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Jinari, The Wildcat

Catnip The Great··4 votes·1,605 views

Jinari, The Wildcat

Extremely Sassy and Snarky "Cat-like" Personality. Cat Woman. Bounty Hunter, and Rival to Sivir. Primary: Marksman (ADC) Secondary: Assassin Razor Whip Weapon.

Visual Inspiration:
http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/bof/images/4/48/KattBF2.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20080229032150

Passive: Lacerate, Attacks leave behind deep wounds that leave targets vulnerable to critical hits. If stacks reach 5, the target leaves a trail of blood for the duration, Jinari gains bonus movement speed while following the trail. Stacks 5 times Falls off after successful Crit Levels up with R. Each stack increases Crit Chance by 1%, 5%, 10%, 15%

Q: Whiplash, Lashes out in a cone dealing damage and applying a stack of passive Whiplash does physical damage Ability will crit if target hit has 5 stacks of passive. 25/45/65/85/105 (50/60/70/80/90% AD)

W: Vault Jinari pounces in a line. Bouncing over allies or enemies. If the target is an enemy, it takes physical dmg. If the target has 5 stacks of Lacerate, the ability may be cast again. 30/55/80/105 (30% Flat AD Scaling)

E: Caterwaul, Yowls, causing fear to nearby enemies for (0.05/0.10/0.15/0.25/0.50) seconds. Targets hit takes additional damage from Whiplash (Q). (DMG Boost: Crit % Scales into % Bonus AD)

R: Chastise, Cracks whip in a line in front of Jinari, wrapping around first enemy champion hit, immobilizing them for (1/1.5/ 2) seconds. Can be recast again within length of the ability, Jinari pulls herself to the enemy, slashing them for physical damage and ending the immobilize. 250 / 450/ 650 (100% AD Scaling)

14 Comments

Kamiroo Wolf2 votes

The passive, Q, and W make me only see Smite's Bastet when I look at this champ. Keep that kit in smite(as it works best in the type of moba Smite is). Be original.

Anyway, I suppose I should warn you that these boards aren't too keen on furry concepts. By all means pursue them if you want, but unless you're really gonna put effort into your proposal you're most likely going to see nothing but an onslaught of down votes.

The concept itself is not good, but not horrible either... let's just say it's bad. From a lore standpoint, it makes no sense. Rengar seems like the type o' cat who don't share his trophies with no woman. Just plopping her down as his "partner"(if that's what you wanna call your obvious match-making attempt) would require a lot of explanation. Where has she been all this time? Who is she? What are her motives, ambitions, etc? Try to avoid connecting your concepts to actual lore and/or champions if you aren't prepared to back up why they fit in.

The kit needs a bit of work. Not only is half the ability a set a rip off of Bastet from Smite, it's also extremely vague and boring. The crit from her passive is good and fine. The passive itself is good and fine. It's just... extremely lackluster. It's on the same level of Wukong's passive in terms of appeal. The Q is ok, I guess. The W is another annoying in and out assassin ability(think Zed W or Leblanc teleporting back after bursting). The E is basically nothing. That duration for the fear is absolutely too low to be viable. The R? Fuck it, sure, why not? There's no way of telling whether or not this champion is strong or weak without numbers.

I honestly don't know why I'm wasting my time here. For your next champion, go into vivid detail concerning lore, appearance, personality, stats, abilities, etc. Use champions from the LoL wiki as a reference if you need help with numbers and formatting, but try to keep your ideas original and unique.

Catnip The Great1 votes

it was really just a pitch at an idea. nothing solid or definite. i do agree that values are necessary, i just didnt intend on trying to calculate all of that out.. since in the 1/900000 chance that riot would actually make this champion... my numbers would never stay regardless.

i will do some work with the kit... im not really a fan of bastet's kit... so i don't really want this to be like her. The other idea i had for her lore-wise was that she was a bounty hunter, like sivir... and shows up at one of her heists... and stealing the job from her.. creating a forever long rivalry between the 2. that one certainly has more appeal to it, but i wanted to see how the first went over first.

my original draft of the passive had an additional effect... but i removed it after i added the escape ability. the passive originally read-

Passive: Lacerate, Attacks leave behind deep wounds that leave targets vulnerable to critical hits. If stacks reach 5, the target leaves a trail of blood for the duration, Jinari gains bonus movement speed while following the trail. Stacks 5 times Falls off after successful Crit Levels up with R. Each stack increases Crit Chance by 1%, 5%, 10%, 15%

i also had

W: Vault Jinari pounces in a line. Bouncing over allies or enemies. If the target is an enemy, it takes physical dmg. If the target has 5 stacks of Lacerate, the ability may be cast again.

i made those edits because i thought that it might be too much... so for balance sake... i toned them down.

