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My Custom League Champion Idea

KingFrossi·8/15/2017, 3:49:35 AM·1 votes·313 views

So I thought about an awesome champion idea when fighting the Abyss Watchers in Dark souls 3. Sooooo, here it is, nick pick at it all you want <3*[slayer-jinx-catface]* Name: Noran, The Fallen Knight (Looks like an Abyss Watcher from Dark Souls 3) http://imgur.com/CXIhVyp for more of an idea for what he looks like

Passive: (Parry) Noran has a 15% chance to parry champion last hit by, when hit by the champion, they’re parried, champion is stunned for 1 second and the next attack dealt by Noran deals 150% damage.

Q: (Greatswords Mastery) Noran spins in a circle swinging their sword outward dealing 65/75/80/90/100 damage in a circle, recasting it right afterwards swings the sword once again in a circle in the opposite direction, dealing 70/85/90/105/120 damage, recasting it a third and final time initiates a finisher. This finisher can only target enemy champions and deals 90/100/110/115/125 damage, enemy champions cannot escape this lock on by ANY means.

W: (Line Cutter) Noran jabs their greatsword into the ground and dashes forward 450 meters, dealing 75/80/90/110/120 damage in a straight line and knocks enemy champions airborne.

E: (Rush) Passive: Noran gains a 10% movement speed increase Active: Noran sacrifices 15% of maximum damage to get a 30% movement speed increase, (Lasts 5 seconds)

R: (Ignited) Noran Becomes ignited, all attacks boosted in damage by 5%, and all basic attacks summon a fire slash shortly afterwards dealing 50/60/70% of base damage. When using E while ignited negates the sacrifice of maximum damage and gives Noran a 20% movement speed increase. Finishing move in the Greatswords Mastery ability does an aoe dealing an extra 50/100/200 true damage. When ignited, Line Cutter summons another flame to follow the line made, this does 50% of base damage. (Lasts 12 seconds)

I am still working on lore but still deciding if it is even worth it anyways...

8 Comments

scribbles7828/15/2017, 4:38:58 AM1 votes

Here are my thoughts on this- (Take this with a grain of salt, I'm pretty ignorant XD)

Passive- Not insanely unique, due to Fiora's W, but you are allowed to have different abilities do one thing, so I will allow it. Just saying, 300% damage is crazy. Lower it A LOT!

Q- The way I think of this is like Hecarim's Q with a charge system (kinda) like Riven's Q. That actually seems pretty cool and unique. I like it.

W- 1st off, when you say 'meters' I assume you mean units. (Which I believe are centimeters.) 2nd, 100 units is WAY too short. To put this into perspective, Shen's dash is 600 units. Divide that by 6 and you get a dash that is almost non-existent. I'd say make it a minimum of 450 units. Kinda like a Jarvan Flag, Dash thing in one ability, but shorter. That's no problem. I like this ability!

E- This seems like way too overloaded of an ability to be a basic skill. The way I think of it is like a LeBlanc ultimate, that can be recast for ANOTHER clone, and the clones decide what ability to use, like bots, and the third clone can be harmful. If this is how it works, it 1. Doesn't fit the theme, and 2. Is, again, too complicated for a basic ability. In my opinion, needs a complete rework.

R- THIS seems like an awesome ability. The healing seems a bit excessive, but otherwise it is a very cool ultimate. It essentially empowers your autos and abilities. You should probably add a duration for it too though. Maybe 10 seconds? In fact, cool downs on all the abilities would be nice. And if this ult can shorten the abilities cooldowns so you can make more use out of it that would be cool.

Summary-

Passive- Works well with this champ/theme, lower the damage to ~150-200%?

Q- Looks great, do not change.

W- Change range to units, Make dash ~450 units or higher, otherwise, great!

E- Too overloaded, Doesn't fit duelist theme, needs complete overhaul, IMO.

R- Very cool and unique ability, maybe lower healing and add a duration.

Now all I ask is that you add cooldowns and maybe take away the "%"s from the damages, makes it a bit misleading like it's a percent of the base damage of the ability, but in that case we wouldn't know the base damages.

I hope you take my criticism into consideration! :D

scribbles7828/15/2017, 5:22:32 PM1 votes

Okay, I really like the new E! Makes it so you can juke the target and really feel like a duelist. This looks like a champion that can really fit into the game, and if you do write a lore, making him/her tied to Fiora in some way would make a lot of sense. (Because they are both known for being great duelists)

scribbles7828/17/2017, 4:24:26 AM1 votes

Also, I'm looking forward to reading the lore if you do happen to make it! ;D