john the demon prince

Misposition·10/1/2014, 12:59:36 AM·3 votes·1,470 views

heres another idea that i came up with when me and my friend trevor were talking in class. i hope u like it. part of john is owned by trevor, his user name is trevor3355189 on league. riot if u put john in the game u have to give trevor half the money. he made me add that. ok here is johns abilitys.

passive: fallen angle when john dies he gets 100 gold and respons really fast.

q: death punch john punchs the enemy really hard, which would stun them. if they are below 400 health death punch will kill them.

w: demon arms johns arms grow out really big, which makes his attack range like a ranged champion like tirstana.

e: soul stealer john looks at the enemy so hard that they lose there soul. when he steals there soul he gets some of there health. and it does some damage.

r: universe destroyer johns so powerful that when he uses r all the enemys around him lose health really fast. if he kills someone with it then he heals all of there health back to him. when john is doing his r ability he cant get stunned, or killed. but when its over if john didnt kill someone or take there soul then john will die instantly. because he is too powerful.

lore: john was used to be a good guy angle from heaven. one day he got ina fight with god becuase god was giving kids cancer and aids and god said "john you cant fight me, im god." so god ripped off johns wings, and he said "ow! my wings!" and then god threw him down to the earthe. when he got to the earth he was said because god didnt like him any more. so he got really mad and went to go talk to a demon. and he said to the demon if he could ever be gods friend again. and the demon said yes but there would be a price. john didnt care and so he gave the demon his sole, but the demon tricked him. then john got so mad that he just killed the demon. but that demon was actually the king of all the demons so when he kiled him, he turned into the prince of demons. and then after that day john was evil.

lines: moving: sorry, i was thinking about god. attack: sorry i have to attack u, but im evil now. thats the way it is, because the demon tricked me. joke: nothing is funny to me any more exsept kids deaths. taunt: if you come near me all take your sole from you. dance: he doesnt have a dance, he just gets mad and yells. what he says when u pick him: why are u picking me? im just a demon. i cant help u, ill probably only kill u and take you're soul. so dont pick me, pick someone else instead.

thank you tell me what u think and johns first skin would be called angle john and it would be him but as a angle. thank u.

3 Comments

Lycanbutt10/1/2014, 1:05:57 AM2 votes

Morgana cool this should be the new morgana rework xD

Thracia 77610/1/2014, 9:44:40 PM1 votes

This champion seems way to broken. His passive should be more like -10% off his death timer. His Q should do % based dmg and do extra dmg when the enemy is below, lets say 30% of their health. His W should be more like Wukongs Q, if you want an attack range boost. His E seems fine, more like Vladimirs Q. His ultimate seems way over broken. If you want it to be a strong healing AOE burst, it should be more like he creates a field that damages all enemies inside for 5 seconds and heals him for 10% of the damage. The fact that you made it so he gets back the amount of health the slain enemy has or that it could sacrifice him being one less asset to your team is broken. I don't find any syergy between skills. Every champion (minus the current pre rework sion) has some synergy or skill combo in their kit that makes them viable. This champion seems like another reference to sion, where half of him want to be ad and half wants to be ap but niether work and have so synergy in between skills. Your also forgetting base stats. How much of each stat does he start with at the beginning of the game and how much he gets per level, how much damage and scaling your skills do, like does this scale off Ad, does it scale of health, does it scale off ap, etc, does he use mana as his resource, what are his cooldowns, skill range and any resource costs to them. These are alls thing you want to add when suggesting new champion.