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Rydonn, The Iron Revolver

tman3000·2/22/2016, 7:29:57 PM·1 votes·239 views

Lore: Mist consumed the forest in a dark atmosphere. Shadows that looked like demons filled the area, and horrific sounds could been heard. This was no normal forest for this was the entrance to the gates Realm of Odaar. Odaar was home to the Assassins Clan, This clan was lead by Rydonn. The clans most important member was probably Jax. Jax's power was unmatched he could destroy an army of 1000 demons with no fatigue. There shield was Lusina, she protected all members of the clan with her huge shield. She may not be as powerful Jax or Ior, but she can most certainly kick ass. Speaking of Ior that gets us to the Mage of the group. He has the ability to transform into an orb of absolute unbound energy. Finally, the leader Rydonn known as the Iron Revolver. "Why?" Because he never misses a shot with trusty revolver.
Sorry for crap lore!

Stats:

HP: 511-2016 HR: 8.4-16.8 Mana: 335-885 Ranged: 550 AD: 67-130 ATS: 0.635-0.740 Armor: 20-70 MR: 25-40 Mov.S: 370

(P) Flashy Finish! After scoring a kill on enemy champion Rydonn permanently gains 5 AD.

(Q) BANG BANG!!!! Rydonn Shoots 2 power shots at target champion slowing them by 25% and dealing physical damage.

Range: 700 CD: 9/8/7/6/5 seconds Physical Damage: 70/110/150/190/220 (+40% AD) Cost: 65 mana

(W) High Jump Kick/Backflip Rydonn dashes to traget enemy stunning them for 1 second and dealing physical damage. After succsesfuly landing a High Jump kick you can backflip for the next 4 seconds.

Range of Jump Kick: 600 Range of backflip: 300 Physical Damage: 40/60/100/130/150 (+50% AD) Cost: 50/70/80/90/100 mana CD: 16/15/14/12/10

(E) No Scope Rydonn Shoots a long range bullet exploding with it hits target enemy or collides with a wall. If this skill is used atl east 10 seconds after a back flip the bullet damage is doubled.

CD: 20/16/15/12/10 Range: 1120 Physical damage: 75/95/110 (+80% AD) Cost: 90 mana

(R) BA-BOOM BANG FLARE!!!! Rydonn Throws 6 bombs at target enemy then shots them twice then burns them on fire dealing magic damage.

CD: 140 seconds Range: 750 Cost: 130 mana Magic damage: 300/500/666 (+110% AP)

Feedback please!

2 Comments

LeifTheExplorer2/22/2016, 7:38:41 PM2 votes

At least you tried with the lore. Try to make the cross lore with Jax make a little more sense.

The kit is slightly overpowered/doesn't make much sense but honestly my biggest problem is that I don't think we need another champion like this.

Think about how many champions are "Cool guy with a cool gun" champions. If you thought of Caitlyn Gangplank Jhin Jinx MissFortune Quinn Tristana, your right. That makes up a decent part of the character pool.

I just think we need to branch out a bit, have more of your Oriannas, or Bards, and even Gragass or Kindreds.

The kit is fine, its the whole concept that bothers me.

I was wondering if you'd like an idea about how you should structure champion concepts. If so, take a look at my champion concept. It shows how you should present your idea in a readable and fashionable manner. Plus, if you'd like to leave some critique, I'd love that! Nefalz, The Herald of Silence