New Champion,

GenZhenia·3/30/2016, 3:48:04 PM·1 votes·400 views

Um..... Well She Is Called " Here Are Some Ability Ideas

She Is A Magic Damage Support! She Is Ranged, And She Looks Some What Like Syndra! (Q). So Her Q Is Called "Star Shot" Its Is A Star That Goes In A Line And Comes Back And The Enemies That It Hits Will Get A Shield Around Them And The Next Allie To Hit The Enemy Will Crit Them! Note After 3.0 Seconds The Shield Will Go Away.

(W). Her W Is Called "Spell Bound" She Reduces The Cool Down On All Of Your Abilities If In The Lane As Her If You Are Her Allie! Note The More Allies In The Lane With Her, Because She Is "Spell Bounding" More People The Cool Down Reduction Will Be Shorter!

(E). Her E Is Called "Dodge" She Can Dodge Any Ability That Is Casted On Her! Note She Can Not Cast The Ability If An Ability Is Not Casted On Her ! Side Note If An Ability Is Casted On Her She Can Shove The Enemy To The Wall And Stun Them!

(R). And Her R Is Called "Soul Power" She Makes It So Any Damage Dealt By An Enemy On Any Of Her Teammates Goes Back On To Them By(Starting At 10% And Fully At 20%)

2 Comments

LeifTheExplorer3/30/2016, 4:02:54 PM2 votes

Ok, I have a lot to say. You apparently have an idea of what you want your champion to do. However, you only have a kit.

A champion is composed of many things. Lore, Visuals, Kit, Story, and Playstyle! Please include more about your champion.

Also, even your kit is very subjective. Please include cooldowns/mana costs/range/and damage!

Q- So basically a reverse Lux wand. Ok, I get that. However, I wouldn't make it a guaranteed crit, but instead a damage increase of successful auto-attacks/abilities.

W- Basically a Zilean W for your allies. I could see you maxing this first.

E- Sivir and Poppy 's E. That's basically what it is.

R- item 3075. This is what it is.

There's nothing wrong with your champ idea, it's just... Really bland. I have no appeal towards this champion, and I don't think many other people will either.

Also, your presentation of your ideas could use a little bit of work. If you want a good template as to how you should present champion ideas, check out my champion concept! If you have any critique for mine, please let me know! I'd really enjoy it! Nonmur, the Water Thaumaturge