Champion concept and a twist on the marksman class i like to call gunslinger

ZeXian·6/11/2016, 6:37:57 PM·4 votes·584 views

so i love champion concepts and read a lot in this section of the boards, and i have come up with an interesting concept for a new marksman class, herei is his Name :Alexander-Schnitter Sex: Male Age: 19 Hight: 5,5 Weapon: 4 barrelled shotgun Weapon name :Herold Classification: marksman - gunslinger

                 Abilities

Passive: SHATTER SHOTS 

Black bullets shatter on impact into razor sharp shards that shreds the targets armor by 5% each shot After 4 shots must reload (1.5 second)

            Q: BUCKSHOT 

Fires all 4 shots dealing damage and knock backs target, Can not critically strike Closer the target greater the damage and knock back Must reload after

caped at 20% pen

   W: ERKENNEN / GEIST 

(Passive) geist: if Alexander kills a target during erkennen, he becomes stealthed for 3 seconds and gains boosted movement speed

(active) erkennen: Enhanceses his eyes to see targets that would be unseen for 5 seconds (stealthed, behind walls, bushes)

             E: SCHRITT 

Dash in a target direction, if Alexander collides with an enemy ability he can re activate within 1.5 second to dash to the target and instantly reloads

Ultimate: EXECUTION 4th caliber

Alexander loads Herold with 4 enchanted bullets for his next 4 shots to deal bonus damage , each shot will knock back the target to Alexanders max attack rang and explodes shredding 50% armor (can't stack) in a AOE radius

Q can be used during the Duration of the ability but uses all remaining bullets

this is the foundation of his kit and im shore you can see what i am going with and the synergy factors in the kit, pls leave any thoughts in the comments im very interested in what you might have to say ^_^

12 Comments

LSmaster166/11/2016, 10:29:25 PM2 votes

This looks pretty cool. I'm not sure if the e reactivation fits but it would be an interesting counter to poke lanes. Maybe let him use it while rooted to increase the numbrer of abilities he can engage off of. How does the q work with less than three shots? Also, the w and q sound really cool.

Maple Crusader6/11/2016, 7:13:54 PM1 votes

There is no Germany in LOL.

Keìron6/11/2016, 7:45:31 PM1 votes

Cool concept!! I will steal some ideas hihihi xD

Arakadia6/12/2016, 12:04:35 AM1 votes

Really awsome idea. A few things to mention though.

First, this guy is apparently from Germany which does not exist in RuneTerra afaik.

Second of all, I think his E should bechanged or give him a spell sheild, however he is already too safe so a spellsheild might make it worse. No marksman that isn't graves wants/can dive into a skillshot, especially going in melee range.

Also his whole kit makes him way too safe I think. He has a Quinn W, a dash which can become a long ranged blink, 5 knock backs (4 of which sound absurdly broken). Assassins and bruisers will not have any chance of sticking to him. His W also can make him stealthed.

His kit seems awkward for an adc. Why does he get stealth after he kills a unit? I mean thats not really gonna help him in lane besides engaging. But if your ganking someone you dont even have access to the stealth that you want when ganking or escaping.

Also his E encourages eating skillshots and diving into melee range. Unless this guy is supposed to be quite tanky, no adc wants to dive into a skillshot (Unless your sivir because she wont take damage or CC) and no adc wants to get into melee range. AoE 50% shredding is no joke, it might be balanced though. Does his ult shred stack with his passive?

Besides the fact that his E encourages face tanking and his W stealth won't help you when you need it most of the time, this guy has a really cool kit. His theme of hitting an enemey so hard that their literally knocked away really fits a cool theme. I think his W should be changed as the stealth after killing a unit won't help you when you need it. I think his E shouldn't let you teleport in melee range as no ranged squishy wants to be in melee range. And also maybe make the amount of bullets he can hold different as 4 is Jhin's type of number and his own fantasy. Otherwise this a really cool champion.

BrandTheBurning6/12/2016, 4:04:04 AM1 votes

seems like lucian,twitch and jhin combined ya know ?