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Champion Concept: Vorella,Host of the void

Searedstone·8/19/2015, 3:22:02 PM·2 votes·1,306 views

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http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/tiV4sL04-ahnradawn-of-the-dusk

Vorella The Host of the Void

Role Mage

Secondary bar- Willpower-100

Passive Willpower For every minion,small monster killed vorella gains 1 willpower,5 for any large monster/minion kill or 25 willpower for a champion kill or assist, at max willpower her abilities gain damage equal to 100% of her ability power until 4 abilites are used, and her abilites have half cooldown during this time but cannot slow or stun, Assimilate cannot benefit from Willpower,using assimilate will destroy any willpower vorella currently has and she cannot gain willpower during Total Control.

Q Corrupt ( click on enemy ) No Cost Cooldown 5 / 4 / 3 sec Vorella corrupts an enemy applying a DoT that deals 50 / 100 / 150 / 200 / 250 (+ 75% ability power) over 3 sec and slowing them by 15% \ 20% \ 25% for 1.5 sec

W Destroy Psyche ( skillshot) No Cost Cooldown 10 / 9 / 8 sec Vorela fires a bolt of pure void energy in an attempt to destroy an enemies mind, dealing 75 / 125 / 175 / 225 / 275 ( 100% ability power) and stuns the enemy hit for 1 sec

E Overwhelm ( target area) No cost Cooldown: 10 / 9 /8 after the buff ends Any ally ( minions, champions, vorella is always affected) in the targeted area gain 5 %/7%/10% Extra attack damge,ability power and movement speed for 4 / 5 /6 sec Sec The target area is also charged with void energy damaging enemies who linger on it for 25 /50 /75 /100 /150 (+ 50% ability power) per sec

R Assimilate Cost 10% of current health Cooldown: 100/90/80 sec Vorella becomes invulnerable, untargetable but cannot attack for 2 / 1.5 / 1 sec, when this effect ends an explosion of void energy comes from vorella reaching up to 800 / 900 / 1000 units that silences enemies for 0.5 / 0.5 / 1 sec and slows enemies by 50% / 60% /70% for 2.5 sec. units closer to the center take more damage. Total Control: After the explosion vorella succumbs to the void, increasing her health.armor,magic resist and ability power by +1% per minion killed / 5% per champion or large monster/minion killed by the explosion for 3 / 4 /5 sec

Appearance: normal mode: a woman corrupted by the void,but parts are still human In Total Control: utterly consumed,the whole body is now voidlike

Vorella’s voice: female, void overlay, panic as if fighting something The Void Queen: raspy,distored version of Vorella’s voice

Quotes Champion select: I can only hold It back for so long,summoner

Vorella:

Movement : It doesn’t like the daylight Why me? I am Condemned Why should you control me,and not It?

Attacking: I cant hold It back much longer! Flee before It takes me! You Fools! The void comes for us all!

Joke: sigh my fathers always late Do you think this corruption makes me look fat?

Taunt: You will never understand my pain… what I shall do, is but a fraction of it! If you have a death wish,you don’t want It to carry it out…

To any Voidborn:I will fight your kind with what time I have left,monster To Malzahar: YOU!YOU DID THIS TO ME!!! To Kassadin: father…. I understand your pain now father….

Using R: GET OUT OF MY HEAD! * screams*

Upon reaching max Willpower: I have control… for now….

The Void Queen

Movement: The void is coming…. This world is already ours….

Attacking: The void will consume you all! Succumb to the void!

During R’s Explosion: SILENCE PATHETIC WRETCH!

Joke: you know… I really hate the colour purple.

Taunt: Will You serve the void… Or shall I just kill you now?

To Vel’koz: You have forgotten your mission Vel’koz… To Kha’zix: That beast will die when We come To Kassadin: you were too late! How have you not succumbed?! To Malzahar: you failed your task,Malzahar…. To Rek’sai: So, you’re a queen? HA! You’re too stupid to be the jester!

