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[Champion Concept] Lucienna - The Carrier of Hope

The Neverworld··6 votes·5,827 views

http://www.baronbuff.de/sites/www.baronbuff.de/files/styles/original/public/senna.jpg?itok=jlQQ7jFy

(This is the Champion from the Sneak Peak (Which was then downvoted - thanks toxic people). Since Lucian came, I’ve seen many people creating Senna as a Champion, the wife of Lucian. I kind of disliked the idea, because Senna is forever lost, and even if she came alive as a human, the conflict between Lucian and Thresh would end. So I thought: Instead to make Senna alive, why not make someone that resembles her alive? First I thought of a reincarnation, but then reincarnations wouldn’t work without Senna’s soul being freed. But then it came into my mind… her daughter! )

#Lore "With my mother and father, they took everything I loved; cared for. I will hunt these wretched abominations and spare no single one of them." - Lucienna, Carrier of Hope

*"They claimed our lives, but I wasn’t strong enough. Even though I’ve learnt everything essential and important from my father and mother, they didn’t wanted me to participate. They said that if I stood in their way, they might lose me. But I’m not a child anymore. But they wouldn’t listen. I thought, if I kept pushing myself and do what I was told, that one day we could live a normal life… oh how wrong I was. *

*I remember the day when my mother was taken away from us. I’ve cried until I couldn’t even see my own hands before the tears. It was a creepy place, simple trees became in the next moment horrific entities and I wanted nothing more than to leave. I screamed while my parents did slay the undead, but one of them was attracted to my scream. He threw his rusty chains on me, but my mother took the blow instead. She was gone and taken away, and since then my father was cold. I sought for my kind father, but all that was left was an empty shell, with nothing else on his mind than to take his revenge. Then he hid me as far as possible to friends of my parents. He thought I would be safe until he found the undead one who took my mother, but the undead never rests. *

Days felt like weeks and weeks felt like months. I remember how slowly the winter came; we used to sit in front of the fireplace, as we were the only ones in the wilderness. It was then when I heard a strange sound. It kind of attracted me to go outside. The others warned me to not go outside, but I couldn’t resist. I had the same feeling on the day when my mother was taken away from me. I went outside, but I found nothing. In the next moment, a gigantic shadow appeared above me and did land on the house, destroyed it and killed them. It was a big three headed hound; you could tell in their eyes how murderous they were. For one moment, I couldn’t move. It was not fear what I felt, it was pure hatred; hatred for these abominations like the one in front of me, who took away everyone I know. I took a wooden bar and charged for it, but he simply lifted his pawn and threw me away. He turned away and slowly walked as if I was no threat to him.

I screamed at him, for what he and his kind did to me. That my father might be already killed by the undead with chains. I insulted him and threw stones at him. It was then when he turned back to me, and began to speak. I was astonished by his words; he told me that he is not one of the undead, but served once his undead rider. The one who took his rider, was the undead with chains, the Soul Collector; and since then, he chases the Chain Warden. I told him that I was the daughter of a Purifier, and with his help, we both could find the one who inflicted so much pain to us. Since then, my familiar and friend is Wrex, and with him I will continue where my mother stopped. I will hunt these mindless beasts, I will kill those soulless murderers and end the reign of the living dead on Runeterra."

#Appearance
Lucienna looks pretty much like this down below. She rides on top of the Cerberus. The artist is Sinclay and I’d be happy if you share a comment on how good this picture is.
http://sinclay.deviantart.com/art/League-of-Legends-Senna-Sketch-2-469243675

Since there is no armoured Cerberus on the internet, I had to draw it with my bad skills.
This is Wrex. He is a three-headed hound, who is armoured and murderous. I will explain later how unique he really is.
http://halfsteps-neverworld.deviantart.com/art/Wrex-Three-Heads-of-Terror-433636209

(Please click on the picture if you want to be redirected to DeviantArt and its Creator)

