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Lita, The Lady of Sorrow

8th Espada·6/13/2015, 10:49:22 PM·1 votes·1,211 views
deathshriek banshee by velinov-d494yx4

Role: Mage Gender: Female Race: Banshee Residence: Shadow Isles

Friends: Karthus Karthus: Lita feels a connection to him

Lore: I don't know my family, if I had one. I don't know my name, if I had one. I named myself. I hate glass because I'm scared of my own appearance. Is this how I really look? It can't be. Where am I? I don't like it here, it's scary. There's something wrong with me; I get so angry I don't know what I'm doing. When I come to people are dead. I'm scared of myself. Some people have a certain aura around them that attract me to them and in a few days they're dead. A few hours before they die I scream. I know what I am now. I can identify people who will soon die. Hours before their death I holler for them. After their death I cry. I don't like myself. Can I be loved? Please?

Abilities:

Passive - Ghost: Lita avoids unit collision and if she is out of combat for 5 seconds she becomes invisible and comes out of invisibility upon her next ability or basic attack. Q - Sonic Wave: Lita screams, releasing sonic waves in an arc in front of her which stuns enemies while damaging them. . Upgrade - Supersonic Wave: Lita releases three waves of sonic, the first stunning all enemies hit. W - Quick Claw: Lita grows her nails out as claws and launches herself to a target location, stabbing an enemy for magic damage. Upgrade - Enhanced Quick Claw: Lita is able to dash to a much longer range, dealing damage to all hit. E - Sonic Scream: Lita screams in a line, knocking back all enemies hit and damaging them for magic damage. Upgrade - Supersonic Scream: Lita's scream has a much wider range and releases 3 waves in a line, the first that slows enemies by 60% for 2 seconds. Ultimate - True Banshee: Lita performs an upgraded version of her previous ability cast.

A Banshee has never been done before so I gave it a try. I was going for a lost, insecure concept for her who doesn't like what she does. Her name means Sorrow as well.

3 Comments

Fewtas6/13/2015, 10:56:45 PM1 votes

The passive is too much like eve's, but I like the other parts of her.

Sylverost6/15/2015, 12:55:34 PM1 votes

I love your ult, but just an idea for a second one I thought of:

Name: DeathSong Level Learned: Level One (kind of like how karma learns her ult at lvl 1) Cooldown: None Cost: Drains 80/70/60/50 Mana Per Second While Toggled: Lita attaches to an enemy champion, and can un-attach if she toggles her ult again. By toggling her ult, she becomes invulnerable but can not move or cast abilities. When she runs out of mana or toggles off her ult, she ends up where she was last at (where she toggled off her ult or where she ran out of mana). The enemy champion is nerfed 10/18/26/33% from each stat while Deathsong is active. Also, Lita drains 5/10/15/20 + (10% AP) health per second while Deathsong is active on the enemy champion. If the enemy champion dies while Deathsong is active on them, Lita recieves half of her mana (half of the mana that was used) back. Once Lita runs out of mana or Deathsong is not toggled on anymore, the enemy champion regains all his stats.

Edit: I just realized that the cost is way too high early game and way too low late game. Cost Redo: Lita Drains 30/40/50/60 mana per second Cooldown Redo: 100/95/90/80

chique406/15/2015, 2:22:23 PM1 votes

The Concept of the champion is good, but her actual R and Passive are a copy of Karma[R] and Eve[Passive]. Also she look like having a lot of strong cc and aoe and her W does look like a mage ability. I think what would be good is to have 3 ''scream'' abilities. The lore is interesting and origina and I like the fact that she is banshee