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new champ idea... MUST SEE~~~~~~~~~~~~

OrangeMcPoop·8/12/2015, 12:57:31 PM·1 votes·1,029 views

name: Tuia

gender:male

type: melee Fighter

from: outland

purpose of his existant: to to take back the stolen crown and reclaim whats rightfully his

lore: once a king of a myterious land, Tuia stood and fought for his people against various armies that tried to take over his throne. However numerous battles tired his men and they started out dying one by one, seeing that as a curse of his land Tuia farewell his people and set out to seek the acient relic which would allow him to be invincible. HIs men hid and stay safe, and the king kept on with his trial. Little did he know the thing that he wanted was held in the hands of a dark wizard, he would have to first gave up his justice and humanity if he were to obtain the power. The king refused, but mesmerised by his unholy magic, he fainted, woke up with his crown taken. Now Tuia swears on his people and his land, that he will take back whats once belong to him and slay the man who stole his pride!

weapon use: Silver blade

resource:mana

abilities

passive: every aa will heal him for 3/4/5/6/7/8/9/10/11 hp

Q cooldown:20/16/12/9/7sec cost: 125/100/90/80/70mana boost atk speed(8%/12%/15%/20%/25%) for a short duration, while take extra dmg(35%/30%/25%/20%/15%) from all source excpet true dmg

W cooldown:18/16/14/12/10sec cost: 130/110/100/90/80mana Tuia swing his blade so hard that it generate energy forward, slowing(20%/25%/30%/35%/40% for 2 sec) the first enemy hit(magic dmg, 75/100/125/150/200+50% of his total ap), if the energy blast hit the enemy after it has travel the full distant, it will stun them for 1 sec instead.

E cooldown:17/15/12/11/10sec cost: 120/110/100/90/80mana temp slow himself for 40%(prior to other slows) and gain(10%/15%/20%/25%/30%) bonus armor and mr for a short time. this slow decays over 3 sec

R cooldown:180/150/120sec cost: 100/90/80mana Tuia dash for a moderate distant, deals magic dmg(200/300/400+60% of total ap) to all enemies along his path, allies who are colided will have their movement speed increased(20%/25%/30%), after the end of his dash or when he hit a wall or terrain, Tuia will stop and gain a shield (200/250/300+30% of total ap). after 4 sec, he can detonate the shield if it remains, deal more magic dmg base on the remaining shield health.

9 Comments

ToughFluffs8/12/2015, 1:11:36 PM2 votes

Okay, not to be harsh, but there's a lot wrong with this.

  1. "name: Raynor" That's a Starcraft and Heroes of the Storm character. Bad idea, legally.

  2. "type: melee Fighter" Okay, but this tells us nothing about the champion thematically. Who is he? Where did he come from? How do his abilities relate to his theme?

  3. He only has one skillshot, and it's a snare. He already has an attack speed boost, a passive healing mechanic, a resistance booster, and an ult that allows him to deal consistent true damage. The LAST thing he would need is hard cc like that, it'd just be broken.

  4. You listed no scaling for said snare. Also his ult scales on bonus armor and mr...and bonus ad? I mean, I can understand the idea that it allows flexibility for him to be built as either a tank or a fighter/carry, but the rest of his kit scales on ad, including his regular resistances booster, which means building tank would be pointless unless you want to render most of his kit useless, and building ad renders the bonus effect on his ult useless.

There's more I'd like to say but these are the most prominent issues that stand out to me. Not trying to be harsh, but if you're going to put "MUST SEE" on a champion idea, you should really have a much stronger foundation, like estimated percentages for scaling on each ability, possible base stats and growth, and fully fleshed out lore.

Made in Zaun8/12/2015, 6:39:06 PM1 votes

The kit is a mess, the skills are unbalanced, there's little to no synergy or theme in this champion. It seems like you just slapped something together without much thought.

English may not be your first language, but this was very hard to read. At least capitalizing your sentences would have made it a little better.