#Champion Explanation

  • Lucienna (Comes from Lucienne, which is the female version of Lucien, which is the French form of Lucianus and thus Lucian is the English form. Yet, is a combination of Lucian and Senna) is 19 years old and a very dutiful and disciplined person, like her father and mother. She inherited the kindness of her father, and the dedication of her mother.
  • *Lucienna wants to kill all undead ones, but her main target remains to be Thresh, the Chain Warden. Wrex, the three-headed hound’s target is Thresh, but for Lucienna, he slains all foes. Wrex is very loyal, that is why he chases Thresh for taking his Rider from him, but slowly accepts Lucienna as his new rider. *
  • *Wrex is not a Shadow Isles creature, even though he looks like one. He’s a exception of Nature, and strangely enough, every one of his head has a own personality, voice and mind. From the picture above, the furthest head is shy and looks sometimes afraid. The nearest head is the wisest one, who is still aggressive, but knows to handle the heat. The middle head is probably the one who decides to walk and what to do. He’s the rebel type and the most aggressive of the three. *
  • *Wrex was the three headed hound in Tocharian’s Prologue who defended the last stage in the black tower on Shadow Isles. He normally has a rider who fights with him, but he was taken by Thresh, thus Wrex couldn’t defend the tower on his own. Wrex wanted to defend the tower of his past Rider, because he couldn’t do anything else. When Tocharian, the Lost Conqueror conquered the tower, Wrex could do nothing but to flee. Since then, he chases Thresh, because he has nothing left. *
  • *Lucienna is the new Rider of Wrex. She rides on his back, controls him and fights with him. They are a great team, because Wrex dominates the enemy and Lucienna provides him with magic, such as health. *
  • *Lucienna is best played as jungler, but can also be a great addition for jungle or top lane. The best way to build her, would be to balance health, attackspeed and raw AD. *

#Stats
Health 445 (+81) Attack damage 54 (+3.1)
Health regen. 7 (+0.78) Attack speed 0.625 (+2.9%)
Mana 235 (+44) Armor 22 (+3.0)
Mana regen. 7 (+0.55)
Magic res. 30 (+0.40)
Range 135 (Melee) Mov. speed 335

#Abilities

#Innate Passive - 'Fountain of Hope':
*Whenever Lucienna’s health is below 35%, she starts casting an absorption barrier around her and Wrex. For the next 2.5 seconds, the damage they receive will after 2.5 seconds, heal them by 60%/80%/100%/120%/140%/160% (Champion Level 1/4/7/10/13/16) of the damage received previously. This has a Cooldown of 220/160/100 (1/10/15) seconds. *

#Q (Lock-On) – ‘All For One ‘:
*Within Basic Attack Range, the left and right head of Wrex bite the target’s legs while the middle head keeps damaging the target. For 1.5/2/2.5/3/3.5 seconds, the target is slowed by 40% and Wrex deals based on his Attack Speed with every hit [150% Base AD] + 25/35/45/55/65(+25% AD) physical damage. Whenever the target stands still and is not moving, the slow is increased by 10% additionally, up to a max of 30%. *

  • Info: Flash, Dash, Stun, Snare, knock back and knock ups will break up the ability. For the duration of this ability, Wrex is kind of bound to the target and gets dragged and can recast to get off of the target. The slow is only applied within the duration of the skill and ends when the animation is over or upon recast. Applies On-Hit effects such as Lifesteal etcetera. While active, other abilities can be cast as well, except Ultimate.
  • **Mana Cost: ** 55/65/75/85/95
  • **Cooldown: ** 16.5/15.5/14.5/13.5/12.5 after the ability ends

#W () - 'Outbreak'
*Upon activation, Lucienna enhances Wrex movement speed with magic. Wrex gains for 3.5 seconds +35%/40%/45%/50%/55% movement speed bonus. *
Upon Recast: Wrex jumps within 500 range, to the designated location and upon arrival, howls and fears all enemies in a 450 range circle around him for 1.5 seconds.

