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-repost- New champ idea (original) Farenghar, The voids vanguard

FriendIy Psycho·10/17/2013, 7:52:46 PM·1 votes·901 views

-tags- Ranged - Mage - HIGH BURST CHAMPION Farenghar The voids vanguard

Voids blessing-Passive: After being sent below 40% health Farenghar enters a state of power gaining ability power based on his current level and 30 magic penetration for 30 seconds. L1-10ap L2-15ap L3-20ap L4-25ap L5-30ap L6- 10%ap based on current ap (remains 10% to level 18)

CIRCLE OF NOTHING-Q: Farenghar unleashes a circle of darkness (curved skill shot) damaging enemy units (50% of damage done to enemy champions will reflect a sheild on Farenghar) Dmg-60-120-200-250 Scaled .02 (mana cost 20-60-90-150) CDR- 6 seconds

SHINE OF DARKNESS-W: Farenghar summons a beam of darkness to come down on his enemy dealing magic damage and slowing any champion inside of it. Dmg-70-120-180-250- scale .02 (target ability) (mana cost 90-120-150-170) CDR- 12 seconds

Voids drain/Second thoughts-E: (passive) 10% of damage done to enemy units will restore Farenghars health (only abilities)(for example if his q hurts 100 damage it will heal Farenghar 10 health) . (on activated) Farenghar calls upon a delayed beam of darkness silencing all enemies it hits. Dmg-100-175-240-310 scale 0.5 (mana cost 70-100-130-160) CDR- 18 seconds

Nether drain-R: Farenghar conjures a giant hole leading to the void rooting all enemies that are inside/standing on it dealing magic damage every second for 2 seconds. Dmg- 350-400-500- scale 0.3 (mana cost 120-170) CDR: 112 seconds (rooting only 3 at most)

JOKE: (Sneezes) UGH! I’m allergic to those voidings!

TAUNT: The void is not welcoming to new guests……

TAUNT2: The void demands sacrifice!

TUNT3: resistance is futile!

WHEN Farenghar moves he will say…. “what I do, must be done…” “I will have vengeance against darkin” “My soul is incomplete.” “On your command.” “How shall I serve you?” LORE: Farenghar used to be a normal man… He had a family and friends just like any other. He lived in a small clan of barbarians where people where rough and harsh and lived by their own rules. Farenghar was unlike all of the people in his clan he had manners and kept his anger tamed. When his clan was attacked he fought bravely and hard with the magic’s that he learned from his studies. The invaders where something more than man… but they managed to fend the first wave of invaders off but then a darker figure appeared that the clan did not at all expect… a friend of Farenghar, Tryndamere jumped in at him and was mortally wounded by the dark figures blood thirsty sword. Farenghar became filled with anger and charged in with a powerful blast of light but before he could finish his spell he was rudely interrupted by the dark figure and was slashed with the mighty sword and fell into a dark empty space. From his studies he knew right away where he was. He was greeted by a purple figure named, Malzahar. Malzahar explained why he saved Farenghar saving him from traveling to the dark underworld. Farenghar could not speak.. he never imagined being in the void! Malzahar bestowed a gift upon Farenghar giving him immense power. Farenghar accepted Malzahars gift without hesitant. In what felt like just seconds Farenghar was standing in front of a fountain of purple fluid, all he had to do was consume what was in the strange fountain. He slowly drank the purple fluid and within seconds he felt searing pain. It lasted a few minutes. After the pain was over he felt strong, and powerful. floated upwards and felt anger and hate for the race that killed and murdered his family and friends. Malzahar looked at him dead in the eye and told him his responsibly and how serious it was. Farenghar nodded and said… “I will defend with my life and I swear on my families grave, I will not let you down.” “Real power is not how it fights but its will” –Malzahar- The profit of the void.

RECOMMENDED ITEMS Starting Dorans ring + one mana potion An example of a complete build:

Rabadons deathcap

Rod of Ages

Void Staff

Zhonyas hourglass

morrellinomicon

Liandrys torment

Base mana: 300

Base Health475

4 Comments

FriendIy Psycho10/17/2013, 7:53:12 PM1 votes

Please leave feedback This guy can really make it!!

Posle Ekho10/17/2013, 11:29:14 PM1 votes

I feel like his base damages are way too high if he has 1.0 ap ratio on almost every single skill. Also, if his ultimate provides such utility (rooting) his ultimate damage has to be GREATLY reduced.

ThatGuyNamedAce12/3/2013, 10:14:00 PM1 votes

I notice a few problems, as a fellow champ creator.

  • First, the scale CANNOT be 1.0. That's reserved for most AP character's ults and your base damage is so high, it makes a 1.0 scale way overpowered.

  • Circle of Nothing's Cooldown is just ridiculous. It's six seconds for a shield granting, difficult to dodge, AP powerhouse nuke ability... AT RANGE.

  • I feel like Shine of Darkness sucks, when compared to Circle of Nothing. You get a small damage increase, but loose the shielding effect, use more mana, and cost more cooldown... there would be no reason to really use this attack when your Q is just overall 300% better.

  • Again, the Damage on your W is unbelievable.

  • Just redo E all together... You keep stressing a ranged nuke. A silence + a solid 730 or so damage on a standard AP build in a line, hitting everyone is just... wow.

  • Do the math, the Passive on his E, with a standard build of around 600 AP, will restore 170 HP or so with a full burst. Not much, but look at it like this. You are getting 170 HP and dealing 3,410 to everyone hit.

  • His ult is just... No... too much damage... a 5 second root... area of effect... just why...

I'm sorry about all the negativity. I can be hard to balance a champ correctly. If you want a good example, check out my creation. Kasumi, the Artist Blade.