Kamiroo Wolf1 votes

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it was really just a pitch at an idea. nothing solid or definite. i do agree that values are necessary, i just didnt intend on trying to calculate all of that out.. since in the 1/900000 chance that riot would actually make this champion... my numbers would never stay regardless.

i will do some work with the kit... im not really a fan of bastet's kit... so i don't really want this to be like her. The other idea i had for her lore-wise was that she was a bounty hunter, like sivir... and shows up at one of her heists... and stealing the job from her.. creating a forever long rivalry between the 2. that one certainly has more appeal to it, but i wanted to see how the first went over first.

my original draft of the passive had an additional effect... but i removed it after i added the escape ability. the passive originally read-

Passive: Lacerate, Attacks leave behind deep wounds that leave targets vulnerable to critical hits. If stacks reach 5, the target leaves a trail of blood for the duration, Jinari gains bonus movement speed while following the trail. Stacks 5 times Falls off after successful Crit Levels up with R. Each stack increases Crit Chance by 1%, 5%, 10%, 15%

i also had

W: Vault Jinari pounces in a line. Bouncing over allies or enemies. If the target is an enemy, it takes physical dmg. If the target has 5 stacks of Lacerate, the ability may be cast again.

i made those edits because i thought that it might be too much... so for balance sake... i toned them down.

Hey, glad you're actually willing to make changes :D

Even if you aren't expecting to get noticed by Rito senpai, adding in the details I mentioned above helps get your idea across better with the boards and really helps to say more about the character than "I ship Rengar with this. Fuck Nidalee (otp)". For me, I like making champion concepts because they pose a challenge and I like seeing my proposals be well received by the community. I don't look for recognition from Riot(though it would be a nice change of pace lmao), and I understand you might not feel the same way, but doing something more from the heart and mind than expectation is almost certain to obtain much more positively received results.

I think I said that wrong, but what I'm trying to say is: Don't half ass just because you aren't expecting the concept to get somewhere. The only way it DOES get anywhere is if you invest your potential in it.

Now for those changes you suggested:

Yeah the lore change doesn't sound bad at all. With some in-depth description I'm certain that could be more interesting than what's currently there.

The passive is definitely a bit better, but think of Ekko and Gnar's passives, and how they give bonus movement speed based on basic attack stacks. Also, I just noticed that each stack gives the crit values listed above, which isn't bad, but I can't help but get the feel this is gonna be another 100% crit chance champion(not a bad thing either, just not fond of them myself) U_U which makes me cri a little on the inside.

The W is also a little bit better, but combined with the new passive and ultimate, might give our gal a bit too much mobility. Also keep in mind that Gnar is also bouncing on enemies with his recently nerfed E.

One last thing: keep in mind that there are 5 values to each ability scaling(except for ultimate, which has 3, and the passive) so X/X/X/X/X when doing that. I only mention this because the E still only has four values that don't even add up to half a second...which is basically useless CC.

Maximum Morde1 votes

Just say no to furrys.

Catnip The Great2 votes

But Rengar is so lonely ;_;

Pintegaming1 votes

she's just udyre tiger form

Tamur1 votes

Interesting champion I'll give a review tomorrow

Check out my whip user

Vaelentino1 votes

All I see is Cheetara

Tamur1 votes

Lol get on to review and I find out some wolf had already made all my points.

Kamiroo Wolf1 votes

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Lol get on to review and I find out some wolf had already made all my points.

Cocks gun I'm coming for you next mother fucker. Jk <3

Tamur1 votes

It's good to see you're still around. Not many of us original forum creators left.

Kamiroo Wolf1 votes

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It's good to see you're still around. Not many of us original forum creators left.

Heh, I wouldn't call us original forum creators, just some ol' folks who haven't moved on.

Tamur1 votes

I would suggest you change your picture or add but wearing clothes like (insert clothing you want her to wear here)

I think this http://orig14.deviantart.net/b718/f/2007/055/0/6/cat_anthro___done_by_kesshi.png would be great for either

I say this because of http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/Jhv7Zt57-8192016-moderation-update-sexy

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