  • Info: Can be only recast if Outbreak is active. Movement Speed will still be active after recast.
  • **Mana Cost: ** 60/65/70/75/80
  • **Cooldown: ** 19/17/15/13/10

#E (Lock-On) - 'Purify':
On enemy unit: *Via lock-on within 650 range, Lucienna purifies the target’s body and takes its life essence. By doing so, she deals 55/70/85/100/115(+45% AP) magic damage. Whenever she takes the life essence, she stores them, up to a max of 2/4/6/8/10 at once. *
On ally unit: Via lock-on within 650 range, Lucienna purifies an ally target and infuses it with one of her stored life essences. She heals the ally target by 40/50/60/70/80(+1 for each 1% missing health of the target).

  • Info: Lucienna can target herself too to heal herself. Can be cast while walking. Animation wise, Lucienna rips the life essence and it flies to her; and if sent to an ally, then she sends the life essence, thus makes a 0.3 seconds delay.
  • **Mana Cost: ** 45 at all ranks
  • **Cooldown: ** 9.5/8.5/7.5/6.5/5.5

#Ultimate - 'Roarity ':
*Wrex roars heavily in a narrow, but 650 range long cone. Enemies hit by the roar, receive 125/175/225(+50% AP)(+50% Bonus AD) magic damage and will be stunned. Enemies directly in front of Wrex or in the middle of the cone, are stunned by 1.5/2/2.5 seconds, while enemies on the edge of the cone, are stunned by 0.5/1/1.5 seconds. *

  • **Mana Cost: ** 100
  • **Cooldown: ** 120/110/100

http://s14.directupload.net/images/141109/wu9zdbu2.gif

#Concept Explanation

Lucienne offers some new and old skills, combined in a new kit. She is a great supportive Champion, who can be played as Support, Jungler or Top laner. In a fight, she can move fast and jump onto her targets, causing them to fear and tremble before her three-headed hound. She can heal others and sustain as a durable fighter, but has also weaknesses.

  • Innate Passive gives Lucienna’s kit more support to initiate and engage, although a risky one. Her passive won’t be activated if she avoids damage, but receiving too much damage can kill her.
  • Her Q allows to slow a single target for few seconds, while dealing damage. Best for assaults or ganks.
  • The W allows her to increase movement speed and upon recast, jumps to a location and fears all enemies inside.
  • E is probably the most evil ability of her kit. Upon damage, she draws the enemy life essence, and then can heal herself or ally units.
  • Last, but not least - The Ultimate can disable a whole enemy team, but in order to do so, positioning and aim is very important.

Lucienne is strong against low mobility Champions, who lack in escape ability, as Lucienne’s engages can be easily avoided otherwise. Lucienne is weak against burst Champions, who could theoretically kill her before her passive starts to heal.

How to play against Lucienna

  • When Lucienna’s passive is activated, she shines green (Not Wrex himself).
  • Keep in mind, that once Lucienna’s passive is active, you should either finish her off or wait until her passive is over.
  • Once Lucienna used her Q on you, keep in mind that if you stay still, the slow will increase. Attack her, dash away or use heavy CC to keep her off.
  • If Lucienna activated her W, be prepared that she might jump on you. Use that to your advantage.
  • If Lucienna uses her E on her or an ally, she won’t use it to damage you. Keep that in mind.
  • Lucienna’s Ultimate starts up, thus means you can dodge it or atleast try to go on the edge. You could outsmart her, if she’s directly in front of you, to cast it wrong.

