Champion Concept: Choros the puppet master

Choros, the puppet master

ladies and gentlemen I formed this idea with some friends of mine and I want to here other's opinion about it. This champion is not like the others. Some brief backstory, Choros, once a well known theatrical genius for his skills in puppetry. Traveling from one wealthy family to another, showing them his creations and how they would dance at his will. As time went on, he started to envy his creations for they did not have to fear death. Seeking to cure himself of the strings of time, he searched for a solution that would make him immortal. After studying the technology of the lost shuriman empire, he had what he was looking for. He created what was to be his greatest work yet, a life size puppet of himself, every detail was the same down to the hairs he pulled from his own head to put onto the puppet. As he neared death and the preparations for his greatest performance were complete, he was cast into the body of his puppet. Although in the instance between life and death, he gazed into the void, burning his mind until he was no longer sane. Now free of the strings of death he seeks to spread this gift and make his biggest performance yet. APPEARANCE: bent over old frail looking man that doesn't look quite human, and has a face of that of a puppet, white thinning hair, broken bent top hat, and cluttered torn suit. PASSIVE: No Strings on you... Yet: each auto attack, Choros will throw a needle with a string attached onto the enemy, this strings will attach themselves with a maximum of six strings. only one person can have strings at a time. enemy attack speed and movement speed is slowed for a percentage for each string. Q: Calling of the void, damage is dealt to an enemy but a gray bar is left where their health was originally, functioning much like Tahm's passive, as the health will come back over time but still less than what they had. W: Battle of wills, all gray health target has is given to Choros based on percentage of max health. Depending on how many strings the target has, Choros will also gain an attack speed boost. E: Marionette, Choros gains control over his target's movement, but the movement of his target is slowed, this ability will last for longer periods of time depending on who is targeted and if they die or not. Minions: lasts for one minute or less depending on type Large Jungle Creatures(excluding baron, dragon, and herald): 10 seconds. Champions: based on how many strings are in the target, will last for up to two seconds if all six strings are attached. Percent of target's AD (50% AP) is given to Choros for four seconds when all six strings are attached. R: The great puppet show, In an area around Choros, all those who dont have strings on them, are feared away from him. Whomever has strings, the amount of strings are doubled and the target is stunned and dances for 2 seconds.

QUOTES: "There's no strings on me" "come, why don't you join my show?" "How do i get rid of MY strings?" (Looks up at summoner)

Thanks so much if you read through the whole thing, I would like to see this idea spread so everyone can hear it and give their own input. Thanks, Yolneir