[Champion concept] Nayaka, the captain of Death vessel.

Wicked burger·8/17/2015, 1:21:29 PM·1 votes·2,479 views

Intro: Hi guys, this is my first champion i am posting here. Someone wanted ship champion and also i wanted it, but i didn't find any concepts so i made my own. Because ship isn't really a champion and because physicly throwing ship over you isn't real. And what about the size. So i made a normal champion, but all of his abilities(exdpect passive from w) will be with ship, but as in the story he will strikes from fog so his abilities could look like a fog(ship will be in the fog), this could even save some work for riot, or it would just siply look like ship, you decide ;-) Also please excuse my english it isn't best, but i tried as much as i could.

Content: somethink about champion role and info stats abilities lore quotes skin ideas about my discussion

Somethink about champion I'd like to give him no mana pool if possible, but maybe it would be too op so mana is second possibility. But now about his look, I am sorry i don't have any artwork, but here is description: He would have some hat on this style http://img1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20110630131455/potcoplayers/images/2/2f/Black-caribbean-pirate-hat.jpg . Face: He would have some scares and big beard like blackbeard from ac 4 http://cloud.attackofthefanboy.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/03/blackbeard-ac4.jpg . Weapon: small cannon somehow upgraded a bit(like cutthroat graves). Body:He would have jacket and under it some T-shirt. Legs: He would have some trousers and clasic pirate boots, somethink like this https://www.heritagecostumes.com/secure/images/products/4547.jpg .

Role and info: Primary role: Fighter Secondary role: Mage Secondary bar: None/Mana Lane: Top, possibly mid Attack power: 3 Defense power: 4 Ability power: 7 Dificulty: 5

Stats: Healt: 646-2023(+81) Attack damage: 55-106(+3) Health regen: 6-16.2(+0.6) Attack speed: 0.625(+2,65% up to 45% total) Mana: 336-1067(+43) Armor: 30-81(+3) Mana regen: 7-19.58(+0.74) Magic resist: 30-50.4(+1.2) Range: 560 Mov speed: 350

Abilities: (There is an explanation under the abilities.) Passive:Great power of Death Vessel - Active: Nayaka's spells can damage stuctures. Nayaka gains Ruin Gold for enemies killed, 2.5 for small minions and monsters and 5 for big minions, big monsters and champion kills or assists. His spells deal damage to structures equal to Ruin Gold collected.To be able to damage structures with his spells he needs to be in range of the tower.

Mana cost: high CD: high cd about 10 secs (Skillshot) Q:Lengh power - Active: Nayaka summons his ship to fire from front and back cannons after 0.75 second, dealing higher damage and slowing the target by 40% for 1.5 second. Damage to structures: 30% of RG

Mana cost: low CD: low cd about 6-4 secs (target) W:Swivel gun - Passive: Nayka auto attacks deal additional damage qual to 1%(+1% per 100 points of his AP) of targets maximum health over 2 seconds(does not stack). Damage to structures: 5% of RG. Active: Nayaka summons his ship to fire from it's swivel gun after 0.75 second lock-on at the target dealing high physical damage, applying on-hit effects(including passive from this ability). Damage to structures: 15% of RG.

Mana cost: medium-high CD: high about 10 secs (Aoe) E:Mortar strike - Nayaka summons his ship to fire from it's mortars dealing medium damage over 2 seconds and reducing the enemy units armor and magic resist by 10-30. Damage to structures 30% of RG.

Mana cost: classic 100-150 CD: 80/70/60 seconds (Aoe from target position) R:The salvo of 99 shots! - Active: Nayaka summons his ship to fire 99 shots from side cannons in area on sides of the ship over 3 seconds, dealing 100/175/250(+33% of AP) magical damage and slowing by 70% per second. Damage to structures: 150% of RG.

A short explain how his abilities work. His abilities deals damage to structures equal to Ruin Gold wich is bigger when you farm and kill. His spells summons his ship, but he can have only one ship summoned at the time so if there is already ship next spells will cast from the ships location.

Lore: Nayaka was a sailor in Bilgewater. One day he got sinked his ship by pirate ship and because he lost a lot, he came to the serveces of that ship. Captain started to like him more and more. One day in a battle that captain died and with Nayaka having his best friend he made him captain of his ship. Nayaka was a good captain and the crew also liked him. He began one of the dangerous and known pirate in bilgewater. But as the time went he started to be bored and so as he was rubbing he got to some really interesting thiniks, one of them was a map, that told of a great treasure. He got interested by that so he went to hunt that treasure down. After a while of searching and sailing he found the island that should be the one with treasure. It wasn't big island, but there was a lot of jungle stuff as ususal. After hours of searching they finally fount the secret place with the treasure. At entrance there was a warning of dead ghost creatures guarding the treasure. The crew was scared a lot, but captain could tell them there's no worry about and that is only a story. So they went inside and it was okey till they went to treasure, so they thought it was really only a story, at least that's hat they thought untill Nayaka opened the treasure. When he opened the treasure the real hell started. They were everywhere, The crew and captain wanted to fight them but they did nothing to them. After it finished the let captain alive in a really bad condition, but alive. One of them, probably their leader, told him "Death vessel need another captain to guard the treasure for some time, you are good enough to be it's captain. If you want, open the treasure and pick up one of the Ruin Gold coins that is there, if not go and die." He didn't want to die and the thought of beeing captain of legendary Death vessel he has heard about a few times was really good. Even through extreme pain he was able to open the treasure and pick up the coin. Then came darkness.