#Possible Skins Infernal
http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs17/i/2007/149/f/5/_Black_Project_Cerberus__by_Jeffry.jpg
http://jeffry.deviantart.com/art/Black-Project-Cerberus-55059942

Battlecast
http://img1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120813032128/finalfantasy/images/2/22/Cerberus_FFXI_Art.jpg

Warring Kingdom
http://the-chaos-bringer.deviantart.com/art/Foo-Cerberus-Design-133273211

Vandal
http://mythmaniacs.com/cerberus2.jpg

Soul Reaver
http://voodoodrummer79.files.wordpress.com/2012/06/fiery_cerberus_by_luce_loup_garou.jpg

Medusa
http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/139/b/1/Cerberus_by_lvl9Drow.jpg

Ultimate – United (Lucienna isn’t just riding. She and Wrex are one unit – her torso rises from his back.)
http://th00.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2011/181/7/f/cerberus_by_genzoman-d3kkisd.jpg

(Please click on the picture if you want to be redirected to DeviantArt and its Creator)

Thanks for reading and I hope you enjoyed it.
If you want to see more of my work, then feel free to visit my CCCC (Custom Champion Concept Compendium).

24 Comments

Shamont3 votes

That quote...you totally nailed her has the carrier of hope! :D "I will hunt these wretched abominations and spare no single one of them." Thats totally the carrier of hope talking. lol she has a good conecpt, a good idea to build off of but she neds wurk

The Neverworld2 votes

Work?

And can you please not hide behind smileys? I can't estimate if you meant it in a sarcasm way.

Lt Cuddles2 votes

I'm sure this one is being playful.

The Neverworld2 votes

You never know what certain person could think. Humans are a complex thing

Lt Cuddles2 votes

¯_(ツ)_/¯

Shamont3 votes

I was joking about the quote, but she IS a champion does need some work. Hmm id be able to help you more if you tell me the arch type that you were trying to project, whats her niche, how would people play her, her position? Is she a tank?, a jungler, a fighter? The kit that you have given makes it hard (at least for me thats why im asking for clarification) to pick out what it is you were really going for here. To me it feels like Wrex could really be his own champion without Lucienna. I like that you are trying to a make a rider champ, thats cool. But if you look at Sujuani you will see that she is not entirly dependent on her boar to to all the damage. It seems that all her abilites have to go through Wrex first, like she could be a support champ that specializes at working with Wrex, but not as they are one champ together. I also dont really feel that Lucienna would really be Lucian's daughter, sorry? Her passive is good, it fits I think (but I cant really tell, because I cant see her arch type correctly, this actually goes back to the quote. Would a Beacon of hope really say that. If you gonna give a champ a certain title, then every fiber of thier very being should match that title, that arch type. Were you really trying to create a Carrier of Hope or were you trying to create something a bit different? Because her kit does not really scream CARRIER OF HOPE, it screams IM OGONNA FUQING KILL YOU WITH MY BADAZZ DOG AND YOU GOTTA DEAL WITH IT, which isnt nessacerily a bad thing, the problem is one of character consistency, thats what Im getting at here) W's OK but I feel that it could have more of her in it. Her E just doesnt seem to fit either, it has her in it, but like I said I cant pick out what her position and what shes supposed to be like or do, so its very hard to me to judge this concept to the best of my ability, because I dont know what you were aiming for.

I feel that shes more a revenger like her intended father, who is using any means nessassary to exact that revenge, which is why she teamed up with a Hell Hound, But dont you think she'd want more of the action for herself?

Im not hating, but I feel that this idea could be refined an made a little better, I only want to help becasue even thought Riot says they dont want us making champs for the goal of them being implemented in the game, I cant help but think about how my and everyone else champs would be like in the game. And I want all of our creations to be AWESOME in the game, and that includes yours.

The Neverworld2 votes

STOP DOWNVOTING EVERY THREAD I DO IN AN INSTANT

Lt Cuddles2 votes

Welcome to the boards...

The Neverworld1 votes

More like welcome to league of trolls...

BlackMambo002 votes

I Love this concept, but like stated below I would consider changing her story a bit to more reflect that she is not so much seeking vengeance on thresh as trying to find out what happened to her parents. Make her and Wrex not know fully what happened, and be in search for the truth, and make her just a smidgen younger. Also consider the intended role and how she would interact with other champions abilities and consider adding that to the synopsis.

