Two chapters of a fanfiction series I wrote a few years ago, wanted to see if it still held up

This is a series I wrote way back in season 4 when I was much more interested in the competitive scene (and the game in general). Kinda wanted to start writing again and was wondering if I should get back into this, with a few changes of course. Please excuse some of the more immature parts of the whole thing, like the technical side and some dialogue. Please feel free to give criticism and feedback. Thank you very much.