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[Character Concept] Acarnius; Dictator of Darkness. MUST SEE

DubleDice·12/10/2013, 2:56:22 AM·2 votes·1,221 views

Lore: Acarius was born and raised in the hellish city of Tornacura. His father, Abamiton, was the Leader of Hell at the time. Even though Acarius was to be heir to the throne, his father wanted more. Acarius was to be known as Ceaser of hell, from his father. Acarius was forced to train every day of his life to find his unique skill that would give him the edge to control such a demonic place. By late 2034 when a war between Hell and Heaven broke loose, Acarius was seen as a 14 year old boy that found against the Angels. As the battle fought out, one of the Key pins of heaven, the Angel of Destiny, struck down Abamiton and spilled his blood in front of Acarius. In raged, Acarius drew from the shadows and ripped the soul and blood from the angel with his Dark Power. Acarius slaughtered 4,986 Angels, and imprisoned 10,764. He was renowned King of Hell, but this wasn't enough for Acarius. The counsel that shared apart of the power was overthrown by Acarius himself, and he soon took the title "Dictator of Darkness". Acarius build the strongest empire of any empire to ever exist in all realms. When news came to Acarius that a new tournament featuring the strongest warriors from different worlds was to commence, Acarius knew he had to put all these competitors to their place, and become, not just the Leader of the underworld, but the Ruler of Realms.

Acarnius is a mage/fighter, who shares a distinctive similarity with Brand. He is squishy early game, but can control the game, mid game(if used correctly), and Late game(depending on build). His two best items are Athene's Unholy Grailitem 3174, and Zhonya's Hourglassitem 3157, because he is strongly AP. His defense is low and focused on because he becomes uber powerful when fed, but can easily be shut down. His best mastery build would be 21/9/0.

Picture: http://postimg.org/image/6w77fw5wz/ , This my my drawing, and interpretation of what he would look like.

Acarnius is a Male, 6'7, Fit individual.

Resource: "Dark Essence" 200(+5 per lvl) (For every bit of damage Acarius does with his basic attack, he gains +5-90 Dark Essence, which can be used to peruse abilities. His Dark Essence decay's little over time.)

Passive "Dictation": Acarnius Dictatorship of his army give him strength, for every Enemy Champion killed by Acarnius or his Ally Champs, he gains 10 ability power.

Basic attack: Throws a bolt of Darkness towards a targeted Enemy. Dealing 5(+ 8 per lvl)

Ability 'Q' "Unstable Rage": Acarius becomes filled with brutal, yet unstable, rage. Acarius gains 75% Crit chance, and Acarius's next attack deals +30(+3 per lvl). Reducing the time on all debuffs placed on him for 5%.(Cool-down: 8 seconds)(Lasts 10 seconds, unless Acarius attacks an enemy)(Dark Essence Cost: 10)(Ability type: Self induced)

Ability 'W'"Shadow Increment": Acarius has a 48x48 radius to teleport himself to. When the area is selected, Acarius dispersal and causes Dark mist you irradiate around his last location(for effect), the point at which Acarius appears, causes Dark mist to irradiate around him(for effect) and stuns and enemy Champs, and creeps that are 10x10 radius around him for 3 seconds. Causes 10(+.4 per lvl) Magic Damage.(Cool-down: 12 seconds)(Dark Essence Cost: 45) (Ability type: Radial)

Ability 'E' "Soul Steal": Acarius immobilizes himself, then slows the target, while pulling 165(850 when lvl 18) life, with his Dark Matter, from the enemy every 1 second for 3 seconds(can be disrupted if attacked). Causes 40(+1.3 per lvl) Magic Damage.(Cool-down: 10 second )(Dark Essence Cost: 55) (Ability type: Selected Target(In-Radius))

