I honestly think whoever made this fan-edit should become a skin designer at Riot because this looks amazing. Riot, PLEASE redesign Victorious Aatrox with these examples as inspiration. I love all of the work you all do but this is just insane.
Edit 1 looks fine, though small details like that are often lost in game. The second and third ones though are way too busy.
The thing is... no one is going to be looking for all that detail while they are in the middle of a teamfight, or just simply playing the game. I'm not saying that Victorious Aatrox has no problems-- personally, I think it looks hideous-- but if it's mild changes like that, it'll make little to no difference. The only one that really seems to stand out is the third edit, the one where his chest is a navy blue, but that doesn't really fit the Victorious skin series theme.
The whole skin just needs to be redone. Everything. Or better yet, make it some other champion, one that doesn't already have a gold/white skin. I'm leaning towards Darius-- think he'd look totally sweet with the gold/white theme. No, I'm not a Darius main. I've played him like... I don't even remember the last time I've played him. No bias here.
