New Champion: Xorv

Sweetheart Taric·1/3/2016, 6:43:44 PM·2 votes·728 views

So it might sound like something typical, but I thought it would be cool to have a champion that's a cyborg. (You could say he won't be needing a PROJECT skin) Xorv, the name of The Mechanical Vengeance, could be a cross between Brand and Viktor. Basically the DC-Comics villain Two-Face with some fancy-ass technology. > Maybe some background story like: > "Once worked for (...), got betrayed, ambushed my (...), left for dead, but actually wasn't. Body and limbs are f*cked up, uses Hextech technology to transform himself into a living deathmachine."

Looks, hmm? Like I said: he'd look like a Brand and Viktor, so he definetly needs a robotic suit. Maybe even look like a Battlecast creation or whatever. But he definetly needs some neon on his suit. And not really dressed up in a whole suit (like Full Metal Jayce), but more like... a mix between Prototype Viktor and Pulsefire Ezreal. But hey, that's just my way of thinking.

Abilities: Q: Fires out a blast of plasma, deals (...) + 75% of AP W. Gives a shield, next 3 basic attacks deal (...) + 50% of AP E. Fires out a projectile (acts like a Sivir Q, but then like a boomerang: a Diana Q), deals (...) + 65% of AP R: (You could say it's a Riven ult, but then for a ranged champion) Xorv overclocks himself, getting extra HP, HP and mana regen, movement speed and (...) extra AP. Xorv's basic attacks explode in a circle around the attacked enemy, dealing (...) damage plus 20% of AD. Reactivate R to create a shockwave around you, dealing (...) + 110% AP. (So somekind of Blitzcrank ult, now I think about it...)

I don't wanna be like a unoriginal idiot that collects/combines different kinds of champions together, but I'm only referring the abilities. So yeah, the abilities aren't really stolen of the some other champions, but just look alot like them, when I think about it . 'Would like him to be a mage or a APC. Somekind of Ezreal, even though he'd fit better as mage (on midlane). Best item for him? All the items with Magic Pen-.

What do you guys think of Xorv, The Mechanical Vengeance?

Btw, release skin: Arclight Xorv. You know, because he's a villain. But it kinda gets boring if you keep playing like a bad guy, so why not a Arclight skin?

2 Comments

ModEchoing1/3/2016, 7:14:56 PM1 votes

I think he's kinda boring right now.

From the get-go, your post is just a rambling stream-of-thought that doesn't really sell anyone on the concept and reinforces the idea that you're just posting for the heck of it and not because you're making a serious effort here. Please do not use the champion portraits - they break up the flow of words and make the whole post harder to read.

The kit is incredibly snowbally since it only has damage and nothing else. That's bad, since that means if another champion outdamages Xorv, there's no reason to play Xorv in a game. Unfortunately, Brand, Anivia, Malzahar, LeBlanc, and more all outdamage Xorv, which means your champion is already in a bad spot. It doesn't even have a passive. Your attempt not to be a knockoff of other champions falls flat when you're constantly comparing your abilities to other champions.

If you're really trying, you can do a LOT better than this.

Lionsblood11/3/2016, 7:19:06 PM1 votes

Your kit is pretty straight forward which isn't bad. Iike you said this champion is a comination between Brand andEzreal which is reflected in his kit.

I would go with this based on the lore you gave for is Ultimate

Xorv over clocks himself allowing his robotic side to take over. During this time damage dealt to Xorv is delayed. When this effect ends Xorv take the full amount of damage.

You could have your character light up more damage he takes and maybe to balance 50% of the damage take is guaranteed.

This would synergy with zhyona's hour glass well as you could avoid the damage completely.

altough these two abilties dont really go togeather in a kit your passive for him could be

Conversation - X stat gives give abilities bonus distance

:3 keep working on it.

Also if you have to change can you look at my Aatrox rework idea :). TY