Nanowrimo and League

So I'm attempting the nanowrimo this year. My story is really rough, I know, but I'm having fun with it. Most importantly, I'm using a bunch of league of legends references while doing so. Everything from places, world ideas, to character names have league references. I'd love for people to read it what I have so far and tell me what they think. I don't mind any constructive criticism.

Side note: I think this is the right place to post this sort of thing.