisted form of random bones on for legs with large pincer claw like things on one side of it and a tail. It lacks a head and a face. and covered in dried blood. {i know this is a shit bio with little effort, its 1 am im tired and dont feel like putting more than this into it}

Base Stats HP: 575 (+95) Regen: 11 (+1.2) AD: 65 (+5.5) AS: .640 (+1.7%) Armor: 32 (+3.75) MR: 32.1 (+1.25) MS: 355 Range: 125

[P] Excited Blood Lust Apok's next ability or attack will mark an enemy for 2 seconds {4s CD per unit}. While the target is marked Apok gains MS {up to a maximum of 50% MS} equal to 50% of their missing health while moving towards them and heals for damage dealt to them equal to 25% of their missing health {up to a maximum of 25% healing}

[Q] Corpse Desecration [Passive] Apok picks up corpses he kills up to a maximum of 6. Maximum is achieved by any of the following: 6 minions/small monsters, 2 large monsters or 1 enemy champion [Active] Apok causes all of he corpses he has collected to explode dealing 90/150/210/270/330 (+10% Bonus HP) as magic damage in a radius. If Apok does not have a full corpse collection he can sacrifice 5% current HP for each corpse he is missing

CD: 12/11/10/9/8 Cost: - - Range: 500 radius

[W] Skeletal Deconstruction [Passive]: Apok ignores armor equal to 10%/20%/30%/40%/50% of the targets missing health [Active]: Apok's next attack will grant him armor equal to 50% of the targets for 2.5 seconds increased by .5 seconds each time Excited Blood Lust is applied

CD: 18/17/16/15/14 Cost: 5% current HP Range: - -

[E] Dread Hunt Apok leaps forward dealing 100%/105%/110%/115%/120% AD physical damage in a small radius on impact. If the Ability does not damage an enemy (excluding minions) the CD is instantly refunded but the cost increases by 100%. If Dread Hunt is used 5 times in a row without damaging an enemy champion or monster it will deal 150% damage and apply a 1.25 second fear to targets damaged.

CD: 8 Cost: 3% current hp Range: 350 dash / 200 landing radius

[R] Behemoth Apok tears into an enemy champion dealing 150/200/250 (+75% Bonus AD) physical damage. Damage is increased by 1.5% per 1% missing health. Resets on kill.

CD: 12/9/6 Cost: 10% current Hp Range: 300

1 Comments

Terakali11/15/2017, 7:16:13 AM1 votes

[P] Excited Blood Lust Apok's next ability or attack will mark an enemy for 2 seconds {4s CD per unit}. While the target is marked Apok gains MS {up to a maximum of 50% MS} equal to 50% of their missing health while moving towards them and heals for damage dealt to them equal to 25% of their missing health {up to a maximum of 25% healing}

This doesn't specify how it's triggered anywhere, so... Okay?

[Q] Corpse Desecration [Passive] Apok picks up corpses he kills up to a maximum of 6. Maximum is achieved by any of the following: 6 minions/small monsters, 2 large monsters or 1 enemy champion [Active] Apok causes all of he corpses he has collected to explode dealing 90/150/210/270/330 (+10% Bonus HP) as magic damage in a radius. If Apok does not have a full corpse collection he can sacrifice 5% current HP for each corpse he is missing

CD: 12/11/10/9/8 Cost: - - Range: 500 radius

Assuming this explodes around him, this is actually a fairly balanced ability. Decent casting requirements, potential cost, damage (though it's rather high, within reason), and range. Well done.

[W] Skeletal Deconstruction [Passive]: Apok ignores armor equal to 10%/20%/30%/40%/50% of the targets missing health [Active]: Apok's next attack will grant him armor equal to 50% of the targets for 2.5 seconds increased by .5 seconds each time Excited Blood Lust is applied

CD: 18/17/16/15/14 Cost: 5% current HP Range: - -

Bullshit. That passive is complete bullshit. No matter who you are or what you build, it's basically impossible to have more armor than 50% of your HP, and most tanks only approach 10%, so... Bullshit.

The active is fine, I guess, but it's still rather overpowered. This is a Trundle Ult worthy effect as a reliable basic ability.

[E] Dread Hunt Apok leaps forward dealing 100%/105%/110%/115%/120% AD physical damage in a small radius on impact. If the Ability does not damage an enemy (excluding minions) the CD is instantly refunded but the cost increases by 100%. If Dread Hunt is used 5 times in a row without damaging an enemy champion or monster it will deal 150% damage and apply a 1.25 second fear to targets damaged.

CD: 8 Cost: 3% current hp Range: 350 dash / 200 landing radius

The complete refund is kind of dumb, giving him up to 5 dashes (the is a 4% HP leftover) with no secondary requirements. On top of that, I ran that with the assumption that it was doubling each time, but the way you phrased it might leave it to .3/.6/.9/.12 ad nosium, at which case he's basically Kassadin in URF.

[R] Behemoth Apok tears into an enemy champion dealing 150/200/250 (+75% Bonus AD) physical damage. Damage is increased by 1.5% per 1% missing health. Resets on kill.

CD: 12/9/6 Cost: 10% current Hp Range: 300

A high damage resetting execute with a tiny cooldown even when it isn't reset which bears no real cost if he just gets a Death's Dance. Imagine if Darius' ult was this for a second. Then give Darius infinite dashes, more than 100% armor pen, and an AoE burst without an significant delay or positioning requirements. Brilliant.