I want critics >< (just for fun post)

Wardenboo·3/18/2016, 9:14:22 PM·4 votes·710 views
Sweet Fifteen

what do you think I can improve :) I always ask my friends, but even thought they give me good tips, I want to know what other ppl think. thanks!

7 Comments

Akasuisei3/18/2016, 9:21:06 PM2 votes

Very nice! May I suggest changing Jinx's hair to have some kind of braid? (if not her trademark twin tails, a single braid or something that she may have had when younger). If you look at just her head and without Vi next to her, i thought it was Sona at first glance.

But overall, I love the theme and this look into some pre-league relationship stuff!

Guy Fox Teemo3/18/2016, 9:29:05 PM1 votes

Not enough boob :L

Mannysmoker3/18/2016, 10:04:46 PM1 votes

Get ready for the most impressive answer of all times, ready or not here I come and you can't hide, NO THAT SUCKS AND GET BETTER...

CrimsonCobra33/20/2016, 1:20:39 AM1 votes

I think they're rather nice. No real issues with them, and the art is done quite well. (They're also both part of my favorite 3 female characters as far as Theme goes.)