The Mischievous Adventures part 327

Silverninj28·Jun 15, 2018·1 votes·1,015 views

(Later)

: "Why do you sit around and play that game all day?" : "Because it's fun, Mom and Dad gave a laptop to do so, and I can play with my boyfriend." : "Really now...Are you in a match with him?" : "Yeah we're-.....crap." : "I'm going to supervise this match until it's over, and don't send your boyfriend any messages while it goes on. Got that?" : "You really seem to kill every ounce of joy in my life don't you." : "I'm just protective of you." : "That and maybe you want a different future brother in law." : "What!?" : "Um I mean...I...Um...I'll just...yeah I'll just play the game." : "By?" : "Ugh, your rules." : "Thank you." : "Welcome and not welcome."

3 Comments

IfnethJun 15, 20181 votes

Geez. Garen sounds abusive and controlling. Do her parents know how he’s treating her?

Silverninj28Jun 15, 20181 votes

If I made you think Garen was Abusive, sorry. He's not suppose to, I kinda made him to be the protective big brother not an abusive one (Cause god knows I already enough) If there's something I need to change about him, tell me.

IfnethJun 16, 20181 votes

{quoted}

If I made you think Garen was Abusive, sorry. He's not suppose to, I kinda made him to be the protective big brother not an abusive one (Cause god knows I already enough) If there's something I need to change about him, tell me.

Too much like Jayce or Vlad. Harsh, bossy, threatening, and controlling. He’s her brother, not her father; and not even he should talk like that to her. It also sounds like he’s the boss of Lux. Why?

Also, isn’t Lux like 16 or 17 years old? Forbidding her from seeing any boys is pretty controlling, and actually sitting down and watching her game with Ezreal is invading her privacy. Garen shows no respect for her autonomy or boundaries in this scene and replies with the common, disturbing lie, “I’m just protective.”

I think I understand what you were going for—Garen is the comically overprotective older brother who makes dating Ezreal hard for Lux—but Garen seems too serious and believable for us to laugh.

Had Garen assembled a platoon of scouts to observe her date locations, a company of soldiers to guard her, and a battalion in reserve just in case, all while carrying a medical kit and a full surgical team, he would just look silly, and we could laugh.