Lore: Vorella was Kassadin’s daughter,his pride and joy,she longed to be an explorer like her father in her childhood,but though she had his letters,she had not him to,for he was always exploring. Vorella had lived in zaun for years now so news of distressing events was hardly something to fret about,until Kassadin walked,well rather warped through the door,clad in purple armour,and a mask that meant she could not see her fathers face,but she could hear the rasping sound of his breathing. This was the first time vorella had seen her father in years,and yet her father was distorted and seemed alien to her. Kassadin told her how he came to be like he was,about the void,about everything but this reunion wasn’t to last,the void prophet Malzahar and his cult kidnapped her,and planned to sacrifice her body as a vessel for the void queens power. During the ritual,Malzahar was stopped by Kassadin just before he could finish the ritual,but Kassadin’s actions only Sealed Vorella’s fate,as his blast hit Malzahar’s Dagger it ripped open a portal to the void,and Vorella was taken. In the void her mind was tortured,her body corrupted and the void queen had entered and she was sent back,but due to Kassadin’s effort,some hope was there,somehow her mind had survived the void and she is fighting the void inside her

But she will fail soon enough…….

props to o0Ringo0o for some ideas tell me what you think,be honest!

17 Comments

Wicked burger8/19/2015, 6:49:59 PM2 votes

HI, I like your champion idea, but it definetly need some changes. Passive: The 0.5 sec cd for 4 abs used is like rly op, because with W you can permastun someone to 8 sec and literally bite them with 50% of their health if they aren't too tanky. Q: At highest lvl you can perma slow someone with 40% slow and deal a lot of dmg. W: Having a 3 sec stun on 5 sec cd is literally too op and while also dealing massive damage. 3 sec stun has like few champs in league and ususally ultimates, like ashe's ult. And with Q combo not many champs can escape, and if the don't want to pop some spells, they are traped. You can stun someone every 2 secs. E: The buffs are ok but the bonus health is kinda op and to the enemies with your other abs and teamates the can take the whole 6 sec dmg wich is rly high. R: Not rly much to say, seems balanced to me. I am not the best in making champs but what ppl told me and what i have thought about from my champ concept I can fix somethink.

Basicly you have too much cc, think and compare with other champs, the have cc on like one ability and they don't even have to stun sometimes(bard, vayne, irelia) and what I know only ashe have 3 sec stun and it is on more than 60 sec cd and it has to hit.

What changes i recomend if you want to help is that i would put out the slow from Q, and definitely would lower the stun on W to 1 sec if there isn't any requirement to stun the target( like to hit another terrain or somethink) and if you want stun maybe put up the cd a bit.

Btw about your cd of basic abs, you have there only 3 cds not 5 as there are 5 lvls of basic abilities, so is the change 1st, 3rd and 5th lvl?

FuryofThornsRedo8/19/2015, 3:46:51 PM1 votes

Well, to go to awesome great lengths for a subject discussion about a new Champion connected to the Void and then to level out key Champions: RekSai , you might have hurt her feelings! RekSai I like Velkoz , need to friends in the Void. You might just have created the reason for Void Champions to take Sides. From: FuryofThornsRedo

FuryofThornsRedo8/21/2015, 2:32:38 PM1 votes

When considering if abilities should be tweaked, I would submit all of your initial ideas to Riot League of Legends, if this was your goal; and have Riot League of Legends determine the best measurements and calculations for where the abilities should be set at for your Creation of Vorella. There would be more sincere analysis for the considerations of how low really any of those tweaking suggestions you received really should be lowered. Only because there would be a higher level of awesome compared to some Champions, I would not allow there to be someone trying to down play maybe what should not be, since there could be a lower measurement fitting in, in pertaining to your Champion Vorella.

From: FuryofThornsRedo

FuryofThornsRedo8/21/2015, 2:39:40 PM1 votes

I am protective of my artwork. Though if you are trying to learn and know all the concepts of Champion Player artwork Design, then I can see the Balance side being important. I only hope the suggestions are sincere and truthful as to not lower the ability capacity too low. Such as suggesting to balance the Champion, then only balancing sabotaging the initial artwork creation. From: FuryofThornsRedo