He is opening eyes and see something. He starts to see better and he sees his crew, shouting "You made it captain!" or "Captain made it!". He asked "What is going on, my memory isn't good now. "His assistant told him "You are now captain of legendary Death vessel!! At least that's what we think, this ship looks like it." After a while he got better. He felt something on his neck, he picked it up and whoah it looked like the ruin gold from the chest!, and his crew had it too but smaller ones. "What are we now, humans?" were his next words. Assistant answered "We don't know, but also we want to find it out. There are some list at this ship and we are still searching it, maybe we could find answeres in those lists." He has found the answeres after a while, he was dead ghost like those creatures at the place with the treasure, but he looked like human. He decided to sail around world and find out some secret. He was also got back to pirating, one time royals got tired of him so they sent 50 warships to sink him. He went to the fog and then bombarded those ships with bullets and sent back one of the crew with message "What a poor army, I took them down with salvo of 99 bullets. Now stop i have other things to do." Nayaka now had some special abilities. He didn't want to be seen so he was fighting using fog. That is why it is told that enemies only sailed into a fog and then got bombarded by a black ship. One time he also saw Miss Fortune sink Gangplank's ship and he thought to him self "She can't hunt me. I wonder if there is bounty on me." He saw another champions from league as he could live for a long time and he still sticked to Bilgewater wich is his bithplace. He is also creating his colection of valuables.

Once he heard about leage he got interested by it. He wanted to got here, so he made a handcannon and went to league to fight for reputation of legendary Death vessel and to kill some time at his centuries till he has to go to that island again and put the treasure back to end his way there where it all started and to give some other chosen sailor chance to become captain of legendary Death vessel.

Quotes: Upon selection:

"Just one more way."

Attacking:

"Die like those 50 warships." "You can't beat me." "I am Bilgewater legend." "I can sink ship with my hands." "Die in hell like i did." "Go home till it is still time." "I fought in a reall hell." "Now you fight with the hell." "I am creature you can't imagine."

Moving:

"You haven't fought in hell like i did." "You don't want to go to that island of hell." "Just one more way to that island of hell." "They never saw dead ghost before." "My bombardation is best." "I know more than you." "I have been at places you have no idea that exist." "I will go just once to place where it all started and there it will end." "I saw so many bad things and also done many."

Joke:

"Oh no my ship is sinking, no, just kidding it's your's." "I never liked cannons." "I am such a bad captain."

Taunt:

"You are such a bad enemy." "Never saw worse opponent." "Your aim is really bad."

Upon casting Length power: "Carefull."

Upon casting Swivel gun: "Lock and shot."

Upon casting Mortar strike: "Death from above."

Upon casting The salvo of 99 shots: "Fireee!!!!"

Upon casting Recall: "Let's do the last trip." "Not to that island now." "I will return."

Upon placing a item 2044 ward: "I see everything here." "I got not only power, but also vision." "I always see my victim."

Upon buying item 3151 Liandry's Torment: "My torment is more lethal than this one." "This torment is low, but more is sometimes better."

Upon buying item 3089 Rabadon's Deathcap: "My hat has more fear in it than this." "I got my own hat."

Upon buying item 3116 Rylai's Crystal Scepter: "I got better valuable than this crystal, my medailon." "Another valuable to my colection."

Upon buying item 3115 Nashor's Tooth: "I got even gold tooth, but i will also keep this one." "Another tooth to my collection of my enemies teeth."

Upon taunting enemy Gangplank Gangplank: "I could always sink you but i didn't."

Upon taunting enemy MissFortune Miss Fortune: "I am your biggest bounty and also most impassible one."

Upon taunting enemy Nautilus Nautilus: "You can't take everything with you, but I can."

Upon taunting enemy Nami Nami: "I have one of your pearls in my collection of valuables."

Upon taunting enemy Fizz Fizz: "So you are the better one in bilgwater? I am the legend."

Upon taunting enemy TahmKench Tahm Kench: "You can't eat me or anything that belongs to me."

Skin ideas: I have only one skin idea, wich i also like at other champ/champs(i hope in future) and it is Deep terror Nayaka Add more you would like to want in the comments below ;-)

About my Discussion: Thanks for reading my Champion idea(if you read it lol =D). I am sorry for my english it isn't best and the end of story at second paragraph doesn't continue in one part(talking about Bilgewater and then about his collection) wich I am sorry for. The quotes are not really best, because i didn't think of any better, but i tried as best as i could, also this is my first discussion i did so i don't know if the stats are ok or not, because this is my first champion so please excuse it. Pls help me fix this champ and pls write what you think about his secondary bar if mana or nothing and about his abilities, really appreciate that. ;-) Hope you enjoyed my champion idea.

-Sgorgi

13 Comments

AsphodelNext8/17/2015, 1:40:00 PM2 votes

From a strategic perspective, having ability damage to structures is a bad idea. Why? It allows you to run in, nuke down the opponent's turret, and run out before you take too much damage from the enemy laner. Then, you set up to do it again. Eventually, you just get a free turret.

So, you have to balance the champion around this possibility, either making it hard for them to fight enemy champions(since all their power is in tower pushing), or making them OP.

Traxicus8/17/2015, 7:54:57 PM1 votes

If you want more people to leave you feedback, take the time to clean up the spelling mistakes, and remove the unessential parts. Don't throw out wildly specific numbers for everything when it's already hard to understand.

That said, there's clearly way too much power in this kit. AsphodelNext does a good job explaining why abilities damaging structures is a bad idea. Ruin Gold is an entirely extraneous ability to his kit, and only makes the numbers more confusing. He has a 1s stun on a 3.5s cooldown. All of his abilities work around micro-ing a summoned ship, making it even less clear.

Refine the idea, trim his kit down, and clean up the presentation. A concept is only as good as you can explain it.