Ability 'R' "Prisoners of Hell": Acarius immobilizes himself, and charges power for 1.5 seconds then creates a dark circle, with the diameter radius that of Kennen's Ult, that emits Dark Mist, or smoke, from the ground in different places. If an enemy Champion is in the area of the Ult, the Champ has a picture of Hands with Cuff's around them and gains 40% slowness. The Ult lasts for 15 second and cannot be disrupted. If while his ult is still in use, Acarius has the option to Press 'R' again and select a enemy Champ that is inside of his ult area, if activated, Acarius stops his Ult, charges Energy for 1.5 second, then teleports to the targeted champ, dealing 90(+0.6 per lvl) Magic Damage. Causes Dark Mist to shoot out around the targeted champ when Acarius appears again for effect.(Cool-down: 90 second )(Dark Essence Cost: 125) (Ability type: Radial/Target Select(In-Radius))

Please tell me what you all think, and add upon to this idea to make it better, and hope that this character gets put on LOL , because that would be awesome! :D

Thank you all for reading

My IGN is GoHomeKidlol

Edit: I did a lot of reconstruction on this character, including a new lore, and changed abilities.

20 Comments

Crimson Hatchet12/10/2013, 3:00:18 AM1 votes

Bro first off, do not ever have a character start with ap. Next, focus on one point, not everywhere like with the poison. Give him a role. Like ranger/sniper or mid aggression.

DubleDice12/10/2013, 3:01:45 AM1 votes

I suppose that is a good idea, but he changes roles between ranged and Melee Wait XD I read your post wrong. I guess you are right. Exepct if he is the darkness himself, what would a good Passive be??? Also what do you mean never start off with ap??? arnt lots of char's Ap in LoL

Crimson Hatchet12/10/2013, 3:03:03 AM1 votes

like I said, a bit to much everywhere. Unless you could focus it down like jayce

Chosen Chozo12/10/2013, 5:07:17 AM1 votes

His values are really, really high if I'm reading that correctly. 1250 physical damage as a base skill? That's pretty crazy.

Also, hybrid building is sort of bad design as champs that can do both AP and AD fairly consistently are hard to build against (do you build armor or MR?). There are a few champs who can build hybrid effectively, but it takes them a while to get to that point where they are a threat. Most champions have one main damage type that they gravitate towards, even when they can build both. I'd suggest you consider him mainly dealing either AD or AP.

Honestly, the kit kind of seems like a mash of a ton of things, and I'm not understanding how he is meant to be played. Thematically he seems cool, but League already has a corruption champion by the name of Varus.

Edit: That's not to say it can't work. Is it possible you could explain your thought process behind his kit?

DubleDice12/10/2013, 6:05:24 AM1 votes

I will continue to rework this character over time. If anyone wanst to give me suggestions of what they would like to see done to this character, just comment. :D

DarkxLord12/10/2013, 9:07:45 AM1 votes

His W is a bit ridiculous. a free flash on a 12 second cooldown that stuns for 8.5 seconds AND does HUGE base damage? I don't think you realize how long 8.5 seconds is.

People cry about fiddle's fear being WAAAAAAY too long and it is a 3 second fear.

His E is also ridiculously overpowered. at level 18 its doing close to 2000 damage if they stay in range.

In fact his Ult is the weakest spell you gave him

Goldenelk59812/10/2013, 12:16:55 PM1 votes

Just a couple tid bits about his lore. Heir instead of air, throne instead of throan, fought instead of found and isn't his fathers name Abamiton? But the angel of destiny strikes down Tornacura which i believe is the city. Just a couple things...sorry im picky about that stuff sometimes XD. Overall through a very interesting concept and champion. I like it.

Dkayed12/10/2013, 12:45:01 PM1 votes

Ok, his auto attack are basically feathers, his Q is also basically a feather, his W is way too OP, his E is also way too OP, and his R isn't too bad, however not many of his abilities seem to synergisze well at all. Great concept, bad layout.

Choconilla12/10/2013, 5:04:09 PM1 votes

This is like some character concept from DOTA or HON... wayyyyyyy tooo unbalanced and weird

DubleDice12/10/2013, 10:23:44 PM1 votes

I will re upload this concept today so everyone can check it out