The Neverworld1 votes

Once she enters the League, she will see what happened to Lucian and Senna. (And the Lore is written in past, thus can't write)
She knows what's wrong. Her mother is taken away and her father is slowly taken too.
The reason why she fights the Shadow Isles, is because she doesn't want to lose her father too, who is currently fighting and trying to hide her like a defenseless baby.
While Lucian knows that Senna is lost, Lucienna claims for the hope that she can be freed, thus is the Carrier of Hope.
Since the Harrowing, we know, that the Shadow Isles spreads their terror more and more over Runeterra. Even before, if you read Lucian's Lore, that they attack the living on Runeterra. Lucienna wants to stop that, she wants to stop the pain that people feel, if they lose their dearest and lose their life to these wretched abominations. Thus Carrier of Hope.

I know that people here didn't fully read. Like Shamont, trying to change my Champion on her own, despite not reading what role she is intended for.

About synergize between other Champions.

Q - While slowing, stuns, snares or knock ups from team will help drastically to maintain the damage and increase the slow.
W - Jumps in and fears, in the meantime the team can engage freely.
E - Deals damage and heals allies in danger. No cast time, can be used while running, escaping, chasing, attacking, whatsoever.
R - Offers team great advantage to engage or to escape.

Godhri2 votes

Based on the lore and particularly the quote, I don't really understand how she is the "carrier of hope". As one commenter already stated, she is more likely to be an avenger. She isn't driven by hope nor does she inspire any (based on lore given) therefore, it is both misleading and incorrect to call her the "carrier of hope". Also within your lore, there is no explanation for how she possesses the abilities that she has now. Did she always possess the ability to steal the life essence of others? If so, how? Where did she learn magic? How did she learn magic? These are essential questions you need to answer in order for your lore and skill set to make sense.

With regards to your abilities, there is far too much hard crowd control available. You have two aoe hard CC abilities. The W ability's area of effect is relatively large too. Not to mention the low cool down come late game.

Other than what I've pointed out above, I like your concept.

The Neverworld1 votes

About the "Carrier of Hope" title. I've explained that to the other commenter, too. However - Currently, the creatures of Shadow Isles - the undead; are spreading across Runeterra. In Lucian's Lore stays written, that they attack the innocent and hunt the living ones (Surely not Shadow Isles, as there is no living person, despite the undead and wicked). And since the Harrowing Video, the Puppetmaster who told a story - the Shadow Isles expands further.

In order to defeat them, there's only a very few amount of participants like Lucian and Senna. They were a great duo. When Lucienna lost her mother, she also lost her father due to him being driven by revenge. On top of that, people near her are dying and screaming in pain. She gives also herself fault for the death of others, especially her mother, as the Chain Warden only attacked Lucienna because she was screaming.

Now try to understand her feelings. She always wanted to fight, but her parents didn't want to allow her to be vulnerable. She wants to avenge her mother, but also start where her mother stopped.

Lucienna carries the hope to defeat the Shadow Isles. The hope to free her mother Senna, and bring peace to her father Lucian. This hope is not bound to her and her parents, but also includes the hope of all on Valoran - the victims and the future victims of Runeterra. She is the Carrier of Hope.

About her abilities: Since her childhood, she had the power to cleanse ones soul. It wasn't strong enough to threaten the undead, but it was enough to treat the wounds of her parents. She self-doubted herself and was scared, but since her mother was taken, she gained more confidence.

And thanks for the feedback!

PureCancer1 votes

How did you make the votes?

The Neverworld2 votes

If you create a thread, go the the bottom - there's a bar for vote polls. Click on it and it expands. Then give type in the question, the possible answers and everything's done

RangoTangoGanko1 votes

I feel just a Cerberus champion would be cool but a Cerberus rider is iffy because Cerberus is an untamed beast from the underworld but like the idea definitely.

