Bee Keeper Brand

stealyfill··5 votes·643 views

He would be wearing a bee keeper outfit, possibly with some singe marks on it (a material that is fire resistant and bee proof is relatively hard to come by). His B animation would be him next to a honey harvesting machine that pops up out of the ground and taking a fresh jar of honey off of the table the machine sits on, raising it up to the light to check it for quality and color, and taking a sip as he returns to fountain.

Passive (Angry Hive) would still do the circle while bees would buzz around the affected enemy. When the damage pops, the bees would converge on the affected player, stinging them for damage.

Q Animation would be Brand hurling a big handful of honey at the enemy. The honey attracts bees (passive). If they already have the passive going, the honey becomes a big glob that is stuck on the enemy, stunning them in place.

W Animation would be something of a honey fountain erupting from the ground, attracting bees. If they already have the passive going, an extra swarm of bees flies around the enemy, signifying the extra damage that would be done. Either that or the bees would be bigger, getting fat on the honey that's being thrown around.

E Animation would look like a splatter effect of honey that is now on the enemy, attracting bees. If they already have the passive going, the honey splatters off the original target and affects the potential targets in the usual area of effect.

R Animation would be the Queen Been (think the big fat bees from Adventure Time. If you have not seen it, think of an oval with a small stinger and small wings. Maybe some lipstick, because Queen). The Queen Bee bounces to enemies, leaving some of the bees that follow her around at each enemy struck. She will prioritize the enemies with the honey previously applied to them.

If you have any feedback, or ides on how to make these better, let me know!

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Arakadia1 votes

(think the big fat bees from Adventure Time. If you have not seen it, think of an oval with a small stinger and small wings. Maybe some lipstick, because Queen).

Eh. Making the bee cartoony doesn't fit nor seem necessary imho.

stealyfill1 votes

I can agree with that. I think it came from a secondary skin I thought about where it was Free Spirit Brand, a hippie that would throw flowers around that would attract bees. With that, everything would be vibrant a colorful and flowy, so I think my brain kept that fat bee from that. Thank you!

Arakadia1 votes

Cool concept, I can picture it well. I forgot my upvote last time so here ^_^

stealyfill1 votes

thanks a bunch! Is there anything you put up that I can check out?

Arakadia1 votes

I haven't posted in a while, but you could check out my concept Jal, the Heaven's Inflictor. I plan to enter her in the CCOS this month.

stealyfill1 votes

what is CCOS?

Arakadia1 votes

Basically its a monthly champion concept contest created by fans. The top 5 are praised on the winner's announcement post and the #1 use to get a gif with their board's name on it. It is currently run by Echoing.

stealyfill1 votes

Oh, okay. That's pretty cool! Also, I saw that you are also making a game. What kind of game?

Arakadia1 votes

Its a MOBA like League. If you interested contact me in this post or that one. If your not its alright.

stealyfill1 votes

I'd be interested. Do you have a build of it?

Arakadia1 votes

There isn't a playable version of it yet. We have VA's, programmers, etc. currently.

We pretty much have complete roster that is going to eventually expand. However not all the champions created so far are not complete. We call them Challengers. It would be best if you could communicate through skype, but im sure we could figure something out. Even just another pair of eyes over our work is helpful.

Here's our Geography Branch if you want a peak of the world.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1N5ufeju_cwh-UUL_nQQ6pA-0gMWyr0PKFWg7tL7kf7c/edit?usp=sharing

stealyfill1 votes

I took a look at the link, and I do like the types of areas. Your first area reminds me of the Midwest in the US.

The second area (I keep reading it as "Brooklyn") makes me think of a mob-esque style urbanized land that is very organized, but in two different ways (I assume the Barons want nothing to do with each other, and would try as much as they can to differentiate their respective halves as much as they can).

The third area makes me think that the entire land is just peppered with simple homes and simple lives (things that can easily be rebuilt in case of attack). It also see it as the land with the most physically inventive and some of the most resilient inhabitants.

stealyfill1 votes

The fourth area reminds me a lot of Quebec, Canada (they are quite unwelcoming to outsiders) mixed with Celtic themes/landscapes that is walled off by mountains/is surrounded mostly by water (peninsula). This would be where most of the magic users come from, and I wonder what they would be like towards people from other lands that have magical abilities, but were not born in Bal'Lysia.

The Fifth area seems like it would have the most resourceful inhabitants, merging their own technologies in with the technologies presumably found within the ruins. They also need to be resourceful to live in a place like Serbia. With a thought to the Silver Rush, they may also have a lot of shanty towns (think of the towns that were made in the gold rush. They were quickly built, but not necessarily meant to stand the test of time)

The Sixth area makes me think of people who prefer to travel around for resources than to stay in one place. If they seem to instigate conflict, then they are probably not an area with an existent blanket government. The various groups may travel in groups and try and raise conflict when they assimilate other groups into their own. It would also be easy to see them as thieves or possibly even a pirate-like person.

If you want to copy this down and have me delete this, that's fine with me. Otherwise, I'm also fine with leaving this up.

Arakadia1 votes

You can keep it up, thats all right. If your still interested, would you rather meet us on Skype or Discord? We use primarily Skype.

stealyfill1 votes

Gotcha. I can get Skype. Is there a certain day of the week that everyone meets up, or is it kind of a "whenever there's time" kind of thing?

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