Raycor, The Prophesized

The Lonely Rakan·9/16/2017, 12:17:53 AM·2 votes·501 views

Hello hello my fellow fans of league of legends. I was just going to town on making a champion. please critical in how he would fit and make suggestions on how he could be better.

Now to start off Raycor has this nifty Passive called "Jack of all Trades" that allows him to choose a weapon to use for the entire game. Not only that but based on the weapons uses the effects of his abilities change so picking him will fit into most Team comps. Picking the Bow and Arrow Makes im an ADC, Picking the Shield makes him a tank, Picking the Staff Makes him a Jungler, Picking the Health sign Makes him a Support, Picking the dagger makes him an assassin, and Picking the wand Makes him a mage.

His Q is Speed of Light. Raycor Dashes to a target location at a very fast pace. It should be known you cant travel over walls with this ability. (There are exceptions) Depending on what you choose, this move has different affects.

As a Mage you send an after image of yourself forward that stays there and damages the enemy if they are hit. After the Spell reaches maximum range the after image stays there a little bit and you can choose to reactivate the ability to teleport to it for no cost. You can travel over walls with it As a Mage and even attack people through walls. 

As a Tank you simply charge forward Knocking back any enemies in your path. If you and the enemy collide with a wall they take damage and re stunned for a short duration. 

As a Support your dash creates a wide stream that not only heals over time but gives a slight bit of movement speed to you and your allies that pass through it. You can travel over walls as a support. 

As an ADC you can use this to engage or disengage while still attacking. Dashing forward towards an enemy within range will release a volley of arrows their way dealing damage and slowing them. 

As a Jungler this is Simply Just a Dash to get over walls, Escape, and gap close. However it does have a nifty ability to create a dust cloud that slows and makes enemies that enter the cloud nearsighted.

As an Assassin, this ability allows you to Use the light to shroud yourself from enemy sight for a long but limited amount of time.

Raycor's W is Called Enlightened Strike. The ability causes Raycor to gain a short attack speed boost.

As A Mage, this ability Wraps his wand in light and his auto attacks do a Percentage of Raycor's AP as on hit Magic Damage for 5 seconds. 

As a Support, Raycor Rams into the Enemy knocking them back.

As a Tank, Raycor gains the resistances of the last Champion attacked while the spell is active. 

As an ADC, Raycor's auto attacks crit chance goes up by a lot as well as gains an attack speed boost.

As an Assassin Raycor gains not only an attack speed boost but he stacks up an enlightened charge(Max stacks 5). For Each Stack of Enlightened his AD is multiplied by that much for Each strike he has made after the first and if he kills a champion while the skill is active it Resets. 8He always starts off with 1 stack of Enlightened*

Raycor's E is Revalation. Rayocr Gains True sight over an area for a short amount of time. The Length and distance he can see increase with each point invested into the ability. There are no different affects for this.

Raycor's R is The Chosen. Depending on what role you chose, this ability has different effects.

As a mage you designate a target and after a few seconds the ability will crash down from above dealing damage to the target and all surrounding enemies.

As a Support You designate an ally and after a brief delay the spell activates, healing the target and all allies in an are around the target.

As a Tank, you target one Ally and temporarily give them A Shield granting them your resistances and a small aoe taunt.

As an Assassin You target an enemy and deal 200% of your ad+ a % of your Enemies Max health as physical Damage.

As an Adc You Target an enemy and all your attacks scatter from the enemy that you hit and deal the exact same damage to enemies units around the Marked Target.

As a jungler Raycor Targets an epic monster camp and hides it from the sight of both teams. For a total of 5 seconds. After the Duration is up the Target Monster returns with the remaining health it was left at.

I Understand Raycor seems overpowered but to be honest. I thought I'd throw my hat in the ring, get some feedback and hope for the best. it's no a bad idea to have a champion who can do everyhing yet not excell eveywhere. However I understand that would be Very hard to do and balance and on top of that it would be very hard to try and figure out what you want to do. I don't even mind if the champion gets it's abilities used for other champions and renamed. THAT WOULD BE HELLA DOPE! I would be lit af knowing that a thing i suggested, Riot actually saw lol... but it's w/e. Tell me what you think about Raycor. Honestly I came up with the Idea because I had too many ideas except for his E lol. I couldn't think of anything Good forgive me and my bronze brain =3=.

*Also as a side Note, if we could do the Support/Assassin thing I think that'd also be hella dope too lol. forced to choose between the two lol before the fight started or something XD.*Write Your Thoughts

2 Comments

OBAFGKM9/17/2017, 2:55:31 AM2 votes

Pick a theme, make a character. If you have an ability you'd like to put in, think of a character that could use it, then make the rest of the kit.

Im assuming you wanted the Jack of All Trades thing to exist but that's way too many roles and way too many abilities. You've essentially designed 7 really shit characters and put them all into one champion without anything interesting happening in any of them.

After picking bot lane, starting the match and picking my ADC champion, I now have: No Passive Q - Relentless Pursuit feat. Volley W - Free stats E - Warding Totem R - Tiamat None of these abilities feels inspired or fun to use. The only realy way to do Jack of All Trades is to have a choice midway through a game which modifies your abilities into much fewer roles.

...And that is exactly what Kayn is.

Minion119/17/2017, 3:41:23 AM1 votes

Idea, needs a lot of work though

Passive Changes:

1: OPENS UP TROLLING POTENTIAL. Get placed as ADC and chose the shield. It honestly should be a part of champ select best case scenario (which is still pretty bad for players new to him).

2: If this becomes an in-game passive he'll have no other while other champs in any lane will outdo him because of it. Ex: Caitlyn will out damage with passive headshots.

3: Apparently your roles are adc, tank, jungle, support, assassin, and mage. Marksman=Bow and arrow. Tank=Shield. Fighter=Staff (assumed to be like Wu's staff). Support=Book (a plus sign isn't much of a weapon). Assassin=Daggers. Mage=Wand.

4: His base stats should be the same regardless of weapon chosen, but the stats per level should be stronger based on the weapon like he's becoming experienced with it (also to make his stats somewhat relevant to his weapon). Bow-AD (a good arrow should hurt physically). Shield-Armor (protects you from physical arrows). Staff-Attack Speed (easily moved) . Book-Magic Resist (protective spells :D). Daggers-Speed (lightweight weapon). Wand-Mana/Mana Regen (I'm out of ideas for this one).

Time to read the rest of the abilities.

Er... I'm going to take a break.