The Neverworld1 votes

Cerberus is the name of a three-headed hound. Since this is Runeterra/League of Legends, myths and stories outside of it (Real World) do not count and have their own rules. (Like Cassiopeia being Medusa, who normally petrifies everyone who sees her, not when she uses her ultimate)

Look at the bright side. Dogs can be trained. And a Cerberus is nothing more but a three-headed dog. :P

Shamont1 votes

I do like the idea, its unique and original. Ive seen your other work and its amazing, but on this one what you in progress here is a bit off your game, you were definitely on top of your game when you made Tocharian. I just feel that the thoughts are there you just need to define your direction, and from there on only greatness can ensue.

The Neverworld1 votes

I create a Champion, and everything you want to do is change for your own good. Tell me something. Do you like ALL Champions in the League? No, no one does. And does it need you to change someone's concept so that you can like it? No.

I've read your post, but it feels like you didn't read and understand anything.

Carrier of Hope is someone, who carries the hope - in this case, carries the hope of defeating the Shadow Isles (undead). Read Lucian's Lore. In Lucian's Lore stays written, that the undead ones attacked the living ones on Runeterra, they terrorized the people and Lucian and Senna fought them.

At the Harrowing, thanks to the new video of a puppetmaster, we know that the Shadow Isles is spreading further. In Lucienna's Lore stays, that Lucian thought that her daughter would be safe at the hideout, but even the shadow Isles reached for it.

Senna, her mother, has been taken away by Thresh. While Lucian is sure that she is lost, Lucienna carries the HOPE of freeing her. She CARRIES THE HOPE of everyone on Runeterra, to drive back the undead.

So no, she's not "MOTHAFUGGA I'M GONNA KILL YOU WITH MY DOG" - She is "WITH MY LAST DYING BREATH; I WILL NOT ALLOW YOU TO HURT OTHERS".

And only because Sejuani rides a non-epic pig and has to do all the job, doesn't mean that we could get another pair who acts different.

BTW: You asked for her role. I've wrote it like two or three times. Main: Bruiser/Offtank / Secondary: Support/Jungler.

R4iya1 votes

If you don't want criticisms, then don't post on the forums. You can't post and expect everyone to be all like, wow gj dude, that's going to be the next champ in the League of Legends...

The Neverworld1 votes

There's a difference between positive criticsm and negative criticsm. And it's obviously not positive, if everything has to be butchered for someone to like it. Wow gj dude, bad attitude of yours.

R4iya1 votes

It wasn't bad attitude, I'm just saying that you should be open to people giving you any feedback at all if you're posting on the forums, without getting blatantly defensive. You don't have to cater to one specific person and shouldn't write a novel to every "negative" comment re-stating what you've already said in your original post because "they didn't get it". Just take any constructive comments, re-work them into your model if you want to, and tell the commenter that you did it so they can re-read the updated version of your story without the attitude.

The Neverworld1 votes

If someone says that there's something wrong, then I have to tell him that it isn't wrong. It's called manners. If someone (obviously) took his time to read, but didn't understand, then there's my responsibility to answer and explain what I meant.

In this case - Lucienna isn't a carrier of hope. She interacts too less, but her pet acts more. Things like these... I dunno what to say. I've spent more than 5 hours on this and all my previous Concept. I know that I can't appeal to everyone, but I atleast want to explain myself why I did the decisions that I had to.

In other way - I just tried to create content that people could take on their mind, to expand their mind and have fun at it. But changing the Champion I've created both in my mind and on paper, is something I can't accept or understand. Thus, I tried to explain, instead to be an ignorant arsehole who only accepts positive criticsm.

However, I accept also changes to ability damage or small stuffs. It's not like I'm pushing all negative criticsm - I just try to explain one more time.

Shamont1 votes

Thanks i get it now, and after re-reading your champ, I found that its really awesome and you did a great job, GG

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