Jinari, The Wildcat

Catnip The Great·9/3/2016, 1:42:16 AM·4 votes·1,605 views

Jinari, The Wildcat

Extremely Sassy and Snarky "Cat-like" Personality. Cat Woman. Bounty Hunter, and Rival to Sivir. Primary: Marksman (ADC) Secondary: Assassin Razor Whip Weapon.

Visual Inspiration:
http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/bof/images/4/48/KattBF2.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20080229032150

Passive: Lacerate, Attacks leave behind deep wounds that leave targets vulnerable to critical hits. If stacks reach 5, the target leaves a trail of blood for the duration, Jinari gains bonus movement speed while following the trail. Stacks 5 times Falls off after successful Crit Levels up with R. Each stack increases Crit Chance by 1%, 5%, 10%, 15%

Q: Whiplash, Lashes out in a cone dealing damage and applying a stack of passive Whiplash does physical damage Ability will crit if target hit has 5 stacks of passive. 25/45/65/85/105 (50/60/70/80/90% AD)

W: Vault Jinari pounces in a line. Bouncing over allies or enemies. If the target is an enemy, it takes physical dmg. If the target has 5 stacks of Lacerate, the ability may be cast again. 30/55/80/105 (30% Flat AD Scaling)

E: Caterwaul, Yowls, causing fear to nearby enemies for (0.05/0.10/0.15/0.25/0.50) seconds. Targets hit takes additional damage from Whiplash (Q). (DMG Boost: Crit % Scales into % Bonus AD)

R: Chastise, Cracks whip in a line in front of Jinari, wrapping around first enemy champion hit, immobilizing them for (1/1.5/ 2) seconds. Can be recast again within length of the ability, Jinari pulls herself to the enemy, slashing them for physical damage and ending the immobilize. 250 / 450/ 650 (100% AD Scaling)

14 Comments

Kamiroo Wolf9/5/2016, 8:00:12 AM2 votes

The passive, Q, and W make me only see Smite's Bastet when I look at this champ. Keep that kit in smite(as it works best in the type of moba Smite is). Be original.

Anyway, I suppose I should warn you that these boards aren't too keen on furry concepts. By all means pursue them if you want, but unless you're really gonna put effort into your proposal you're most likely going to see nothing but an onslaught of down votes.

The concept itself is not good, but not horrible either... let's just say it's bad. From a lore standpoint, it makes no sense. Rengar seems like the type o' cat who don't share his trophies with no woman. Just plopping her down as his "partner"(if that's what you wanna call your obvious match-making attempt) would require a lot of explanation. Where has she been all this time? Who is she? What are her motives, ambitions, etc? Try to avoid connecting your concepts to actual lore and/or champions if you aren't prepared to back up why they fit in.

The kit needs a bit of work. Not only is half the ability a set a rip off of Bastet from Smite, it's also extremely vague and boring. The crit from her passive is good and fine. The passive itself is good and fine. It's just... extremely lackluster. It's on the same level of Wukong's passive in terms of appeal. The Q is ok, I guess. The W is another annoying in and out assassin ability(think Zed W or Leblanc teleporting back after bursting). The E is basically nothing. That duration for the fear is absolutely too low to be viable. The R? Fuck it, sure, why not? There's no way of telling whether or not this champion is strong or weak without numbers.

I honestly don't know why I'm wasting my time here. For your next champion, go into vivid detail concerning lore, appearance, personality, stats, abilities, etc. Use champions from the LoL wiki as a reference if you need help with numbers and formatting, but try to keep your ideas original and unique.

Maximum Morde9/3/2016, 1:48:21 AM1 votes

Just say no to furrys.

Tamur9/5/2016, 7:24:26 AM1 votes

Interesting champion I'll give a review tomorrow

Check out my whip user

Vaelentino9/5/2016, 8:03:07 AM1 votes

All I see is Cheetara

Tamur9/5/2016, 5:59:12 PM1 votes

Lol get on to review and I find out some wolf had already made all my points.

Tamur9/5/2016, 7:11:21 PM1 votes

I would suggest you change your picture or add but wearing clothes like (insert clothing you want her to wear here)

I think this http://orig14.deviantart.net/b718/f/2007/055/0/6/cat_anthro___done_by_kesshi.png would be great for either

I say this because of http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/Jhv7Zt57-8192016-moderation-update-sexy