[Prologue] Tale of a Madman

The Neverworld··4 votes·547 views

"Isnt the sky beautiful, Jake?", "Yes, but not beautiful as you are Sendra!" both kissed each other while in a romantic mood.

"You know what my father always told me as a bedtime story?" asked Sendra, "No, what? Tell me!" hesitated Jake, as both were holding their hands in the moonlight, while leaning against a lantern, all alone on the streets of Demacia.

"Once upon a time, there was a stranger on a journey. His origin was unknown, but he was beautiful and very attractive. Many couldnt lays their eyes off of him, and he loved the attraction. But one day, one was jealous and gathered hatred in himself. Hate against the unknown man, because people were attracted to him. All women couldn't resist his charme, even the one he loved so much. So one day he decided to kill the unknown man."

Jake interfered "Wait, what kind of bedtime story is this?", Sendra rushed to answer and wanted to continue the story "Be quiet and listen!

The jealous man waited for the dark of the night and surprised the unknown man. The jealous man stabbed many times into the unknown man with a knife, and in the end he mutilated his face. As he stood up to run away, the unknown man breathed out, showing that he's still alive.
The jealous man slowly turned back, his eyes wide open. The unknown man asked him, if it is because of his face or because of his past? The jealous man looked at him as if he was a monster and terrified enough, could not speak a word

No clue of what the unknown man has spoken, the jealous man took his knife out and went back to give him the finishing blow. But close before he could attack him, the unknown man said 'Revenge is something that you can never escape. If you strike me down.. someone will strike you down, sooner or later... trust me, I had to experience this the rough way as you can see'.

Finally, the jealous man kneed down and cried. The crying turned out to be a crazy laugh and with at end of his laugh, he stabbed the unknown man once again and was never seen since then."

"Uhm, I hope you don't tell this to our future childrens, because this sounds more like a horror story" said Jake, and Sendra answered "Oh you silly, this is a story about accepting yourself as you are and not to fall for jealousy. And you know what?
There is a rumor that in the night, when you are alone in the dark, the unknown man appears and kills you!"
. Jake responded "That's not funny Sendra", Jake paused, then continued "I still can't understand your way of humour, but I have to leave now. My parents will shout at me again for being so late.".

Both Sendra and Jake said good night to each other and were going their way home alone. Jake, however, was going the street down. He was afraid because of the story, as the darkness veiled the city and only the lanterns on the street were his only hope of security.

Suddenly, one of the lights of the lantern behind Jake began to malfunction and didnt work anymore. He thought that it would be normal, and so he continued to walk down the street.

For every passed lantern he went by, the light turned off with each lantern behind him. As he was close to the last lantern, he heard a voice whispering "Do you fear the night?" and he turned around, but the darkness didn't allowed to see anything. Unfortunately, he stumbled down when he continued to walk and was landing in the light of the last lantern.

Red eyes appeared in the dark, a voice continued to say "Or do you fear me?". Jake shouted in hectic "What do you want from me? Let me alone!". "You want to be alone? All alone in the dark? You sure?" the sound of the voice became louder.

The red eyes became bigger in size as the person was coming closer, but still veiled in the darkness. The person slowly said "I am everything you need", then he deeply continued as his face entered the light "And everything you fear!".

The last light went off, since then, Jake was never seen again.

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7 Comments

nonamewarrior1 votes

What's this about?

The Neverworld1 votes

First, thanks for the instant downvote. If you're too lazy to understand, then you shouldn't downvote something.

Second, downvotes are not there for your own pleasure and your amusements. Downvotes are there to ensure that content that doesn't belong in the section will be not displayed on "hot" section. Here a quote from Riot in this thread: http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/story-art/YTAvpYvP-where-story-happens

  • Upvote/downvote on content! Votes are your friends! Downvotes should be used for comments and discussions that aren't relevant or don’t add to the discussion - they shouldn't be used to express disagreement with another player.

Third, as you can read (If you can read - obviously you don't, otherwise you wouldn't ask) - in the title stays "prologue".
In the vote question stays "Are you interested in the champion?"
Lastly, if you still don't know what's this about. This is one of my over 25 prologues I've written in the past months and year. This is a prologue, explaining the Champion I have in mind and want to create, that's why there is a poll to ask if people are interested in it.

nonamewarrior2 votes

I didn't, I actually upvoted it... If you want me to downvote, I will.

I just wanted to know when this may come out, or if you could post the link when you're done.

Second, thank YOU for the instant downvote, you ignorant hypocrite.

The Neverworld1 votes

Sure dude. For 30 minutes it was constantly at 1. Then you commented, and miraculously it was downvoted to 0. Now it's 1. You're not good at arguing, aren't you? I've been downvoted multiple times, this is the third thread I've posted anew because of people who consistently downvote my work. And you apparently are one of them.

Second, it's my right to downvote your post because "What's this about?" is both mean and has no real sense. What is what about? Does my writing confuse you? Don't you know what you are reading because of the lack of understanding I've written? Are the dialogues between Jake and Sendra too complex, yet impossible to read? Or do you ask in a negative way what I was thinking when creating this crap of bullshit?

One post of yours opens many questions. It's not helpful, nor does belong here. So it's somewhat inappropriate on the first looks.

Third, now that you've explained everything, I can say that I'm sorry for downvoting, but the lack of context was giving me too much freedom to think what you've meant by your comment.

However - I don't know when it'll come out. Maybe today, tomorrow, the day after tomorrow, next week, next month, next year, never. This all depends on the poll. If I see a lack of interest, I'll have a lack of interest in this concept, too.

nonamewarrior1 votes

A little while ago, I saw this discussion had 3 upvotes, now it has one.

You shouldn't attack somebody who is interested in your work to begin with, and if you don't understand a comment, you shouldn't lash out at him or her. My vote remains upvoted, since I think I should give you a chance.

I can't wait to see what this becomes

The Neverworld1 votes

I didn't attack. I find it just really rude/impolite of you to write three words that doesn't explain anything at all. I encounter such comments often as I'm creating since last year march Champion Concepts. I'm pissed off. I cannot always stand against people who rather use less words to explain themselves, and instead left more questions open than I wanted to have in the first place. This prologue has been downvoted several times with no real reason. You think I should have the nerve ? Then try it out, this community is stressfull enough sometimes.. sometimes I don't want to create Concepts, but as life goes on, so does ideas pop up in my mind and I can't do anything except to create content for the very few people in the league of legends community who enjoy my work.

And I couldn't see that you were one of the few ones who enjoy it. I did apologize in the previous post, but you'll have to understand that from nothing comes nothing. And the very least I like to see, is to get bashed for something I gave my time for it.

nonamewarrior1 votes

I'm sorry you got offended by my three words that pissed you off so badly. I guess I'll try to be more "polite" by taking time out of my day to read your novel of a post, then leave a lengthy comment asking some questions about the champion that I'm interested in. Now that we're finally friends, I look forward to seeing how this champion turns out

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