Legendary skin concept; Azir Chief Janitor or Azir King of Cleaning, of the theme [Academy]

Endõ Campeador·8/24/2019, 9:19:41 AM·1 votes·2,166 views

Before I start with my post, I ask you to throw imagination (and I'm spanish and I try traduce good, In region of spanish had good reception and I want share this with this region of english and Reddit of Azir/Azir Mains, (Long life to Azir!)).

Azir's spear is a mop that the rays of its basic is water. The look of Azir wears a good suit to direct his workers

W: Soldiers: They are '' Janitors '' with mops and brooms that splashes water and dust and appear from a puddle on the ground. E: The sphere you have is a soap bubble R: Soldiers with Shields are janitors with large signs that say: Forbidden to pass, slippery floor! Passive (Tower): It is a maintenance tower with a school bell that every time it gives a basic attack, the school bell rings

The return to base: Azir inspects 2 janitors that their work is doing well but one of them accidentally breaks a mop and disintegrates it while the other frightened janitor runs away and slips The run of Safe: Just as Vayne carries a motorcycle or braum with a sled, Azir is riding in the cleaning car while 2 janitors pull him.

5 Phrases in each of your skills: Q phrases:

  • Hey, it's wet!
  • You made it dirty!
  • I'm going to curse you!
  • I'm coming for you!
  • Now you scrub it again!

W phrases:

  • To work!
  • Here you need to clean
  • You have left a stain
  • Did you think you were done here?
  • To Scrub!

Phrases of the E:

  • I'll fire you!
  • I'm going to give you a sermon!
  • You made me come!
  • Wait, I'm coming for you
  • I will evaluate your work

R phrases:

  • You can not pass!
  • I told you not to pass!
  • You passed again ?!
  • How many times should I tell you ?!
  • Get out of here!

2 phrases for teasing: Provocation:

  • I will have to ask the Director to do extracurricular cleaning activities.
  • I'm sorry but, it's your turn to clean the toilets.

Joke:

  • You have left a stain, you run out of half a daily wage
  • Do you know what happens if you step on that floor? You will feel a professional skater, come, try it.

Prank answer:

  • I feel like soaping your mouth

Interactions to another champion:

Ezreal: Eh, don't run away! You haven't finished serving your punishment yet! Lux: Among all the students, you are the least dirty you look Katarina: If you used your cleaning skills ... you would barely reach my 0.1% cleaning ability Jayce: I'll just give you some advice Jayce, don't hit your hammer on my scrubbed floor

Graves: Professor, one day I should stop by his class to teach his students how to clean and maybe ... to you Yuumi: Director, I request that you `` ascend '' me to the Director and be able to establish cleaning decrees in this school ... Ryze: I think you belong to another school but don't fear, I have a lot of disinfectants so you don't spread your purple skin disease.

Zac: Don't get close to me. Xin Zhao: Here, a mop Xin zhao, so you can clean your jungle very well. Darius / Vladimir: Who is supposed to clean all this blood ... Garen: This is how Garen, a whirlwind of cleaning, can I call you more times? Jarvan: If your weapon were a mop ... my employees would clean any corner. Mordekaiser: By chance in the realm of the dead ... there is nothing but ... dust right? Jax: Imagine if you had a real mop!

Dance: Together with 4 other janitors around the heimerdinger dragon-tamer style, they dance '' something '' (I don't know many dances)

I struggled in my imagination you could put a lot of things to this type of aspect, if you have ideas, say them!

PD: In Spanish: https://boards.euw.leagueoflegends.com/es/c/aspectos-y-conceptos-de-campeones-es/Apxz7XFv-aspecto-legendario-azir-jefe-conserje-o-azir-rey-de-la-limpieza-de-la-temaatica-academia

3 Comments

YourThiccUncle8/24/2019, 3:47:19 PM2 votes

This is amazing

Saraidon8/24/2019, 3:56:36 PM1 votes

Even trying to ignore your broken English, this is just not a very good thread. You had like 5 comments in the Spanish version and say that it was "well received." Most of the Spanish comments were presumably your friends anyway, judging from the fact that you shared this thread in so many places that it was even forwarded to me - who doesn`t know you at all - because people were laughing at how bad this thread / your English is. Real talk, while the basic concept of Azir with a mop might work, most of your suggested voicelines are cringy or just outright bad. If you want to receive actual feedback on your skin idea here, you should hit up a friend of yours with decent English and ask them to translate the basic skin concept and leave out all the quotes you provided. It's not a terrible idea and I can see that you put lots of work into it, the harsh truth though is that noone will take you seriously if you present it in this form.