[Upcoming Champion Concept] the Enthusiast of Righteousness

Late 2 DISCO·3/19/2016, 6:42:29 PM·4 votes·539 views

Hello guys! So I love creating many champion concepts, this concept is one of my most-invested ones. And so I decided to post this piece of lore about my champ. It is missing many details in order to remain mestyrious and make your imagination work a little bit. If you liked it or didn't please be sure to vote down the poll, with enough positive feedback I would be glad to post the full concept! Have a nice read.

The bright lights of Bligewater's night bazaar hospitably welcome each passer-by. The staring eyes might penetrate your mind, but you shall envelop yourself. The thrill, the joy and the unfulfilled expectations prevailed. I heard many rumors of the truth seer, maintaining a style pulpit. Some say she could interpret one's mind with a mere look, and so I determined to approach. Long marching towards her pulpit, but I have eventually reached it. Alley's edge, one tiny store, a beautiful woman sitting on a wooden chair in the front. She wore prestigious fabrics with a red-fur scarf and of course, she held her blessed golden kerchief. She did not offer anything; she did not shout comparing to the other sales clerks. After a brief moment, without any attempt, she applied to me: "Were you looking for me handsome?" she asked as exhaustion takes over her. "How did you know?" "You don’t appear to be a man in need" certainly she said. I had questions without answers, however once I looked at her eyes, it all occurred to me! It was magnificent, all these colors, suddenly everything has become much significant and clear. I was enlightened. I witnessed my past-life events, and even future occasions. Many secrets revealed to me and I remained speechless. Returned to reality, she observed, with her deep yellow eyes. My mind was wonders flooded but this time, I knew the answers. None remained inaccessible! I also knew that I was one amongst few to achieve illumination. She lifted her kerchief, fully spreading it with both hands. I looked at the runic symbols upon it: "Do you understand now?" she asked. "Yes, I do" I responded, my eyelids narrowed and closed. Our crossing was almost too brief and even wordless, but this one look was all I ever desired. No purposeless talks about the Night Bazaar, it changed me! After our meeting, I walked away with my eyes closed towards my new destination.

5 Comments

FloRaider423/19/2016, 6:58:45 PM2 votes

More of a gameplay guy, as lore helps to flesh out a champion, but their kit defines them. That said the grammar needs some work and it seems to give far too little information on your champion (unless she is the champion) for me to get hyped. That said I am looking forward to see how your kit and characterisation fits the lore.

FloRaider out summoner 31

CrimsonCobra33/19/2016, 9:02:50 PM1 votes

I love the story, you have a good writing style. Given that this post is 100% lore, I will say that this is an amazing teaser to a champion concept, but certainly needs a lot more content before I can give you critique on it. (I can of course correct your spelling, but I have read your other comments and understand the difficulty. Writing in English for English speakers is hard when it's your second language.)

I do not know what plans you may have for the kit, but I'm imagining a somewhat tanky AP support with a lot of vision control and map control.

~CrimsonCobra3