[Champion Suggestion] Fortes, The Unkown Traveler

UnusualTerror·5/24/2015, 12:44:23 PM·2 votes·383 views

Fortes, The Unkown Traveler

I was young when I started traveling the world, but i never expect that I could experience such power we don't know about. Even myself just an ordinary human could master them. Im talking about the legend of a sword who gives his master super human abilities. But this sword was strange... It changed sometimes. The form, color, shape and strength. I realised I messed with unique powers it made me important and someone who could be written in legends. This sword served me destiny. I became the traveling hero with courage and glory, but where im located now im the unkown traveler im just wandering in this land they call Runeterra. I don't know what brought me here but i'll find out... I hope so. My name is Fortes and I will share my story.

He was wandering in the high lands of his roots discovering every corner, hole and cave. Hours later he found a very old building wich was possibly ancient. He never saw this building and Fortes knew that it never stood there, later then Fortes tried to examine the building. Fortes toke his oil lamp to light up this place."In the name of Oblivion what did I found!?" Fortes found some hyroglyphs and strange marks he had no knowledge from and at this moment Fortes knew he made the wrong move... Examining the marks but suddenly a dark energy wave came from the ground and warped him out of his loved world into an other, but he didn't know by himself. Fortes saw a dark world full of monsters in a split of a second. Fortes fell on the grass and stood up while he tried to discover where he was located. He heard something strange and look at his back and saw a floating eye including a body. "A human who survived the void? Imposible!" Well who are you floating eye thingy? "I am Vel'koz the eye of the void! (Book Second Chapter) "So you're Vel'koz? Tell me how I came here!" I'm seeking knowledge.... Disintecrate human. "This sounds bad!" Fortes ran away from Vel'koz but later or soon Vel'koz managed to stun Fortes with an energy force. Fortes stood up and was defencing himself against Vel'koz, after the fight Fortes tried to escape from Vel'koz because of his destruction in nature and Fortes cares about it. Fortes found a cave and was hiding there for a long time, at the moment he knew Vel'koz was gone he left the cave and was ready for traveling the lands of Runeterra.

"It was a week ago I got warpd in this world, but now I knew the story about this land and I will join it, I know about Noxus and Demacia, Zaun and Pitover and even the void and the Shadow Isles. I was everywhere in this land, almost every city where they don't want to kill me. I made some friends and companions, but I have a single one main objective and it's home."

"I heard about a creature who's named Bard he's able to join other realms. I searched for him and I saw him once wandering or floating, a couple of second I tried to reach him and I was standing in his front. I told Bard everything, but he didn't answer. He saw my sword and he was wising at it, he was wising at the letters. Wait letter since when... Was it there? Nevermind. The sword 'says' Lost for a reason." Fortes knew what it ment. This is where he belongs in this world, but one question will stay... Why?

The Second part of the story of Fortes 4-9-2015/9-4-2015 Augustus 4 2015

I am discribing the night of this world... Dark and losses is what I learn. The lost Shurima and the darkness of the shadow isles. This world is at his end. Neither my life. After living 1 year in this world I think im going to die, but don't give up said the random men in front of me. "Life has different meaning and people must accept them" and he did dissapear. Destiny is playing with me again. Soon more

Friends: Bard Jax Braum

Enemies/rivals Velkoz

Lore Update soon!

Fortes's look.

Hair Style: Messy and a little bit long Hair Color: Black Skin Color: Tinted Body Form: Muscle Clothes: Clothes style like a mix between Assasins Creed and general mountain clothes period 1500-1800 ( clothes also been damaged) Weapon: Forge Of Sages ( One-Handed Sword) Secondary: Oil Lamp and Book Voice: Calm ( A bit like Connor Kenway from Assasins Creed III) Eye Color: Red Age: Aprox 19-23 Attitude: Calm, nice and couraged Goal: Finding Home Occupation: Traveler and Savior Race: Unkown sort of human

Gameplay

Fortes is a hybrid champion, he's able to find his place at top, mid and maybe even jungle

Fortes is a variable champion Fighter. Assasin

The abilities

Passive:

Forge Of Sages

Force Of Sages is a strange sword with unique powers

when finishing your Q ability Fortes will receive a short attack speed and magic damage boost (Sage of Force)

when finishing your W Fortes will gain a shield until destroyd or lasting 2 seconds (may longer or shorter) (Sage of Defence)

when finishing his E ability Fortes will gain a short movement speed boost (Sage of Mobility)

Q: Force of the Blade

When using Fortes will charge his sword with a magical energy first strike is extra damage second strike after a short cooldown is a slash and slow with extra damage after the last cooldown Fortes will stab a force of energy wich can hit multiple targets.

W: Light in the dark

Passive: Fortes will draw his lantern and receive extra vision in the Fog of War.

Active: Fortes will pour oil on his sword wich will give a burning blade. His next attack will deal extra damage and ignites the target for a while.

E: Soundless Pass

Fortes will dash while using it. If hit an enemy cooldown reduces and will stack range (3 stacks is maximum) combine this with Force of the Blade (Q) will make a athletic strike.

R: Strike to Oblivion!

Fortes can only use if enemy is in range and hit by the 3rd Q strike multiple people can be striked. Fortes eyes will glow and he dashes with an energy force to the enemy and strike them with a combo (also a disable) this ultimate looks like Link's final smash link (got the joke ) is here from 5:23 to 5:29 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=npk7Fk8e40g

In game Fortes ult will last 2-4 seconds

Updates will come soon like Art and more

Did I made grammatical mistakes or u have any ideas COMMENT

Lol Acc: UnusualTerror (euw)

Why I made this... Because I always wanted to be a game designer

Update 1 25-5-2015/ 5-25-2015

Abilities are updated

Passive: Still the same (need ideas)

Q: Will stay the same

W: Still the same ( need ideas)

E: Changed, everything is the same except the q e interaction

Fortes flips when using the QE mid air ( can be used to jump over walls)

R: Changed, The ultimate is not mid-air anymore and it's now a combo with a bigger hitbox (multiple enemies can be catched if in range of the hitbox) The combo is no more mid air and is just a 3 slash one stab combo with a blast at the end that will knockback. (No more 3rd strike Q needed to use this)

Arts already created soon online!

2 Comments

antymattar5/24/2015, 2:20:44 PM2 votes

I like the Q. So far the closest we are to any real combo moves in league is something like Yasuo's Q or XinZhao' Q. I like it, it sounds fun.

The passive is kinda meh. It just makes every other skill more powerfull. not much to say.

W is interesting. Im not sure if the fog of war sight is a good thing. There was a talk way back where someone (I seriously have to start remembering names now) was answering a question about "bonus sight radius masteries" and the answer was that riot was quite pleased with how fair the vision system was. That adding more or less sight to champions kind of seemed to break a very special balance. Then again, Evelynn exists so there goes that logic. Im not sure, but the ability sounds great.

E is a dash. The stacking kinda makes it really interesting, but the das Q kinda is embarking on Yasuo's territory. :/

R is... well its non-knockup Yasuo at this point. Cmon man, dont do that. :( Aside from the obvious Yasuo ripoff, it's kinda easy to set off, all you need to do is just get an autoatack on someone. Not hard to do with a dash.

overall the first half is really cool, the second one is not so much.